IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 11

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Nowasdays, there are many people do not know who their neighnours are. This essay aims to discuss what issues caused by the unfamiliarised relationship in the neighbourhood and suggest some the solutions to deal with the related problems.

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Some people think that schools should invest more money in technology , such as more computers , while others think more money should be spent on teacher Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Schools plays an essential role for development of children's carrier. Because of this , there is ongoing debate regarding the money to be spend either on technology or teacher. In my opinion , due to inculcate of moral values and helping to build discipline and system for children by tutor, claiming them to spend money on them will be the most apropos choice.

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students should be encouraged to questionsvand offer criticism to their teachers. Other think this will lead to a loss of respect discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Meathod of learning from teacher is differ from one student from another student. Some people think that open discussion with teacher, asking him question and sometimes suggest him about education brings positive things for learning where other argue that asking question and provide sugesition is a ungrateful activities. In my opinion, asking question to teacher and give positive feedback is necessary but one should maintain respect as well.

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Some people think that mental health is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

It is often thought that phsychological health is the most crucial key for success in sports, whereas others argue that having a strong team ,and being physically ready is more important. This essay will discuss both perspectives before epressing my own view that both of these proposals are essential as it is necessary to think postively, and also to train hard.

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- With the increased global demand for oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

There is no denying that the global demand for oil and gas keeps rising. Some argue that, in order to answer the need, unexplored areas of the world should be open to ensure more resources. I strongly disagree with this position.

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Nowadays, a lot of people want to receive everything in short amount of time. why is this ? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In these days, demand for achieving everything which is available on earth is widespread among youth. Especially reaching success effortlessly and immediately. In my perspective this is a positive growth. In this essay, I will explain my view and give my opinions.

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You recently had something delivered to your home. You now realise the person who delivered it damaged something in your home while they were delivering the item.

I am writing to express my concern regarding a recent delivery made to my home on October 10th, 2025. The delivery was for a washing machine that I had ordered from HomeTech Appliances, and it was handled by your company.

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1.⁠ ⁠Long distance flight consumes the amount of fuel that a car uses for many years and pollutes the air. Some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourists travel, rather than limit the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an argued that some people think that the flights are the reason of air pollution and we should use the airplanes only for important reasons and limit the use of cars. This essay is totlly disagree, because in my opinion, travel the tourists by the airplans are crucial because it helps to rise the economic of the countries, also we have to consider that there are many other reasons for the air pollution.

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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either, to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also see some difficulties discuss of advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.

The topic of living in other countries has been controversial. Whilst many advocate that young people significantly move to other countries to chase their drem jobs or study for a long periods, others argue otherwise. Personally, I am inclined to the view that the merits outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people think that there are things individuals can do to prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a different. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recently years, global climate change has been a heated issue in human community all around the world. Some people hold the view that everyone can make a effort to protect our climate from getting worse wheras others believe that it is the governments should take the resposibility to make a change. As for as I am concerned, both individuals and our governments should take an action regardless of small or big to contribute to global climate change.

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In some countries, there is an increase in the number of parents who educate their children at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays there are many countries that is getting up the number of parents teaching yours kids at home. I think this has some positive and negative sides. The positive is the children will spend more time with their parents but in another hand they are not spend time with other kids.

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Some people think that renewable energy sources like solar and wind power should replace fossil fuels such as coal and gas as soon as possible. Others think we should continue to use fossil fuels while it is still cheap to do so. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Apart from traditional sources of energy, such as fossil fuels like natural gas and coal, producing energy from renewable sources has been increasingly popular. Some people support the idea of replacing fossil fuels with renewable energy sources in power generation, while some think fossil fuels should remain in use. This essay believes that the increased usage of renewable energy can benefit public health, but it is worth considering that fossil fuels power are cheaper and have a higher accessibility.

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Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the current modernized era, people are increasingly concerned about children

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IELTS 8 - Exam 2 - Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

In this contemporary scenario, owing to the advanced technology, a considerable alteration has been observed in the terms of intraction by the individuals. I personally believe that technology intend to strenghten the relationship regardless the distance and allows the people to do multitasking. That is why, it is a favorable change.

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most high level -position in companies filled by men even through the workforce in many developed countries is more 50% female companies should be required to allocate certain % of these portion to women

Its argued that firms should be legally required to appoint a certain proportion of females to high-level positions. This essay agrees with that statement , because women are capable of doing a job to the same level as men ,and females are performing boys in many university courses.

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Some people think that the individuals who make the most money are the most successful. Others believe that the most successful are those who contribute to society, such as scientists and teachers. Discuss both perspectives and give your opinion?

Meaning of success is different from person to person. One on hand, a group of people think that a lot of money can bring success to them, on the other hand, other thinks by doing something for society for example, serve education, treatment etc. could bring the real success. The essay will examine the both statements and provide a personal opinion.

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The internet is an amazing invention which has changed the world. Some people think that the changes are all positive, while others think that it is negative. Give the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.

The world, in fact, society, has changed a great deal because of the internet. Some people think that it has made life easier and positive. Others believe it causes problems. This essay will examine both the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.

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wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree.

There some countries who suffer from poverty and they can't help themselvs, so poeple believes that richer nations must give them some assit and help wether it's financial or even physical help. The essay agree with the statement, because we are human can feel the same, second this help can effect them as they can get some other benefit from the country rather than money.

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Some people think that school children need to learn practical skills such as car maintenance or bank account management along with their academic subjects at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A certain group of people believe that pupils should learn real-life skills like car maintenance or bank account management with their day-to-day subjects at school. I totally agree with this notion, because, someday or another , students will have to face the real world and learning such jobs will prepare them early.

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Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main source in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative source of energy (wind and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary world, usage of fossil fuels are commonly observed in many nations, leading global warming consequences to increase. While some countries are try to switch to generating sustainable energy from wind, solar, and water, I personally believe that the advantages of this action will far exceed the disadvantages.

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