IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 33

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that allowing children to make their own decisions through daily work might lead to selfishness, However, others, including me, believe that it is a beneficial daily practice that fosters their cognitive skills and independence.

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Band 8+: In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

in recent years, many schools in different countries experience immature behaviors from their students. While there are a variety of causes leading to this issue, certain solutions can tackle this.

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Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don't. Discuss both these points of views and give your own opinion

These days, a lot of professionals have been playing key roles for motivating young children to have dreams. It is thought by some that athletes don't inspire young people. In this essay, I am going to discuss both of these views and give my own opinion.

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What are the main problems associated with using social media platforms and possible solutions?

In recent years, it is not common to see lots of people using social media. But as this becomes a trend, many issues are also introduced within these platforms, leading to detrimental impacts on the world. I believe one of the main problems are due to the negativity and how it is getting normalized, though there are many ways to counter this using technology.

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Some claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

A group of individuals believe that the amount of recycled waste from residential places is not efficient and the sole method to gain recycling is to become a legally enforced requirement by governments. I think that assigning regulations related to dealing with waste by authorities based on studies and statistics can significantly improve the recycling habits of a community as they will encourage people to take recycling more seriously, especially if they were accompanied with fines and penalties, and will, in the long term, improve the overall cleaniness of the country's environment.

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Some parents prefer to stay in care homes after their retirement instead of staying with their children. Why is this happening? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

In recent years, an increasing number of elderly parents have chosen to live in care homes rather than staying with their youngsters, this shift can be attributed to various factors. While old age homes offer several benefits, they also come with some drawbacks. This essay will explore the reasons behind this trend and discussed its pros and cons.

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Some people like to go to a live sporting event, while others prefer to stay at home and watch it on television. Which do you prefer? Discuss both views using personal examples.

It is often argued that sporting events are more enjoyable at the venue, while others thinks it is more comfortable watching it on a screen at home. In my opinion, both acts can have completely different experience, due to the environmental settings. This essay will discuss various scenarios of the topic and demonstrate viewpoint with logical experience.

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All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Spending by the government into all healthcare and education to help people can easy access without any fees has become an ongoing debate. I strongly agree with this statement, in this essay, I will discuss these points in detail.

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Numerous countries are facing various conflicts and criminal activities, to reduce this issue many people are arguing that prisonment will provide effective protection to tackle this issue while others reject this notion and believes that education is the key component to preventing complications. This essay will further elaborate on both perspectives and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

Numerous countries are facing various conflicts and criminal activities, to reduce this issue many bodies are arguing that imprisonment will provide effective protection to tackle this issue while others reject this notion and believe that literacy is the key component to preventing complications. In my opinion, contributions of schooling is appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate on both perspectives and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Governments give lots of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, states provide a lot of supports to artists, although some individuals believe that it is a waste of money, and the money could have been utilized better in some other important sectors. I personally think that while other important sectors of a country require importance and funding from the government because the public deserves better facilities, artists also should be given equal importance because they contribute to social reformation.

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In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that family dynamics becoming more and more modern, and family demands have also changed to a large extent which requires both parents to job . While it is a commonly held belief that children’s advantage since their parents can make more money , there is also an argument that it causes children to suffer from insufficient aid . This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

These days individuals decide to be self-employed rather than working for a company or any organisation. This case might happen because of the challenges of working for others and the evolving mindset of people. I believe that self-employment offers several advantages while it also comes with significant drawbacks.

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In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that in this modern era, the need for money has increased. Thereby, several families consider both parents to do the job. It is believed by some people that the extra earnings are beneficial for the children, however, others are opposing this statement. Both views will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? *

It is undeniable that the quest of exploring new places is never-ending. Nowadays, individuals are going to places where survival is bit difficult as in the Sahara desert as well as the Antarctic. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of choosing such places as tourist destinations in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Today most of work is done by machimes as past humans do . Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this trend .Give your opinion also

Undoubtedly , technology changes the ways of community . Today most of work Is done by machines instead of nation. This essay will deliberate not only the advantages but shed some light on disadvantages , along my viewpoint regarding this trend .

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In recent time, young adults are spending less time with their families and more with their friends. Why has this occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend their time at home?

There is a widely held view that there is a great deal of the young prefer to spend the majority of their time with their friends and they are not really interested in having fun with their family members and their parents. There are various reasons for this issues. The following paragraphs will discuss thi matter and suggest some strategies to tackle with this problem.

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Some people think that children should go to kindergarten before attending Primary School while other believe that it is better for children to stay all day with family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, kindergarten is usually the place where parents are assured that children are taken care, and taught by kindergarten teachers. Some people think that children should go to kindergarten before attending Primary School while others believe that it is better for children to spend all day with family. I personally think that this issue depends on each family.

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Many government think that economic progression is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Economy is believed to be the most focused developmental target by many countries' authorities. On the other hand, many sociologists disscuss the importace of the homgenous development in all life charachtristics in a society. I utterly agree with the latter.

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Some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species while others think it is a waste of valuable money. What is your opinion ?

Many people argue that whether more funds should be allocated to the protection of endangered species or such spending is unnecessary. I firmly believe that prevent extinction plays a key role for maintaining biodiversity and sustaining the planet's health. This essay will discuss the importance of this trend and benefits it brings to both society and environment.

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Doctors often recommend regular exercise for older people; however, many elderly individuals tend to ignore this advice. What are the reasons for this behavior, and what measures can be taken to encourage older people to exercise regularly?

Exercise plays a vital role in healthcare of an individual. Although, nowadays doctors usually advice elder people to stay active, they show a reluctance to reagular exercise. There are two contributing factors for this phenomenon, such as they seek instant results and lack of facilities. In order to overcome this difficulties some measurment can be taken, like, increase the amount of sport facilities as well as aware the importance of those through public awareness. In this essay, I will discuss these reason and possible solutions in detail.

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