IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 31

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some university student want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subject. Other believe it's more important to study for qualification.

In our contemporary era, some tertiary students intend to study about accessory variable topics, besides the main one. On the other hand, Other think it is of paramount importance to focuse their study to acquire their certificate. In my opinion, I would argue that focusing on the involved topic to get qualification is far more essential, due to the high sharpend skill, that obtained by consistant and concentrated academic work.

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Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjets that will be useful for their future careers. Other people say that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Huy Cao

Nowadays the majority of schools have subjects like music and sports,but some people think these are unnecessary subjects for academic lessons. My opinion is there are also important subjects for academics because in the world they are considered like academic lessons and in every country they have their own traditional music. It's also important to know your traditional music and dance.

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Nowadays, people have adopted an unhealthy lifestyle. Why do think this is? How could this problem be solved?

In today's modern world, many people lead an unhealthy lifestyle. While there are many reasons which cause it, this essay will examine some possible solutions.

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Money is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the past, money was used as a tool. When remembering the older years, we know that there was no money and the barter system. Money remained as a tool for many years. In my opinion, it is significant for people's future. This essay will discuss why money matters in human's life. Every moment that we step in these days is almost in exchange for money. However, rather than knowing that the sun, air and looking at scenery are free, many things that are considered to be entertainment and to maintain a certain standard in life are done with money. For instance, Netflix which is thought to be quality movies and like a download and lifesaving app on mobile phones. While making money is a goal now, humans think it is important to invest in their future. On the other hand, when ancestors used money as a tool, life was easy and there was no trigger to keep them alive. They could leave a farm or a house for their children, but today despite working harder, people know that a lot of money is ...

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Some people think that it is a good idea to socialize with colleagues after work and during weekends. Others think it's important to keep the work life completely separate from social life Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is no denying the fact that social life and friendship are playing a crusial part in human life. While it is a commonly held belief that to keep in touch with work colleagues after work time and at weekends is a nice plan, there is also an argument that opposes this idae. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Food products are producted by adding the significant amount of sugar which create many health issues in citizens. To overcome these challenges, it is suggested that the price of food and drinks should be increased on a high extent so that purchasing power of people can be reduced. However, I do not agree with this statement because making sugary consumed items expensive is not a valuable solution. There are some other ways too.

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In some countries, school are open till late so that children can be looked after when parents are at work. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

Institutes around the world have taken many initiatives for the protection of children. In few countries, schools remain open till late to facilitate working parents. This essay will discuss the potential merits and demerits of this trend.

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Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace, so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? support your opinion with examples.

There is no denying the fact that learning effectively takes students time and needs from the learner to be comfort and peace. While it is a commonly held belief that having a job in addition to study is diffecult and distract one from another, there is also an argument oppeses it. In my opinion, I consider that it is impossible to mix between learn and work.

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It is important fo people to tke risks, both in their professional lives and their pesonal lives. Do you think the advantage of taking risks outweigh the disadventages?

Human life is full of obstacles, and few people claim that life is worth taking risks and it is crucial to for individuals to take risks in professional and personal lives. This essay will discuss this view in detail and will explain why the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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pie chart and table for about people who are going to the dance clases

This pie chart and table illustrate the location of dance classes between four groups and also types of the classes that are available according to their ages. Overall, it is evident that most of the people who are participating in these classes are students from private schools that are double school halls and ballet is one of the most common choices among people under the age of 11 . Modern dances are famous among teenagers.

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The younger generation is mainly responsible for the latest technologycal developments. How far do you agree?

Nowadays is widely accepted that the speed of technologycal develpments is due to the aim of youngest generations of being "on the top of the wave", regarding the latest technologycal trends.

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Some people think that mothers should spend most of their time raising their family, and therefore the government should support them financially. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some that mothers must engage majorly in raising their children, and hence it is the responsibility of the governing authorities to provide them with the financial support. I strongly oppose this view, firstly because the government has more crucial things to cater to like the defense and medical systems of the nation. Secondly, empowering the mothers to become independent will benefit in the long run.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashion views, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The rise of social media has made contemporary society more often fixated on outward appearances — wealth, status. It is believed that this trend would soon replace traditional values that define individual significance. Personally, I fully disagree with this idea.

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Some people believe teenagers should focus on all subjects equally, whereas other people think that they should concentrate on only those subjects that they find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Following the course of time, education itself has witnessed numerous changes to their system in order to maintain compatibility with a constantly developing society. However, a debate has come to be as some people are in the belief that students ought to evenly distribute their time to all subjects, while others recommend concentrating on preferred subjects. The following essay will discuss both views before my opinion is stated.

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In many countries, people are not living longer the ever before. some people say an aging population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if he has more elderly people. To what extent to the advantages of having an Asian population outweigh the disadvantages.

Nowadays, the increases of the population of elderly people in several countries lead to a widely discussion among the people. While some people argue that ageing population lead to a problem for governments, others think it come with a benefits for the society. Despite some negative aspects, I believe that the advantages largely outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some people think painting and drawings are important as other subjects. They should be compulsory in high school education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that paintings and drawings should be made compulsore in the high school education as these subjects are equally vital as other subjects such as mathemetics and science. It is true that these subjects have some crucial significance for ensuring the overall developement of the children

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Some people think that it would be better if whole family(Ex.Uncle,aunt and grand parents) involving in bringing up children rather than only parents. Give your opinion ?

Many people argue that children upbringing should be contributed by the members of an extended family such as Uncle, ant and grandparents. I completely agree with this opinion for several reasons.

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Some people think painting and drawings are important as other subjects. They should be compulsory in high school education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In contemporary era, there is a rise in the significance of some art-related subjects and many individuals argue that they should be mandatory at the learning system. While adding those subjects may have the certain drawbacks, that would definitely be very benefical for personal development of schoolchildren.

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Some people think that higher institutions should concentrate more on academic subjects such as history and the physical sciences, while others think that they should concentrate more on practical subjects such as car mechanics and cookery, and so on. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinions differ regarding whether or not acadmic majors should be taught more than practical majors in high school. While critics insist that practical major are taught more, I personally disagree with this assertion since students may earn more money through academic education.

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The average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of this and suggest some remedies to solve this problem.

Obesity is one of the biggest problems of the age. Although many people try to live in dynamic lifestyle, dozens of millions of community suffer from overweight, as they live in passive lifestyle with oily meals and without doing exercises. From my prespective, most of the people,who have overweights have no eating schedules or do not go to the sports centres to lose their fat.

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