IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 32

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that I firmly agree with that workers should be provided with a longer weekend and a shorter working week because it creates an avenue for a better balanced work-life and it can help reduce depression.

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Some argue that schools should prioritize life skills such as working teams solving problems instead of traditional academics

Most individuals believe that schools should specialize in life skills such as working as a team, tackling problems rather than traditional academics. This essay will explore this statement and explain why I completely agree with this idea.

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Your local hospital has advertised people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at hospital in your free time. - Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital - say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do - give details of when you would be available for this work.

My name is Vairag, I am a local resident of the town of Bracebridge, I read an article about voluntary work in our hospital,and I always wanted to do something for our community. I believe that this is the perfect opportunity for me to serve and give back to our community.

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Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The issue of whether youngersters who commit awful crimes should be punished in the same way as adults has sparked a great deal of debate. To a certain extent, I firmly believe that different punishments should be imposed based on different motives.

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Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university to or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages?

There has been a tendency in the number of learners taking a gap year between high school and college recently. This essay attempts to shed light on both the merits and demerits of this trend before concluding that I am in favour of the previous notion.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health, while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Gia Linh

In the modern society, the best way to maintain a healthy lifestyle is a topic of debate. Some people hold the view that working out is important to improve health while others believe that balance diet is more vital. In my opinion, both exercise and a well-rounded eating habit are equally essential to stay healthy, since both have benefits for the human body in different ways.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health, while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Thu Ha

In modern society, there are opposing views about how to live a healthy life. A large number of people think that one’s health mostly depends on physical activities, in contrast, others believe that arranging a scientific diet is the best way to achieve well-being. Two aforementioned views will be discussed in the following paragraphs before presenting my personal perspective in the conclusion.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statemeny?

It is believed by some people that individuals will have the access to free digital books and online news in the near future. Even though this prediction is possibly accurate, in my opinion, I do not agree with such statement because printed books are not replaceable and we will have to pay for the digital materials as well.

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Some people think governments should care more about education the elderly while others think they should focus on investing in education for younger people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Many people believe, that governments should support developing schools for Aged people because of technology like banking systems and online payments most people have no clue about how to use it. However, Others think they should bring more study opportunities for younger people to boost the country's economy by developing computer advancement.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in theirprofessional lives and personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risksoutweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years unemployment rates have spiked due to AI technology most companies are reducing employment by replacing computers, So it is of paramount importance to take potential risks in their professional life and personal lives to succeed in this technology world

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Some believe that the government should support artists like musicians, painters, and poets, while others argue that this is a misuse of funds. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, an issue that has fueled a heater debate is whether the art of various artists is worth spending the national money on or not. Some individuals deem that for the artistic development, the government funds should be allocated to the artists. While, other mindsets reckon that it is a waste of money and resources. This essay intends to analyse both perspective, I, however, side with the former view.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It is indeed a fact that the appropriate age of learning a foreign dialect for children has been always much debated. Some people assert that tutees should be accustomed with it in elementary school instead of high school. This phenomenon has multifarious benefits, however, sometimes a couple of problem emerge due to the same. The following paragraphs will cast a light on both pros and the cons of learning new language during primary school.

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10. Talk about a job that helps making the work better place: What the job is? How you learn about it ? Why do you think it helps so much? And explain why do you think it make the world better place.

I believe that culinary brings color to the work environment because the creative art level of this work is peaceful and joyful, I researched this job by myself and understand the values like starting my own company in the future. Plus, the majority of the world's population generating income depends on working under someone for their entire life if we could learn skills like baking, cooking, and creating new drinks like coffee, tea, and other soft drinks most of them can become entrepreneurs and give job opportunity to the youngsters this could lead to make some changes in globally.

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Increasing numbers of students are going to university instead of working after school. Advantages and disadvantages?

Increasing numbers of students are going to university instead of working after high school. Disadvantages/ advantages.

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*Parents are trying to reach childcare tutors to learn how to take care of their children. Is this essential? Give your opinion on this and illustrate an Example.

In recent times, the young couple are keen on gaining knowledge from childcare professionals on kids growth and development in an effective and care-free manner. The idea may seem exaggerating, however, the societal structure imposes the parents to opt for such classes. I strongly agree that, acquiring information in a professional way will assist in growing the child in a more cognitive way.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, sày that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Public health concerns are increasing worldwide, and many individuals believe that one way to enhance it is by building numerous sport centers around the country. However, others say that it is important to focus on other measures. This essay will discuss both these views and I will state my own perspective.

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Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes said that educational establishments are not needed in the modern world since children are able to receive all the information from the Internet, so they can be taught while staying at home. Personally, I do not agree with this position for two principal reasons.

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Many small businesses are being forced to close because they are unable to compete with multinational corporations. What problems does this cause and how can those problems be solved?

In recent years, many small businesses have been struggling to survive due to intense competition from multinational corporations. This has led to several issues, such as job losses, economic inequality, and the decline of local entrepreneurship. However, these problems can be addressed through government support, policies that promote fair competition, and consumer awareness campaigns encouraging people to support local businesses.

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International travel is becoming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to move and more tourist. Do the advantages of increased tourists outweigh disadvantages?

The numbers' of tourists are increasing and this is widely debated. Travelling abroad is now a lot more cheaper than before and regions are encouring tourists to visit their country. This may contribute to issues such as fluctuations in price rates. However despite its drawbacks, I believe that positive aspects outweigths the disadvantages.

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the plans below show the layout of a university's sports cenre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The two maps depict the plan of the university's sports centre today and how it will be in the future.

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