IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 35

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? JJ

Nowadays, in contemporary society, with the changes in the fine arts, artists earn enormous money for the things they make, while there are some people who struggle to survive. Some people support that high institutions, such as governments, should prioritize this problem and take responsibility to overcome this situation. Hence, this essay will discuss both perspectives. I believe that I agree that the government is responsible for managing the unfair conditions.

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A large income is much more important than being satisfied at work. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today fast-paced world, much has been said about a stable income as the final measure of success. While financial security is undoubtedly important, I strongly disagree with the idea that it would outweigh the career satisfaction. From my perspective, long-term well-being and motivation should be more prioritized.

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Some people think that govements should speand money for faster public transportation , others think that there are other important priorities . Discuss both views and give your opinion

Transportation is one of the pressing issues causing air pollution, increased commuting time and stress to city dwellers. While some people claim that investements from goverments should help improve public commution, other argue there are far more prominent areas to be wroked on like education, healthcare and housing etc. This essay will discuss both the views and provide my opinion on the matter.

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A lot of children spend time on social media surfing the internet and playing video games which hurts their studies and grades and makes them experience loneliness and health problems such as obesity. What is the reason behind this? What can the parents do to prevent it?

The rise of technology including social media and video games has become a boon rather a bane for today's emerging generation. This has lead to exacerbate their mental and physical health while causing problems like being overweight and feeling lonely. The root cause for this is the sedentary lifestyle among children owing to either online games or social media. Lets evaluate and discuss what can be done by the parents to help their kids have a healthy way of living.

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ome people think that there could be more benefits to society if more people studied business than history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that students who study business could contribute more advantages to the society than others who study history. Personally, I strongly agree with the statement that business studying could impact the society to a greater extent.  Businessman could promote economic growth for the society by using their experience and knowledge to achieve allocative efficiency and productivity for their firms. This is mainly because business studying allows students get more exposure to the world law of currency, while history studying only focuses on ancient relics exploration. As the majority of the firms are profit motivated, firms are more likely and more willing to hire an employer who is specialized in investment or innovation. Therefore, such initiative not only lowers social unemployment rate, but also reduces production cost and improves the productivity of goods and services.  However, others may argue that imparting historical knowledge could foster a nation's collecti...

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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremly difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How cana governments make urban life better for everyone?

It is often argued that cities are often seen as places of opportunities, though city life can be way challenging. There are many drawbacks of living in a metropolis, however, it is my opinion that governments should do much more to improve the quality of life of the average inhabitants.

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It is common nowadays for each member of the family to have their own piece of modern technology. Some people think this will lead to a break down in family relationship and communication. To what extent do you agree?

In today's digital age, it is very common for each family member to have their own personal technological device, such as smartphones, tablets, or laptops. While some individuals argue that, this increasing trend can weaken family relationship and communication, I believe this impact depend on how these technologies are used. Although there is a risk of reduced interaction, from my point of view, modern technology can even strengthen family relationships.

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Some people believe that attending single-gender schools offers more benefits, while others prefer co-educational institutions. Do single-sex schools provide more advantages or more disadvantages?

Some individuals argue that same-sex schools offer more advantages, while others say that co-educational institutions are preferable. Although single-gender schools enhance stronger relationships and lessen the distraction of romantc relationships, I believe that that disadvantages outweigh the advantages because mixed-gender institutions mirror the real world and foster healthy competition between both genders.

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the flowchart illustrates the production of colored plastic paper clips in a small factory. Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process

The aforementioned diagram explains the procedures involved in the manufacturing of coloured plastic paper clips made in a small-scale factory. Overall, it is a linear process involving several complicated processes.

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Some people think traveling abroad is necessary while others think that is not necessary because TV and the Internet can give the same information.

The debate about whether it is necessary to travel to other countries or some people claim that it is no longer necessary to take trips to other countries any more because public could get similar information from social media. this essay will discuss both views.

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“some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids”. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some parents believe that professional childcare centres offer the best care for preschool children, while others think that family members, such as grandparents, are better suited to look after young kids. Both sides have valid arguments.

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Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people’s health. Do you agree or disagree?

In my firm belief, shops should not be allowed to sell food and beverages that are harmful to our body system. Many researchs and studies have shown how dangerous it is to consume foods that contain high MSG that is mostly found in children’s sweets and snacks that are being manufactured in a factory rather than being made organic using natural ingredients. When such snacks are being exposed to young children it can affect their health rapidly as they grow older, if they are not mindful of the amount of sweets being eaten this can lead to health issues affecting their kidneys, digestive system, and heart problems. Such cases may raise concerns for parents as they might stop purchasing which eventually businesses would lose consumers from their lack of safety regulation for the food produced.

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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does thistrend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? Wht are the drawbacks?

In recent years, the preference for studying abroad among undergraduates has significantly increased. This trend provides opportunities for personal growth and country development, however, domestic institutions may receive less funding and the government may lose skilled workers.

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Some young people like to copy the behaviour and clothes of famous people today. Why might this be the case? What problems can it cause?

In this modern era, few youngsters prefer to behave and dress themselves in the same way as renowned personalities do .This essay will discuss that they do all such things to link themselves to a higher status in society and create issues like disconnecting them from their traditional wearings and styles.

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some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, there are many animals that are becoming harmful and almost disappearing. This essay will discuss reasons why this is happening and solutions to address this issue.

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In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In a growing number worldwide women and men are working full-time. This is, logical for her and him to share housewifery work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that students should study only the subjects they are interested in. Others believe that they should study all school subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is a debate about whether students should study only the subjects they like or all subjects at school. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the idea that students should focus only on their favorite subjects, because studying all subjects helps them grow in many ways and prepares them for the future.

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There are more and more parents working full time. Some people argue that childcare centres are the best in taking care of children of very young age. Others think grandparents are better carer. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

the debate about the suitable environment for childhood while their parents are at work remains ongoing. while some believe that kids are more likely to build strong interpersonal skills in childcare centres, others argue that grandparents will provide a healthy environment for the kids. From my perspective, educational centres have more advantages by enhancing children knowledge across all sectors.

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Some people believe that non-academic subjects at school should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that extracurricular subjects should be excluded from syllabus so that students can focus only on academic related topics. From my point of view, this stance is fully wrong and must be avoided at all costs as it will have a negative impact on children in their future. Regardless of the importance of academics in a student life, co-curricular and extracurricular activities should be given importance owing to its beneficial effects in their life so I fully disagree with this statement.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their houses rather than buy their houses. What are the advantages of renting a home? Should governments subsidise house prices to first home buyers?

Many individuals in some nations prefer to rent houses instead of purchasing their own houses. This is beneficial because tenants do not have to cover the costs of damages in a rented apartments and it provides flexibility in moving homes. I believe governments should make the prices of homes more affordable to first-time buyers because it will encourage many middle and low-income earners to purchase their own homes without hesistation.

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