IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 11

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that police force carries guns, this encourage higher level of violence in that society. To what extend do yo agree or disagree?

In light of protecting citizens, police force carries guns to take mesures on emergency or chaotic crimes. However, there are some opinions which disapproved the efficency of taking guns to suppress the growth of crimes. Instead, a higher level of violence in society is encouraged under such circumstances. I agree with those opinions to a small extend.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and joining universities. What are the advantages or disadvantages?

In this contemporary era, it is frequently seen that people of a young age take a year gap between their high school and college. However, there are some drawbacks to this trend , such as a habit of overspending and insufficient academic performance. Children also develop skills like financial wisdom and foreign cultural values , which cannot be neglected.

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In some time countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

In this contemprory era, it is frequently seen that people of young ages take a year gap between their high school and college. However there are some drawbacks to this trend such as habit of overspending and insufficient academic performance, children also develop skill like financial wisdom and foreign cultural values which cannot be neglected.

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Most career choices demand vocational skills or specialist knowledge. However, despite this, most schools still teach academic subjects such as history or social studies. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued that nowadays, although most career preferences require vocational abilities or theoric specialization, most schools receive academic education such as history or social studies. This trend could have both positive and negative consequences; however, I would argue that demerits of this issue are more than merits.

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Nowadays children are undisciplined because their parents are busy with their career.” To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What could parents do to build a sense of discipline among children?

There is a growing topic about the undisciplinary actions of children claiming as the result of parents being more focused on career rather than child education. I am partly agree with this idea, because other factors such as school and friendzone also plays significant role on shaping kid's behaviours. However, parents can may adress this issue by setting fixed schedule and daily routine for children, also by praising them and being kind.

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In many countries, childhood obesity is a growing problem. What are the reasons for this and what can individuals and governments do to tackle the problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Over the four decades, obesity is a risen heath issue, especially between the childhood age citizens across the Globe. The governments and individuals attemp to prevent this wide spread problem for the new generations well-being. From my perspective, there are some reasons to lead this problem and are some possible solutions also.

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Some people believe that governments should have access to people’s mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people support the idea that, the authorities , especially governmets, should have free control over individuals' own cell phones and be able to check their personal records , like calls and messages , for safety reasons. On the other hand, others believe that this could only be possible, when that person gives permission for that action. In my perspective, privacy and protecting individuals' secrecy is crucial for social integrity and could only be possible by permission.

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Art classes should be compulsory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

The debate surrounding art curriculums should be compulsory in school has become a contentious issue, with opinions diverging significantly. Although there are compelling arguments on both sides. I firmly align with the view that it is necessary to make art class to be compulsory, for several reasons.

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Some people believe that planting trees should be the main priority in urban areas rather than building new housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, rapid development of urban expansion has raised a concerning debate about whether complex of cities should be used for planting trees or constructing accommodations.

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Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people agrued that people who have looking a job for long time should do voluntary work for sociel, meanwhile they are reciept benefits from government. In this essay , I will descibe this topic with my reasons and the demonstate to support my view.

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The older you get, life becomes more difficult. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Old age is the period of life which is often considered to be a difficult phase. There are several reasons for this view such as diminished state of health and financial hardships. This essay will further discuss on these factors have an impact on oldage.

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The number of refugees and immigrants is increasing? What are the possible cause and effects this provide specific reasons and example to support your answer .

"The amount of redugees and immigrants is rising".This statement displays a situation of indivisuals who are leaving there own country for a better way of living, and it asks about the reason why and what will it cause eventually. I will back up my oppinion with logical reasons.

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Instead of revealing the truth, the mass media very often misguides people. What are the reasons behind this and the visible effects on the society at large?

It won't be a surprise to say that information gotten from mass media pretty often can't be called reliable. Everybody accept missinformation and fake news as a part of daily life. People get irritated by it, but still don't tend to change anything. Even more, though every person seems to be aware of it, lots of them still believe in this fakes time to time. So why does this happens?

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Recently, there is viral idea about the weekdays and weekend for the worker . Some people find short working week better than short weekend and others argue this idea. From my prospective, I have balanced opinion.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this question. Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There are many types of sports, which are played by athletes at the national and international levels. However, some believe plays are crucial for learners throughout their studies, while some do not like the choice for students. I appreciate both views , but i consider that sports are more important for the mental health of students.

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Should rich nations help poor nations, if so in what ways?

In this era, two kinds of nation in the world, developed countries have more facilities for their people, so most of people are wealthy. In contrast, poor countries don't have enough baughet to give enough facility to their poor people. In my perception, digitalized countries can help poor nations by providing charity for hospitals. In additional, they can help them in education moreover, also by giving them subcity on agriculture machines and road making instrument.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during their working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Most of the office workers don’t get exercise during the daytime when they are in the working place and they don’t get exercise during leisure time. So, they tend to get serious health problems. The main reason is sedentary life style. We can introduce different short-term and long-term plans to overcome this problem such as, organizing sports events and mass health education programs.

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Many people aim to achieve a balance between work and other parts of lives, but few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problem? How to overcome it?

Work-life balance is becoming more and more widespread in many parts of the world, yet many individuals are not able to achieve it. There are several reasons that lead to this outcome , and there indubitably are various elucidations for this matter.

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Nowadays,shopping has become an unavoidable activity among youngsterswhich has suppressed many essential exercises needed for individuals. Do the merits of the given trend outweighs the demerits?

Of late, shopping has grown progresssively as an integral element in the life of the younger generation, for which they are even willing to compromise their health. Considering the deleterious effects of consumerism, I strongly believe that the negative impacts of this lifestyle require genuine attention.

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Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve the poverty. So rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

First-world countries usually make money donations to third-world countries, however, it does not solve poverty. Thus, they should assist the poorer nations by different kinds of aid. Personally, I tend to strongly agree with this statement.

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