IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 30

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many people try to balance work and other parts of their life. However, this is very difficult to do. What are the problems associated with this? What is the best way to achieve a better balance?

While many strive to fill the gap between work and life balance, they mostly fail to attain what they wish. This is mainly due to the lack of plan along with motivation, and can be tackled best by consulting and finding the wrong spot in everyday routine.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Currently, in many countries, a wide spectrum of populations is made of youths in comparison to old people. Although this may include some demerits such as youth exploitation and lack of skilled people, I believe merits are greater, such as economic prosperity and governmental profit, and I believe pros outperform cons.

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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. Do the advantages of living in a foreign country outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, individuals are increasingly going to other countries to live for a significant period of time, either for employment or education. I personally believe that despite encountering unsuitable weather condition, the benefits of migrating to foreign countries outweigh the drawbacks because it enhances the adaptability of people and opens up a lot of opportunities regarding employment and education.

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Some people believe that academic success depends on good teachers, while others argue that it depends on the attitude of the student. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been a heated debate over whether great adademic results should rely on good teachers or the attitude of students.In my opinion,not only good teachers but also the students' attitudes and motivations that contribute to better school grades.

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Some people belive that university education should only be offered to those who can pay for their own courses and the government should not be expected to fund higher education. to what extent do you agree?

It is argued that many individuals assert that university is only for those who can afford their own courses , and the government cannot fund higher education. However, I strongly disagree with this statement for several reasons .

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The pollution is increasing day by day, suggest some solutions.

The most conspicuous trend of today's world is a colossal upsurge in blight in almost every part of the world, thanks to modernization. There are myriad consequences of the dirtying, which will be discussed with some potential solutions in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is argued that the significant environmental challenge is the extinction of special sorts of animals and herbs nowadays. However, others believe that there are more essential issues to be addressed in this field. In my opinion, all the problems related to the global well-being should be assessed simultaneousely.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that I firmly agree with that workers should be provided with a longer weekend and a shorter working week because it creates an avenue for a better balanced work-life and it can help reduce depression.

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Some argue that schools should prioritize life skills such as working teams solving problems instead of traditional academics

Most individuals believe that schools should specialize in life skills such as working as a team, tackling problems rather than traditional academics. This essay will explore this statement and explain why I completely agree with this idea.

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Your local hospital has advertised people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at hospital in your free time. - Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital - say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do - give details of when you would be available for this work.

My name is Vairag, I am a local resident of the town of Bracebridge, I read an article about voluntary work in our hospital,and I always wanted to do something for our community. I believe that this is the perfect opportunity for me to serve and give back to our community.

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Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The issue of whether youngersters who commit awful crimes should be punished in the same way as adults has sparked a great deal of debate. To a certain extent, I firmly believe that different punishments should be imposed based on different motives.

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Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university to or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages?

There has been a tendency in the number of learners taking a gap year between high school and college recently. This essay attempts to shed light on both the merits and demerits of this trend before concluding that I am in favour of the previous notion.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health, while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Gia Linh

In the modern society, the best way to maintain a healthy lifestyle is a topic of debate. Some people hold the view that working out is important to improve health while others believe that balance diet is more vital. In my opinion, both exercise and a well-rounded eating habit are equally essential to stay healthy, since both have benefits for the human body in different ways.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health, while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Thu Ha

In modern society, there are opposing views about how to live a healthy life. A large number of people think that one’s health mostly depends on physical activities, in contrast, others believe that arranging a scientific diet is the best way to achieve well-being. Two aforementioned views will be discussed in the following paragraphs before presenting my personal perspective in the conclusion.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statemeny?

It is believed by some people that individuals will have the access to free digital books and online news in the near future. Even though this prediction is possibly accurate, in my opinion, I do not agree with such statement because printed books are not replaceable and we will have to pay for the digital materials as well.

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Some people think governments should care more about education the elderly while others think they should focus on investing in education for younger people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Many people believe, that governments should support developing schools for Aged people because of technology like banking systems and online payments most people have no clue about how to use it. However, Others think they should bring more study opportunities for younger people to boost the country's economy by developing computer advancement.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in theirprofessional lives and personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risksoutweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years unemployment rates have spiked due to AI technology most companies are reducing employment by replacing computers, So it is of paramount importance to take potential risks in their professional life and personal lives to succeed in this technology world

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Some believe that the government should support artists like musicians, painters, and poets, while others argue that this is a misuse of funds. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, an issue that has fueled a heater debate is whether the art of various artists is worth spending the national money on or not. Some individuals deem that for the artistic development, the government funds should be allocated to the artists. While, other mindsets reckon that it is a waste of money and resources. This essay intends to analyse both perspective, I, however, side with the former view.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It is indeed a fact that the appropriate age of learning a foreign dialect for children has been always much debated. Some people assert that tutees should be accustomed with it in elementary school instead of high school. This phenomenon has multifarious benefits, however, sometimes a couple of problem emerge due to the same. The following paragraphs will cast a light on both pros and the cons of learning new language during primary school.

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10. Talk about a job that helps making the work better place: What the job is? How you learn about it ? Why do you think it helps so much? And explain why do you think it make the world better place.

I believe that culinary brings color to the work environment because the creative art level of this work is peaceful and joyful, I researched this job by myself and understand the values like starting my own company in the future. Plus, the majority of the world's population generating income depends on working under someone for their entire life if we could learn skills like baking, cooking, and creating new drinks like coffee, tea, and other soft drinks most of them can become entrepreneurs and give job opportunity to the youngsters this could lead to make some changes in globally.

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