IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 33

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Eating too much sugar is harmful for our health. Some people think it is government responsibility to limit people's sugar consumption, while others think it is an individual's responsibility to limit the amount of suger they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Number of consuming of sugar is increasing day one day and that affects our health, even though can lead to health problems. Some societies say that the government should be responsible for limiting people's how much sugar they use while other parts of society think that it is our problem to manage our sugar consumption. In my view, the number of using sugar is totally our responsibility. We are going to discuss two views.

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May people prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life , whereas others prefer to c h a n g e the type of work. Discuss both sides and state your own opinion.

In this fast-paced life, many of them likes work in the same companey for their whole life, however, few of them likes to work in a various companey in order to enhance their experties and gain more experience in one field. If pondered, I personally agree with the latter opinion. My view is justified in further paragraphs.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

The issue of students learning to be a better guardian from schools is an ongoing debate.Some humans beleive this is a good plan.It is my firm opinion that students should not learn this from school.

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Eating too much sugar is harmful for our health. Some people think it is government responsibility to limit people's sugar consumption, while others think it is an individual's responsibility to limit the amount of suger they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, consumption of suger has become a topic of considerable debate. While some people argue that it is government responsibility to control the level of suger intake of its citizens, others point out that it should be an individual responsibility. In my opinion, I consider that keep limitations on suger is a personal choise rather than control by outsiders.

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WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

The cause and solution of poverty in many countries has been a vital topic of debate. While there are various reasons related to poverty, the most significant one is unavailable a variety of job opportunities. As a result, governments and authorities should make an effort to implement practical laws toward reducing poverty in communications including increasing job opportunities.

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May people prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life , whereas others prefer to c h a n g e the type of work. Discuss both sides and state your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that if cloning became true there would be a lot of new things are need to be learned about it. While it is a commonly held belief that many people are afraid of cloning humans and animals. There is also an argument that opposes it in my opinion, I consider that cloning for humans is very dangerous but I think for animals there are no problems. To begin with, cloning for humans I think there are some problems like if someone makes a cram how we can find him. In other words, government will encounter a lot of problems like if someone cloning wants to travel or make a family. for example, if he has a child how we can no how is the father. Another point to consider, cloning for animals I think is a good thing, because if someone's pet is dead he can clone it again and we can decrease the animal's extinction from cloning. It is also possible to say that it will help our environment and we can make a balance of Wilford for cloning. For instance, African cats ...

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some children use their time for their smartphones every day. The reason why they spend a lot of time is that smartphones have many apps which children is addicted to, for example, YouTube apps, Instagram apps and so on. With regard to YouTube apps, children love to watch the youtuber who is famous among the children. In addition, the apps recommend new videos after finishing the previous movie, so children cannot stop watching videos. On the other hand, Instagram apps show children the series of new information, which is about interesting younger's cultures, so children cannot stop scrolling up the information, therefore they use much time for smartphones. In my opinion, spending hours on their phone has positive and negative aspects. Fast, positive feature is that children can make good relationships with friends due to getting new information from smartphones. For instance, in their school, children enjoy talking about famous youtubers and new information, so children need these ...

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May people prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life , whereas others prefer to c h a n g e the type of work. Discuss both sides and state your own opinion.

To a certain extent, I agree that some people enjoy doing the same job in the same way every day. However, I atso understand why others prefer to change their jobs frequently:

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In todays Modern society , music becomes a integral part of life to people, Due to avaibilty of music at global level through internet it brings culture and ages together, it become on of the best the best way to making bonds among people who are from various cultures. I totally agree with this statement .

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Governments and big companies should work together to reverse environmental damage, rather than expecting individuals to take responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the problems related to environment increasing at an alarming rate, it is hard for a common human being to tackle or solve these problems,thus, some people think, in order to solve the environmental issues big corporations and higher authorities should take charge. Although it is the first responsibility of ordinary people to take small steps towards these problems to fix them, large changes can only be possible if law and big companies come forward to heal the natural fields, therefore I completely agree with this statement.

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In the modern world, it is possible to communicate with people via internet without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development?

These days, technology has been developing immediately, so in the modern era, people can interact with other populations by connecting to the Internet instead of visiting them in real positions. In my opinion, this happening is a positive development owing to the fact that people can improve their knowledge about other countries and homesick do not effect on Immigrants.

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Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think that it can be harmful for children. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe that it is good for children to do paid work to gain experience, while others think it can be detrimental. In my opinion, I think that paid work can cause more problems for children compared to any advantages it might bring.

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In the modern world it is possible to communicate with people via the internet without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion?

These days, technology has been developing immediately, so in modern era people can iteract with other populations by connect to the Internet instead of visiting them in real position. In my opinion, this happening is a positive development owing to the fact that people can improve their knowledge about other countries and the home sick do not effect on them.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opnion

There are people who are agree that children can use their voices to decide which food that they can consume, clothes to wear, and many more. They think it is good for children development because they can make their own decision that might affect them in the future. On the other hand, some people do not agree with this because it makes children become selfish. I will elaborate both views in this essay and conclusion will be made in the end.

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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

In recent years, there has been a trend that number of students who are choosing to study abroad is increasing. This might have a positive effect on students and the countries involved, however, there might be some disadvantages also.

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Having babies later can have more negative than positive effects on young adults? What is pros and cons about having babies laterand how do you think?

Same people believe, that having babies later could be positive for young adults , while others believe that could be a negative choice. In this essay I will be discussing the positives and negatives sides of having babies later on young adults, and say what I think about the pros and cons.

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Children today find it’s difficult to concentrate or pay attention in schools. Why do you think causes this problem? What do we need to do to solve this problem?

It is often thought that students are lacking of concentration and attention for studies in School. In my opinon, I think that there are various reasons for creating this issue and will discuss how to mitigate the problems.

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International communities should act immediately to ensure that all countries reduce their consumption of fossil fuels, e.g. gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Mankind is relying mainly on fossil fuels, in order to, meet their energy needs for domestic and commercial purposes from the ancient times. However, a few people advocates that international bodies must insist countries to look for other options for their energy needs. But, I do not agree with this notion to a much extent and reasons to support my stance are elaborated in the following paragraphs.

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Nowadays more mothers go out to work while fathers stay at home and look after the children. What do you think are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development in your opinion?

Nowadays, while fathers look after the children, more mothers go out to work. On my opinion, it depands of many factors in diferent families. Despite the historical principles where woman sitting at home and look after the children while man working, in new realitys all can changes.

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In many countries, the amount of household waste like food packaging is increasing? What are the causes of this problem? What measurer could be taken to reduce it?

These days, globally, the rate of domestic litter has increased tremendously, in particular the packages of food are on the top charts. There are some reasons behind this issue which can be addressed by a few measures.

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