IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 290

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The use of illegal drugs, such as heroin and cocaine, are becoming more and more common in many countries. What are the problems associated with drug abuse, and what are some possible solutions?

It is certainly true that illegal and harmful substances are increasingly being used by people who seek for an easy way to unwind and relieve their stress. There are a number of considerable dangers with regards to this matter, and various actions can be taken both by governments and individuals to improve the situation. This essay will discuss negative aspects of drug abuse and will suggest some solutions to address the problem.

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Success is often measured by wealth and material possessions. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

Some people measure accomplishment by how much money one person owns or assets that he has.However, richness is not the best way to describe achievement.There are several reasons that can make a person succeed.

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

The percentage of plants and animals is decreasing in most countries. This essay will discuss as to why this is happening, which is due to the intervention of us as humans. This issue could be solved by raising awareness as well as, conservating these critters and plants.

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Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the filed, as long as they are playing well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is a contentious argument over whether athletes can misbehave on or off the field, as long as they are practising their sports well or not. I totally disagree with the statement due to the fact that these athletes should reflect the sports team that they are representing. In this essay, I am going to discuss the reasons why I disagree with this statement.

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In order to improve a country’s education system, young students should be allowed to openly criticize their teachers during class time. What is your opinion? What are some other ways education systems could be improved?

Many people are of the opinion that in order to improve the information system, recruitment should not criticize their faculty. All people support the idea that the student should not criticize the educator, as this violates the appreciation between the student and the tutor.I will give my personal opinion on that idea.

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Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Most people agree that cities should give the right graffiti designers to show their skills in public spaces, While others do not prefer to allow that type of art on the walls of the street. Personally, I believe that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti, I feel that for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

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In spite of techological advancement made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Food is one of the human basic needs. However, with current technological advancement in the agriculture sector, many people still consider food a luxury due to its scarcity. This essay will delve into the underlying reason for this issue and suggest potential solutions to tackle this.

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Nowadays, some older people choose to live in the retirement communities with other people, rather than living with their adult children. Is it a positive or negative development?

How to spend a life after retirement is arguably one of the most crucial decisions. While some would prefer to continue to stay with their children, I firmly believe that the advantages of embarking on the second part of their lives in a new community composed of retirees should not be overlooked.

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Task 2: In many countries people increasing talking about money (how much they earn or how much they pay for things) in their daily conversation. Why? It is a positive or negative trend?

The fact that in some nations citizens growing up communicating about money which become a hot topic in many individual’s day-to-day lives. In general, it is a negative trend.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

In today's world, most people are oblivious to their neighbors in vast cities. This essay will discuss the main causes of it including the lack of effort and the difference in cultures, as well as values. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including, taking the initiative first.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.

In some countries, teenagers are advised to have a year gap for working or traveling before starting university studies. This trend would create certain benefits but there will also be drawbacks.

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In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Despite international tourism has been a relevant income for the economy of a vast of countries, it has also produced disadvantages. I consider that drawbacks such as gentrification, and the loss of biodiversity surpass the benefits of economic growth.

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In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?

In a number of countries, there is an increase in the percentage of juvenile crimes. In my opinion,there are several reasons behind this situation, and some practical solutions should be implemented to such a problem.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Other, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety.** Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

According to some masses, significant penalties might be useful to control traffic accidents while other people believe that taking effective steps is the solution to ensuring road safety. I personally opine that, some effective measures would be a noticeable example of maintaining the safety of roads.

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The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.

Over the last decade there has been a massive rise in the level of crime committed by teenagers in a number of countries. It is important crucial to establish why this has happened and to look at ways to solve the problem.

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Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages? Two of each at least

As our world is becoming increasingly globalized, individuals are now more willing and able to find employment opportunities far from their birthplaces than at any other point in our history. Although this trend has certain drawbacks, I believe the advantages are greater.

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In some countries, an increasing number of children are overweight or obese as a result of eating too much fast food. Banning fast food from school canteens is the best way to flight this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today's fast-paced time, many kids suffer from overweight or obesity and unfortunately their number is rising due to consuming a large amount of junk food. Some researchers argued that this type of food should be prevented from schools to solve this problem. In my opinion, I agree that this solution could be effective during a part of the kids' life, but, for sure, there should be other steps followed to terminate this issue and keep the health of the Youngs.

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Some people like to spend their leisure time after work with their coworkers while others like to keep their private life separate from work. Discuss both sides.

Nowadays individuals prefer to enjoy their free time with colleagues at work. in contrast, others choose not to mingle between their private life and professional life. This essay will discuss both views hence I feel that for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging.

A group of people believe that retailers and industries should be responsible to reduce the waste of packing in their products. Another group think that the customers should assume this resposibility, by avoid buying goods with a lot of container. Firstly, it is a fact that materials used to pack products that people buy on everyday-life, such as paper or plastic, is a critial problem to the environment. These kind of materials normally are non-biodegradable and the final destination can be rivers, oceans, and forests.

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Serious violent crimes among people who are under-18 are becoming more common. Some people think that children who commit serious crimes should be treated like adults, while others would say that they should be rehabilitated. Disucss both these views and give your own opinion.

Heinous crimes are increasing these days among the youth. While a section of society believes these children must be punished similarly to adults as they pose a serious threat to society. Others are of the view that they should be sent to rehabilitation centres. I believe later is the better option as these youngsters are not aware of their wrongdoings.

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