IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 60

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary era, there is an ongoing debate whether students should enhance their co-operativeness by participating in any competition or win-at-all-cost. This essay will explain both statements with reasons and examples.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think is a positive or negative development?

More countries are getting the same as soon as possible so people can buy everything in everywhere. This ability has some benefits although has a lot of disadvantages, I believe that it`s more negative and I will explain some deal for my opinion of viow.

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In yhe modern world people no longer need to use food or products from animals such as medicine and clothing. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Since ancient times, humans have used numerous products in their daily life made of animal skins and bones. As people evolve and technology gets more advanced, a variety of things are developed in the laboratory, using other modes to manufacture clothes, medicines. However, many companies are still dependent on wild animals for their manufacturing goods. I slightly agree with this statement.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, many people think that children should become competitive or they should be taught to co-operate. All people think that diverse. Moreover, many children are willing to be competitive or together and choose themselves.

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More and more people are leaving countryside to live in cities. Do more advantages or disadvantages of this development for environment

In today's modernized era and as we live in a captilist world, a huge number of individuals are deciding to move to the big cities. consequently, this leads us to pose a question, does the benefits of this phenomenon outweigh the drawbacks? From my perspective, this trend could have a noticeable detrimental impact on the environment which we need to be aware of it.

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News media is more influential nowadays. Some people think it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, news channels are influencing more than before, while some individuals argue that, they creating negative impact on people. In my opinion, I agree that news platforms are becoming more toxic rather than informative.

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The table with the percentage of students in six different departments in 2011.

The given table illustrates data on different aspects of student who took six different big time at an Australian University in 2011.

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In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is worsening. What possibly can cause this problem? What measures can be taken to resolve it?

In numerous nation, the standard of living is falling in large towns, which is making residents life inferior. There are several reason for this but mainly because of pollution, and junk food, to more extend there was few ways to eliminate these problem, government should restricted industrial factories of usage out dated machine and supply chain of junk food should be scarcity.

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nowadays it seems that different that different generations within the family spend less time doing activities together. why is that? is this a positive or negative development.

The day it seems that family members of different ages have less time to do together this essay will discuss the advantages of this trend

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few people have a opinion that teenagers should be required to have their studies until they reach the age of 18 years. I agree as well as disagree with the given statement and would like to mention the reasons below.

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The two floor plans show the renovation of AAA Accountancy's main office. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given floor plans illustrate how AAA Accountancy’s primary office changed after the renovation.

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some people belive that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. otheres, however, argue that the circumstances of an indivudual crime and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when diciding on the bunishment. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The topic of whether each type of crime should be punished equally or individual circumstances should be considered is definitely a controversial one. This essay may examine both views, and I personally believe that punishment should be brought out under discreet consideration.

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Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people support spending money on the motorways and street tracks. I disagree this problem because it is an unusual condition for me. I prefer local roads will smoothly.

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/ She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email, describe where you lived when you were a student at the university. Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation. Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation.

I hope you are doing well. I am delighted to know that you are going to pursue your higher education in the university where I have studied. I am writing this letter to provide some information about finding a place for your accommodation.

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Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In contemporary humans are becoming times which new helpfulnees technology for own. In family, parents when older want more help from children for their health, communicate and lifefulness. therefore more parents wants to know as this situation children must be stay with own or no?

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

Over the last few years, the number of people who prefer to speak English has increased significantly. Although there are several advantages to speaking English, it can be some disadvantages as well. In this essay, I will try to discuss both positive and negative sides.

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Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved

Statistics showed that there will be a significant rise in population of cities over the next decades. It is expected that the city will face problems such as, traffic congestion which will result in long time needed to reach to desired destination and transportion delays. This essay will look us through the problems that are caused due to overpopulation and the proper solution that can be implemented.

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Many people in cities today live in high-rise apartment blocks. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of living? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Over the last few years, the number of people who prefer yo some people in towns live in high rise apartment buildings has increased significantly. Although there are several advantages of that some individuals in towns life. However, it can have some disadvantages as well. In this essay, I will try to discuss both positive and negative sides of this and draw a conclusion.

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In many countries today, crime TV shows are becoming more popular/ Why do you think they are popular? What is ypur opinion of these shows?

In many nations, popularity of the crime shows becoming tremendous.This is because of the preference of the population majority enjoy detective genres.However, I do believe that these programs exceed the number of crimes in society.

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Shopping habits depend more on your age group than anything else. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this essay, we are going to discuss about the relation between shopping habits of people based on their age groups. How they are associated? Is there any dependency between both?

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