IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 35

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT THE GOVERNEMNT SHOULD SPEND MORE MONEY PUTTING IN MORE WORKS OF ART LIKE PAINTINGS AND STATUES IN CITIES TO MAKE THEM BETTER PLACES TO LIVE IN. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

It is really important to maintain the beauty and infrastructure of a country. There are some people who thing government should spend money on paintings and statues to make them superior places to live in the cities. I agree with the notion as it can enhance the tourism and job opportunities for artists who are keen in making and designing those sculptures.

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Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, there has been an ongoing debate about taking more steps to prevent illegal activities as individuals are afraid to stay away from their houses. However, some proponents oppose that there is no need to initiate more crime prevention actions. I believe that the issue of the growing number of offences can not be tackled with excessive rules.

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The most important aim of science is to improve people's lives . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement .

It is recently argued that the most vital objective of science is to enhance people's way of living , and have an important role in it . This essay agrees with the statement as science improved our lives in many various ways in the recent years and also playing an essential role in our lives .

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of heath and fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the course of these problems and measures could be taken to solve them ?

In the present age, obesity and health deteriotation are the two main concers of many countries. Health is Wealth for any nation. Eating habits and sedentary are the posssible raesons for this. Regular workouts can be helpful in solving the problem. In the upcoming essay, I will discuss the root causes and offer solutions.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more imporiant than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

As we all know that English is an international language. As compared to the regional languages english is considered more necessary in the educational institutions. According to my perspective, it is essential to learn english but we should also preserve our regional toungue. In the upcoming essay, I will discuss both the opinions.

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In many countries schools have svere problems with student behaviour. what do you think are the causes for this? What solutions can you suggest?

Learners are very important for the future of any country in the world. Many people believe that, in the present age, the behaviour of youngsters is unacceptable. In the essay below I will discuss the causes of this attitude and offer some solutions.

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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They fel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?

Doing academic work instead of spending too much free time is believed to be more efficient for young kids. In my opinion academic time is important but even more ist the variety time for their self development.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

With the social development, citizens can purchase food made in different countries in the supermarkets. In my perspective, this is a positive trend.

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Some people believe nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge or experience.

Due to development of technology and mass innovation, some people argue that people have too many options. I tend to agree with this opinion. Comparing to the past, there are many types of food and clothes in people's daily lives. In the supermarket, people can buy fresh food or pre-made frozen food. It might be difficult to decide what to buy and what to eat. Therefore, people might buy more food than they need. As a result, people might consume more food, which can lead to potential diseases such as obesity, diabetes, or even heart diseases. Meanwhile, people also have more clothes than they can buy in the store. Fast fashion brands update their new clothes quite frequently in order to attract more customers. However, too many clothes options can result in overconsumerism. As many people buy more clothes than they actually need. Once a certain design is outdated, people tend to buy new clothes. Those behaviors will produce enormous amounts of waste and negatively affect the enviro...

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More and more countries are making university education completely free for their citizens. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Nowadays, there is an increasing trend among the nations allowing the residents to access to the university without having to paid. This approach have benefits and negative aspects. In this essay, first of all, the advantages are going to be discussed.

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Some people think it would be beneficial for school children to study international news as a school subject, while others argue it would be a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some argue that it is valuable for students to study international news, while others would say it wastes time. Despite differing opinions, I totally believe that it is advantageous for children to study global news because it can broaden their perspectives and greatly enhance students’ knowledge and experiences.

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In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed their education and found jobs. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

As the pace of modern life continues to accelerate, a growing number of individuals, especially in developing and Asian countries, continue sharing same household with their families after graduation and getting work. Although this trend offers certain practical advantages, I firmly believe that the disadvantages are more significant, particulary in terms of independence and personal growth.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Living in a foreign country and speaking a foreign language can be challenging for many people. Some people consider that a non-native speaker may experience many social problems and practical problems. I tend to agree with this opinion. One of the practical problems that may be faced by the non-native language speaker is lack of basic vocabulary. If some people cannot speak the language properly, it would be difficult for them to complete the necessary simple tasks. For instance, people need to go to the pharmacy to buy medicine or book a general practitioner, in this case GP, it is challenging for them to explain their illness to the nurses or pharmacists or doctors to get effective treatment. Another essential problem might be exploitation. Many foreign workers are exploited by their boss without knowing the legislation because of the language barrier. The worker may have to work long hours and extremely underpaid by their boss. The other social problem might be due to misunderst...

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information , such as their hobbies and interests , and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful . Others disagree Discuss both views and give your own opnion

In modern recruitment processes, employers increasingly request personal details from candidates, such as hobbies, marital status, or family background. While some argue this may be relevant and useful, I believe such practices risk privacy violations and unfair bias.

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Although nowadays many people have access to sports facilities, modern lifestyles are becoming less and less active. What problems are associated with this? How can people be persuaded to have a more active lifestyle?

In today's world, thousands of amenities are available for people to do sports and make themselves healthy, but they become less productive because they do not have enough time for it. Several issues occur due to this lifestyle. There are many ways to combat it, which are discussed in the following paragraphs, along with the problems.

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Some people spend most of their lives, living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Certain demographics of people prefer staying near their hometown for the long period of time. In my opinion this is mainly to remain intact with their values. There are pros and cons to this approach which will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Doctors in many countries are saying that people are not getting enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this and how can it be addressed?

In recent years, a growing number of doctors across the world have argued that individuals are not indulging in an appropriate amount of physical activity. There are several reasons for this trend such as advanced technology and hectic lifestyle however there are effective solutions that the government and individuals can implement to tackle this concern.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. DO you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the length of workdays ought to be decreased and employees' free days should be more. This essay agrees with this standpoint for different reasons, such as effect on productivity and balanced work-family life, which will be discussed in this essay.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

Modern transportation and shipping have evolved significantly with advancements in technology, and effective delivery of goods from one place to another. This essay will explore the reasons in forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think rapid population growth in cities only benefits people who live there while others believe that there are disadvantages. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As urbanisation occurs, the population in cities has increased dramatically in recent years. Some people believe that the rise in population is beneficial, while others have the opposite view and argue that there are more disadvantages. Hence, I will discuss both of their views in the following passage.

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