IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 33

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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the plans below show the layout of a university's sports cenre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The two maps depict the plan of the university's sports centre today and how it will be in the future.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be best way to get a job.On the other hand,other people think that getting experience and developing soft-skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

Completing a college studies is widely regarded as one of the most effective ways to secure a perfect job. However, others argue acquiring exercise and developing soft-skills are equally equivalent. This essay will discuss both perspective and provide my opinion in the end.

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Some people believe that parents should teach their students to be good citizens, however believe that school should do this. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There are conflicting views on whether parents or schools should be responsible for teaching children to be good citizens. Some people believe that parents should instill moral values and social responsibility, while others argue that schools play a crucial role in shaping students’ character. Both perspectives have their own merits; however, I believe that parents should take the primary role in this aspect.

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some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. discuss both these views and give your opinion

It is often said that schools are too competitive and it has a negative effect on children. However, other said being in competitive environment helps students achieve success. This essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view.

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People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? Whay measures can you suggest to make it easier

In the moden society, individuals are often making changes as they move into new phases of their lives. However, some people find themselves having a difficult time adjusting to the different environment. In my opinion, fear is one of the most significant barrier for pleasant transition and only by staying postive can they blend into the new situations as soon as possible.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children’s who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give yout personal opinion too.

While some people believe that we should encourage sense of competition in children, others think that children who are taught to work in team will be more beneficial. I support the latter view and will explain it in this essay.

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Do you agree that reading newspaper and books will be unuseful in the future? Explain your argument

Advancements in today's technology are most likely changing people's behavior on aspects of life. On of the most debated topic is on how people would like to read newspapers or books. Some may say that people will shift away from the conventional printed books to digitalized version, because it is easier to do so with supporting devices available all around them, for example smartphones, computers, and tablets. Also, there are bunch of online contents nowadays that are accessible for free. Thus, it is said that the era of printed books is over. However, personally I beg to differ with this opinion.

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In the futre all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advatantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed that in coming years all the automobiles will be fully automated and will become driverless, the only human beings inside the vehicles will be the passengers. This will bring a lot of convenience and affordability for the manufacturers of cars, buses, and trains, whereas the job opportunities and safety of the general public may suffer. This essay will discuss how the disadvantages outweigh its advantages.

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Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, while others believe it is better for them to begin school at a later age.

Opinions remain divided on whether children should begin educating in school since an early age or whether they should have more time to prepare for education. Personally, I believe that it is essentail for children's mental health to stay home until they are at mindful ages because school requires an appropiate level of brain development and social skills.

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Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree with the above notion?

Paying duty was a well-known custom in the past, where locals used to pay their kingdom in different forms. Therefore, many individuals argue about paying tolls and want to save the money. While, others believe that contributing to the economic growth of a country through taxes is vital.I completely disagree that one should not pay tariffs.I rather believe it plays a crucial role in the smooth running of nation in many ways.

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More students are deciding to study science-related subjects at university rather than more traditional subjects. What are the causes of this? What affects will it have on society?

Many students have chosen to study science-related subjects at university instead of traditional subjects .That is because of a lack of job opportunities in traditional fields. Also, effect negatively on society in different aspects .

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important to child's developmet as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in highschool. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today high school level should obtain art courses like painting and drawing as obligatory subjects because it is significant for children's improvement. I totally agree with this statement and I will mention elaboration of this topic throughout this essay.

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Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give advantages of both and express your own point of views.

There is no denying the fact that students need vacations to recharge and focus on another creative aspects.Although many people argued that children should be take multiple short vacations,others believe that one long vacation annually will be more benefical.This essay will elaborate both points of view and give my opinion.

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People are annoyed or entertained by advertising but they are not affected by advertisements when making shopping decisions. To what extent you agree or disagree?

People may go through different feelings when seeing an ad on a television, whether feel engaged or irritated by them, however, it may not impact them when they want to purchase a good. Although some individuals may be influenced by the hyperboles said about one purchase and be affected while buying what they wish, I believe most people ignore advertisements while buying.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefit individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Some people believe that scholars should fund their own education as it is only beneficial for them rather than for society. Others believe that education costs should be subsidized as it also brings benefits to society. In this essay I will argue that education funds should not be fully charged to the scholar but also need to be subsidized by other parties especially the government as it has cumulative impacts to the society.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefit individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the cost of study should be paid fully by the college students as the university education only benefits them rather than the society, whereas others think the otherwise. I partially agree with this idea. Despite the cost allocation for university education, which paid by the government may be potentially misplaced, I believe there are still a lot of potential young students who need to be supported by the goverment to pay their college tuition fees.

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The advances in technology are attributed to several environmental issues. While some people contemplate that environmental problems can be solved by adopting plainer life, I believe that the solution lies in the adaptation of technology.

The advances in technology are attributed to several environmental issues. While some people contemplate that environmental problems can be solved by adopting plainer life, I believe that the solution lies in the adaptation of technology.

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If the product is good and meets consumer needs than advertising is unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argue whether flair for a product that fulfills both demand and expectations requires advertising. I opt for media marketing usage regardless of how good the item is because it gives a control over message when it comes to new information about it, jobs and allows to position the brand and people's view on it.

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Consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisement ? what measure can be taken to protect them.

In this competetive era, the business models are heavily advertising their products, which has led to a boost in the amount of promotional advertisements seen by customers everywhere. Although these promotional marketing strategies bring substantial profits to the multinational companies, however they leave a negative impact on the consumers. Restriction of unnecessary advertisements and careful utilisation of internet could be an effective precautionary measure to protect the consumers.

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Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (suld as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

In this cutting-throat technological era, most of the people are buying more and more smartphones and availing healthcare services. As per the statement, most masses consider prices are most crucial thing when obtaining services and purchasing products like medical services and smartphones. However, I partially agree with the statement and related ideas would be perused in the forthcoming paragraphs along with the conclusion at the end.

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