IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 33

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that increasing the number of sports facilities is the most proper solution to improve public health, while others say that it only has a small impact. This essay will discuss how people have those views. In my opinion, building more facilities for sports cannot boost public health in general, whereas a balanced diet can significantly influence public health.

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Many people nowadays spend a large of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There is no denying the fact that society spends a large amount of time using comperes and a smartphone. This essay will discuss the reasons why people do that and also the effects behind this choice as positive impact or negative.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

There is an ongoing trend that people need to move away from their hometowns and be dispatched from their own friends and families, if they want to obtain higher salaries. This trend can be seen not just in developing countries but also in developed countries. In this essay, I will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks of this worldwide tendency and explain why I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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whether or not government money should be used for space exploration or public facilities

whether or not government money should be used for space exploration or public facilities. In the contemporary, while advanced technology can be invented through space exploration projects, the reduction of less discrimination within society as well as upgradation of infrastructure are a benefit if the government invests in social services. This essay will point out why government should spend their money on social services instead of space explorations

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Many people nowadays spend a large of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days, due to an upgraded lifestyle, mobile phones have become a crucial part of every human's life, and most people are engaged on their phones during their leisure time. In my opinion, the major reason behind this scenario is the multifunctionality and ease of access to information in smartphones that attracts people. However, it is a negative development as many individuals have become addicted to it, which in turn causes plenty of health issues.

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Some people believe that it is important to protect the environment, but they make no effort to do so themselves. Why is this the case? What can be done to encourage individuals to take action?

In today's rapidly changing world, environment plays a vital role in shaping individuals' futures and advancing society. Some people believe that it is important to protect the environment, while others think that they make no effort to do so themselves. The present essay will examine the causes and solutions of this problem.

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Transporting large amount of food to richer nations from developing countries is having an impact on air pollution and climate change. Some people say such imports should therefore be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The dependency of people on variety of food and impact on the environment owing to import of large amount of food from developing nations to more developed nations is becoming a major concern. It has been observed that because of the surge in importing food by means of air, land and water, the air pollution is consistently increasing and has a significant impact on the climate. I firmly believe that such imports ought to be reduced which will not only help promoting local food supply because of shorter distances but also help in reducing carbon emissions throughout the world.

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Nowadays children are experiencing increased educational, social, and commercial pressure. What are the reasons for this? What is a solution to reduce the pressure?

A new trend has been observed where young children are struggling with stress because of peer pressure, excessive usage of social media apps, and their need to win approval. This essay will discuss the reasons for stress and provide solutions to resolve this problems.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantaged of tourism in the modern world?

Many countries around the world depend on inviting tourists to earn revenue. However, having unsupervised travelling can bring in many difficulties and challenges. Thus, there are both benefits and disadvantages to having many foreign visitors nowadays.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no denying the fact that saving money is important for young generations because it will provide them with financial stability in the future. While it is commonly held to belief that young people should spend their money and enjoy without worrying about the future. there is also an argument that younger individuals should spend less and save more money so they don't suffer from poverty in the future. This essay will analyse this from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Some people believe that students should be given homework every day, while others argue that daily homework is unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals consider pupils ought to get homework on a daily basis, whilst others argue they shouldn’t.Although i understand that children might revise concepts or topics they have acquired during the day , I think there are more efficient ways to do that without overloading them.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

There is an ongoing trend in some countries, whereas some college students are living with their family, other students are living apart from their home and staying in another area alone. Certainly, though doing so would bring some disadvantages to students, they might benefit from those decisions in some parts. In this essay, I will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of this trend and explain why I consider that total advantages would outweigh entire disadvantages.

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People believe that the government should financially support retired people, others believe that retired people should care for themselves. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion.

The ageing population has had demonstrable effect on society, especially with regard to government, while some people believe that supporting financial to older individuals is the best method to help them, others disagree with this point of view and argue that older inhabittants should have financial reserves for their own care in later years.

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Ambition is a positive quality for people to have in societies today. How important is it for people who want to succeed in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

Some state that being ambitious is a vital advantage nowadays. The writer of this essay believes this notion to be true as ambition helps individuals to be determined in what they do and diminishes complacency in life, despite others arguing that this is detrimental to one's ego if their preliminary plans failed.

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Some students choose to pursue their education in their home country, while others prefer to study abroad. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some students would rather study in their countries, while other students would like to study in foreign naitions. Although studying in one's home country is more affordable, I believe that there are more drawbacks because studying in one's home country limits independence.

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E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, but this impact has been negative as well as positive. Do the disadvantages of using e-mail outweigh the advantages?

In recent years, E-mail has had a huge influence on social communications and transferring of important information through a digital device. As technology continues to develop, the consequences of its usage also have arisen. This essay will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks of using online messengers.

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The given plans represent a house's interiors and its proposed plan.

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Sugar consumption is too harmful. Some say it is government’s responsibility to limit sugar intake, while others say it’s individual who are responsible. Discuss both views and give you opinion?

The overconsumption of sugar must be controlled to prevent its harmful effects on the body. Some people believe that it is the responsibility of the government to regulate sugar in the diet, owing to its great impact on the general public while, others are of the opinion that people themselves must take the initiative to control their sugar intake. I believe that, irrespective of their independent roles, there must be a collaborative effort from both sides to see good results.

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Some people think that the government should spend money on adult’s population who can’t read and write while other not. To what extend to you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that government must take care of the societies. While it is a commonly held belief that older people should be taking care of by teaching them how to read and write. There is also an argument that opposite this idea. In my opinion, I consider that government needs to invest in young communities.

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Some people think that the government should spend money on adult’s population who can’t read and write while other not. To what extend to you agree or disagree?

ome countries have people who don't know how to read and write and the government should help them ,it's argued that the government should spend money to teach them while others do not , in this essay I give my opinion and discuss both views , even though I think it's a good step for teaching the illiterate .

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