IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 33

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, smartphones are used in every people’s life especially young individuals such as teenager and children. A few children waste hours in their daily activities on their smartphones. This essay will support a negative development than a positive development from my perspective.

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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions.

As time passed, more and more generation z graduate from school and devoted into job while some companies discover those fresh graduates lacking of social skills such as communications and team work skills, the root causes can be the difference of focuses between academic setting and working environment, some possible solutions like training workshop held by professionals and internship for undergraduates are being suggested.

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Some people believe that the government should spend more money in putting in more works of art like painting and statutes in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

How likely people love arts? It is thought for some people that placing art works like painting and statues in cities will make it a better places to live in. Personally, I believe that art works undoubtedly add attractions to the cities, but compromises huge amount of money to spend for putting more art works, however, it leads to tourist attractions we can offer to people. Therefore, I strongly agree that the government should spend money for the artworks they will build in the cities.

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Some people believe that starting school at an earlier age is very beneficial for children,while others believe that children must stay home and attend to school at the age of 7. In your opinion,what are the advantages of attending school before the age of 7

Education has an important role in molding children to be the best version of themselves. It helps them to understand the things that cannot be easily explained at home by their parents and it should start at their young age. Whilst, other people has strongly agree that children should attend school at the age of 7, I believe that it is more advantegous for the children as well as their parents to bring their children at school before the age of 7.

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More and more people want to buy famous brands in clothes cars and other items. What are the reasons behind this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative development

Numerous expensive items are getting quite famous these days than before. More and more people can be seen interested in spending their hard-earned money on the big labels without even thinking once. There are varoius reasons for this, which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs but before that my opinion regarding this trend is that it is leading to more negative development than positive one.Therefore, I will try to dicuss about it comprehensively in a brief way.

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Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on the problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, many animals in the world are becoming extinct. Some people believe that governments and people should protect these animals from extinction, while others think that we should prioritize the problems of human beings. I personally believe that while protecting animals are beneficial for the environment, we should concentrate on saving humans because they are the superior to all species.

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Some school children buy healthy food from the school cafeteria. However, some buy unhealthy food. What are the reasons for both these situations? Should schools be allowed to sell unhealthy food?

Some school children purchase healthy food from the school canteens while others buy unhealthy food. The reasons behind these problems are that parents make children aware of the drawbacks of unhealthy food. Those children who buy healthy food, have the habits of consuming healthy food. I personally believe that schools should not sell unhealthy food because it attracts children to consume unheathy food which are detrimental to their health.

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The technology allowed us to have more ways to communicate. However, some people say that the internet and social network create more opportunities for conflicts and erase the line of respect and appropriateness. To what extent do you agree?

“Technology allowed us to have more ways to communicate. However, some people say that the internet and social network create more opportunities for conflicts and erase the line of respect and appropriateness. To what extent do you agree?”

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

There is no denying the fact that changing or being the same is a crucial reason for your growth and could identify your lifestyle. While it is a commonly held belief that some individuals prefer spending their time doing the same activities or commitments. There is also an argument that changing and improving is always beneficial. This essay will analyze this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of planets and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In every country on the earth, there is disagreement around the topic of environmental issues. With regard to this topic, few consider that the extinction of specific species of animals and plants are almarming environmental problem, while others opine that other envrionmental problems are more pressing. In this esssay, I will discuss both perspective and provide my opinion.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

People believe that there is fun in game only if the person win. This essay agrees with the statement because winning a game can give the winner prizes and pride making the winner think that the game is much more fun.

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Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and exercise every day will be healthier and happier. However, many elderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness. Discuss the causes and solutions?

Since most of the elder people are suffering from loneliness and unfit conditions, as per experts' saying they will be healthier and happier if they spend time and get along with others and exercise everyday. Here I will discuss the causes behind the present conditions of elders and put some solutions to eradicate the problem.

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Many criminals commit more crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

There is no doubt, that many former prisoners break the law after them are being release. This essay will explore reasons of this trend as well as elaborate the mesures which could tackle with this problem.

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By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (AGREE)

Death penalty is the subject of significant debate today. Executing murders to death could lead to guiltness, hence, some people believe putting murderers for imprisonment would be a better way. In my opinion, I am not agree with this concept because it may arouse numerous problems.

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Fewer and fewer children are willing to look after their parents as they get older these days.Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

According to opinion of some people, today just a little amount of grown children take care for their parents as they get older. This essay will present the argument against this trend.

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Task 2 ; Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia as many as two-thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

To what extent schools should monitor children’s eating habits and exercise to combat childhood obesity is a complex issue. While I agree that schools have a role to play in promoting healthier lifestyles, they should not be the sole institution responsible.

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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?

Despite of the profit generated, some people think that international tourism have negative effect for their nation. In this essay I will explain what causing this problem and then I would offer a few solution.

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Some people believe that young people benefit from working while studying at school or university. Others think that young people will achieve more by focussing on their studies. Discuss both of the view points and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. days?

Working and studying at the same time may be useful and good combination: getting knowledges and having experience with money from workplace. However, with this way, students will not be able to distinctly concentrate on the both sides, which may lead to losing the job and distraction at school or university.

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Some people think it is good to socialise with work colleagues, while others believe in maintaining a professional distance. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

People have different ways of balancing their work and social lives. Some enjoy spend time with colleagues during off-hours but others prefer to keep work and fun time separate. This essay will explain both of views and I personally prefer the latter.

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Rise in Homeless persons across England between 2010 and 2016.

The graph illustrates the rise in homelessness across England, focusing on London, the rest of England, and the country as a whole from 2010 to 2016.

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