IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1260

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Nowadays, People think money is everything, and the can be only happy if they earn or have excessive money. In this essay we will discuss why this is the case and how money can make people happy and also there are other think in the world that also brings happiness to individual’s life.

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Nowadays a lot of young people use social media. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern era, with the advancement in technology teenagers are influenced to use applications like Facebook, what's app and Instagram. In my ,opinion Although this trend has numerous benefits the demerits preponderate over merits . In this ,essay i will explain this trend with relevant ideas and examples

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Nowadays children have too much freedom,some people say.To what extent do you agree or disagree.Give your opinion with examples.

In this modern era, childrens are likely to live freely according to their perspective. Few people argue that today's generation have too much freedom. I partially agree with the given statement. In this essay i will discuss this view point of view in detail with relevant ideas and examples

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can gov and individuals take to tackle the issue.

The greenhouse effect is one of the major issues humankind is facing and its effect can be seen throughout the world. But still, Factories and Big corporations haven't taken any drastic measures to help tackle the issue. The coming paragraphs will discuss the causes and prevention methods to suppress the greenhouse effect.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach behaviour to children?

Some people believe that children should be punished as to teach them the difference between a good and a bad behaviour. I vehemently disagree to this opinion for the reasons that I will outline in this essay and I also recommend modern ways for teaching their kids discipline.

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Some people think that learners should adopt technology in their education.others believe that this technology is causing more damage than good.

A couple of individuals hold the view that technology should be embraced by students in their education, whereas others argue that it is becoming more harmful rather than being beneficial.

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In some countries, most people perfter to rent thier homes rather than buying them. what are advantage and disadvantage of renting home?

In many part of the world, major proportion of individuals prioritizing renting houses rather than owning one. The essay discusses both benefits and drawbacks of this phenomenon.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Computers have become a prevalent tool nowadays both at work and in our daily life. Therefore, it is argued that computers should be considered the most significant invention in the contemporary era.

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Educating young people is naturally important. However, some think governments ought to invest more in education for adults in need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education for teenagers is essential and crucial, however some people believe the government should provide education to adults and this essay agrees with this statement.

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Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years. Why do you think this has happened? Is it a possitive or negative development?

Shopping is one way for people, nowadays, to spend their free time. However, several shopping retails have gone closed in the previous years. There are quite some reasons why this trend is existing. To my thinking, this phenomenon is either advantageous and disadvantageous.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people enunciate the idea that immigrants could get into enormous trouble including society and practice when they could not communicate in a foreign country where their mother-tongue language cannot use, I totally concur with this view because language is a key to immersing in the community and proving themselves.

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Multination companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

The pie charts provide information on how families in South Korea and Singapore spend their income on different categories percentagewise in the years 2000 and 2020. Overall, Singaporeans spent most of their income on housing and spent the least amount of money on health care. While housing also accounted for the majority of money spent by South Korean families in the year 2020; it accounted for much less in the year 2000.

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In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

Over the past few decades, relationships between neighbours have completely changed. I believe, there are cultural and financial difference which cause this problem. However, there are appropriate recommendations to change this trend.

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The length of the working week does not reflect modern lifestyle needs, it should be substantially reduced to give people more leisure time with their families, how far do you agree with this statement,

There is a belief that working hours in a week does not reflect our needs in modern life, therefore it should be limited, so that we can spend time with our families. I strongly agree with this point of view, because people can not spend time and enjoy meals with their families due to long work hours.

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giving children and adolescents pocket mkney is common throughout the world. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this practice and give your own opinion.

Providing minors and kids pocket money is a traditional practice throughout the globe. In this essay, I will explore the advantages and disadvantages of this trend. Firstly, I will up weigh the advantages of petty cash and moving forward, I will discuss the disadvantage of that allowance.

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Nowdays, many people have to work long time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What employers can do to make their life easier?

In this cutting-edge Era, many individuals are working longer than they used to be before as a result more stress. There are several reasons for this to happen. This essay discusses the causes and possible solutions for this phenomenon.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crimes” Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In current society,most of the people are involved to do wrong things to live a better lives.So the majority people believe that it is needed to increase the duration of prison sentence inorder to decrease the crime rate while others claim that there are options to reduce the crime rate. In my opinion, people should have chance to understand their crimes and make them correct on their own.

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In many countries, few younger generation is attending for musical concerts and theaters physically. Why ? Should we encourage to attend more ?

Most of the nations, Physical participation has been reduced in musical events and cinemas amoung the youth. There are various factors behind this such as resources and availability of certain time. In this essay I will give solution to why its needed to encourage our younger generation to participate more physically.

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In many countries, few younger generation is attending for musical concerts and theaters physically. Why ? Should we encourage to attend more ?

Musical events and cinemas has been less popular among youth who wish to attend physically in most communities. In this essay I will discuss the reasons and why it's need to encourage younger generation to attend such events.

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The unpaid community services (such as teaching children sports or working for the charity) should be made a necessary part in college programs. To what extent do you agree?

It is a belief that volunteer work should be a mandatory syllabus in the university degree because it would not only beneficial to the student, but also to society. Therefore, I have a high opinion of the same.

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