IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 11

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that people who are criminals should be punished because they have broken the law, these penalties should be fixed for for each crime. while some others say this should be considered this crime for the motivation and the circumstances. I think that setting a single penalty for each type of crime will be a long process.

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some people think that the government should knockdown old buildings and make a way for new buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

The demolishing of old buildings have brcome a debetable issue. A few indiviuals opine that the conventional structures should be tear down to built up contemporary structures by legal authorities. I disagree with the the given notion and the reasons for this would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, there has been increasing number of people who claim that it is impossible to achieve desireble goals without appropriate skill called risk taking, both in career lives and personal. In this essay, I am going to descuss both views, before choosing which side is outweighing one another.

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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assigments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, with the rapid development of technology and internet, an increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school. Undoubtedly, this trend has both advantages and disadvantages. The impending paragraphs will discuss the both sides.

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Despite evidence that certain types of food are harmful, many people choose to eat unhealthy food. What do you think are the causes of this problem and measures can be taken to solve it?

It is argued that certain type of dietary patterns lead to negative health outcomes. Eventhough, evidence suggests certain types of diet might have harmful consequences they continue to consume the diet regardless. In this essay I will discuss the causes and will provide measures to prevent it.

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Some people believe that residents are responsible for keeping the roads clean and others say that it is the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Roads are important in our lives when we go in different places without hassles. It is important to make it clean and safe to use all the time. Whilst some would say that roads should be clean by the people around that area, some would tell that it is also the responsibility of the government to maintain the cleanliness of the road. I believe that the two sectors are responsible in maintaining the safety and cleanliness of the road.

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#Crime | #Education - In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest?

In recent times, there are many problems that trachers suffer from student's behaviour. Social media and bad relationship are the main causes of this issue. This essay will outline the main causes of student's behaviour and what are the best solution to reduce this bad behaviour.

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Some people thnk that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that men's jobs are different from women's jobs,and vice versa. They also believe that the reason behind this is their different qualities. But some people strongly disagree with this point of view.However,I will be discussing both views.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge & experience

People have different views about the study locations of children, some people suggest that the home is better for children to learn, while others believe that children should study in the school.

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Felixstone Construction Maps Between 1967 and 2001

The two figures show the main changes that had taken place in the Felixstone area between 1967 and 2001. Overall, it can be seen that the Felixstone area had become a much more urbanized location with far more urban and recreational facilities.

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Some people believe that unpaid community activity service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood, or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It may seem that, few individuals believe that schools should implement unpaid community for instance, charity work,neighbourhood improving and some more social works. In this essay i will discuss how important it is to implement such great services and how it will improve the childrens life.

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Some people believe that unpaid community activity service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood, or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued unpaid social activity services should be part of the school curriculum . Whereas others do not believe in this nation. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the idea due to several reasons that will be discussed in this essay.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given map illustrates the changes of the southwest airport before and after the renovation, which is planned to be done next year.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Other think that adult brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some group of people guess that the minors have the happiest time in their live. Other suppose to the adult keeping the most engoying time during their life.

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Community Library Survey Your local library is surveying the community on ways to raise funds so that the library can remain open 7 days a week. There are two options being considered. One option is to increase fines for overdue books. The other option is to charge library members a small annual fee.

Personally, I consider that the best option will be an increase in the fines for overdue books. Whereas some argue that paying for an annual library membership could be a suitable idea, I disagree since this idea may have a higher impact on the community.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes effects of this disturbing trend.

In western countries in the last decade, the percentage of childhood obesity has grown by twenty percent. The cause of this phenomenom is lack of movement and poor diet. Obesity can lead to being bullied and low self-esteem, as well as affecting the health.

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Some people think that competition at work at school and in a daily life is a good thing.Others believe that we should try to cooperate more rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Competation in the sphere of work and education can be invaluable as working with a group of people.Although there are both positive and negative aspects of working as a team I firmly believe competation can maintain peoples' weak sides while working with contrary person.

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Question-fossil fuel ,such as coal, oil and natural gas, are the main source for many countries however some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind powe. do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays majority of countries in the world utilise non-renewable energy as their main source whereas some developed countries such as the UK use eco-friendly energy sources like sun, and wind. In my point of view, there are more pros than cons.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

It goes without saying that nowadays phones are widely used by many people, including children, frequently on the daily basis. This essay will put forward the reason why this trend brings utterly negative impacts.

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Topic: Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree

To put the ful stop on the illegal activities strict rules should be made by authorities. It is suggested by some individuals that death penalities should be given to the lawbearker to reduce the unlawful acts. Forthcoming writing will shed some points justifing the above discussed scenario.

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