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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

It is often argued that advertisements play a significant role to buyers and often provoke them to spend unnecessarily. Conversly, other segment of people believe that media companies educate buyers about latest trend, that could uplift our lives. My perspective inclines with the notion that media has both pros and cons on customers; however, the benefits are more as it instills convenience and betterment in users lives.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

People always desire to buy something, especially products that are costly and unnecessary; so, many are ended up in debt just to get something they can not afford.

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In many countries, the government prioritizes economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this

Economic growth receives more attention than other concerns from the governments in many states all over the world. This essay will delve into the pros and cons of this prioritization.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that promoting Products on television attracts society to buy unnecessary things. while others believe that advertising is a basic marketing strategy of any business. However, I think that fancy ads can Force individuals to Purchase unessential products.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

Many folks spend their lifetime in jobs for which they have no liking for and for which they are not suitable.This essay will discuss reasons behind this tendency and outcomes of such a scenario.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give the reasons and relative examples upon your own experiences.

Nowadays education is the essential thing for improving the society. Some citizens believe that parents should teach children how to be a good part of the community . While , others, think this can not be the duty of parents and school is the place to learn this .

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The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut subjects such as arts and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on subject such as information and technology. To what extend do you agree?

In todays globalized world, learning of Information Technology has become everyday need. However, it is also worth of consideration to remove some lesson such as arts and music. In my perspective, removing some subjects and focusing on certain lesson are not a good way . The author would discuss the lack of arts and music learning for our future generation such as loss of identity and reducing patriotic feelings.

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Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources,while others think it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There is an ongoing debate among people who think that studying space is a waste of value,whilst some people think it is crucial for our world to continue to explore the other world beyond our planet. In my opinion,this question is one of the most significant and valuable for mankind and we should explore space.

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Some people say that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environment pollution . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's digital era, there are some new technological devices in order to serve the individual’s daily life. Otherwise, these benefits cause some problems, which cause a rise in illness and disease ratio, which is prevented by governments in many countries by concentrating on reducing pollution and the greenhouse effect. In this essay, I totally agree with this statement.

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As the political and social conditions around the world are transforming, the trend of immigration is increasing day by day. What do you think what can be positive and negative impact of immigration?

A lot of individuals in society choose an internet connection to communicate with their families rather than physical visits. So, this attendance has many positive sides and lots of downsides.

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Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

Zoos used to be very popular, but now they are becoming faded. Because the artificial habitats are not suitable for many species and there are some accuses of exploiting entertainment, many people believe that zoos should be closed as soon as possible. Establishing more wildlife sanctuaries and rehabilitation centres would be a good solution if zoos are removed.

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In these modern days, some people believe that everyone should have access to schools and universities, regardless of their economic backgrounds. In this essay, I will explain the reasons why I fully agree with the opinion.

Firstly, free education ensures everyone has the opportunities to pursue knowledge and career. Consequently, people could contribute their knowledge and expertise to society. Moreover, it could affect economic growth and innovation, leading to a more prosperous society overall. For instance, in Singapore, education is pretty affordable to the citizen. As a result, most Singaporeans are really educated and Singapore would be able to be one of the richest countries, while only having a small region and limited natural resources. Now, Singapore's highest exports are their expertise to other countries and they have a lot of big companies providing employment to their citizen and others.

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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world and what effects does it have on the people concerned and society as a whole?

Evidence suggests that today, not having any education is become a concern in plenty of nations all over the world.This phenomenon is attributed to a number of causative factors, but the resulting issues are evident as well.

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Banking and banks. The role of banks in the modern world. Large banks and their functioning. Working with clients. Payment Methods.

Banking and banks are very important for the functioning of the modern world. Without banks the way we use money would not work. Banks enable people to save money, borrow money and to pay for things with ease and security.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situationsuch as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

We all face ups and downs in our lives.It is argued by some folks that the hardship is a part of life and one should remain content with the circumstances while others believe that we should make an effort to make things better.This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion that it is worthwhile to try to improve the worst situation.

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It has become easier and more affordable for people to travel to other coutries. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples from your experience

With the innovation of techonology, visiting coutries around the world required less effort and money. Personally, I believe it positively contributed to the development of individuals and their society.

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Topic 1: Young adults are now choosing to wait until later in life, often until they are in their 30s, to settle down and get married. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Due to the promotion of higher education pursuit and the focus on the job success, there are more and more people choose to get married in their later life, often in their 30s. Some may believe it brings positive benefits while some have the opposite belief.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, people are becoming progressively concerned with the subject relating to homeschooling. It therefore leads to the debate that we as parents should delegate authority to educators to deal with our children's issues or is it our duty to take action for the sake of them. In this essay, I will discuss both views, express my opinion on the topic and give out some reasons why I think so.

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In the past, most working people had only one job. However, nowadays, more and more people have more than one job at the same time. What are the reasons for this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of having more than one job?

It is becoming more common to find individuals who work in several jobs at the same time these days, whilst in the past, most workers used to have only one employment. This essay discusses the reasons behind this phenomenon, and the merits, and drawbacks to this.

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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

Why are examinations conducted in the first place? It provides the proof of knowledge. Analysis of knowledge can be evaluated in a lot of different ways and I don't believe that the traditional system is the perfect way to do this. This point will be justified by discussing the way students work around using memorization method and syllabus not being updated every year.

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