IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 36

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is often said "when is Rome, do as the Romans do". Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they are visit? do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?

There is a trend for the vast majority of people to hold an opinion that while being in the other country, they are ought to follow the rules and culture of it. I strongly believe that the statement is absolutely true, and will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

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Many people now have the freedom to work and live anywhere because of advances in communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people today have the flexibility to work and live wherever they choose due to improvements about the innovations for communicating and transporting. This evolution of human beings creates both positive and negative consequences for individuals and society.

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Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed when they are used as money-making machines aimed at tourists, other people believe that it is the only way to save such traditions in the world today. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that spending government funds on the cultural industry is unnecessary, and that public services should be prioritised instead. I strongly agree with this view because public services are essential for everyone and promote greater equality.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some countries, people prefer to own an accommodation rather than rent from others. This essay will explain that this situation is more popular in some nations because residents want to have more freedom and stability. However, this can be considered as both positive and negative ideas.

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Globalisation has highlighted the need for international communication. It is often argued that English should be compulsory subject for all school children around the world. Others argue that this would do more harm than good. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's world, the demand for foreign languages is surging rapidly because of increasing internationalization. There is a growing debate that schools must teach English language as a mandatory subject whereas other proponents argue that the negative effects of learning a global language outweigh its benefits. This essay will elaborate on both sides and I will present my point of view.

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Eating balanced diet is the most important factor for a healthy life. To what extent do you agree?

Balanced diet is defined as the diet containing right amount of every nutrient in order to support growth and development of individuals. In my opinion, balanced diet is essential for leading a healthy life to some extent but it is not the most important factor as there are other important components too which are equally important to lead a healthy life.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

For your entire life, the lesson of saving funds is crucial for all well-being especially, youngsters. I totally agree with the viewpoint since they might learn about financial planning and being goal-oriented

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Some students prefer classes with frequent discussions between the professor and the students with almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with many lectures and almost no discussions. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

There is ongoing debate about the most effective method of learning in higher education. While some believe that academic conversation with students is more important than lectures, others arguse that the only way to get the knowledge is by more lessons. This essay will discuss both views and present my viewpoints.

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prison is an effective punishment when the break law do you agree or disagree with this statement?

For the local citizens who break the law, an effective way of punishment is prison. While some argue in favour, I strongly oppose this notion.

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(S)Not all drivers obey the laws while driving on roads. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to fix this problem?

Nowadays,many motorists do not comply with the laws while driving on roads.It leads to dangerous consequences such as accidents and injuries.This essay will examine the main factors behind this problem including a lack of knowledge about the rules and irresponsibility,and suggest the solutions like strict fines and improving awareness to tackle it.

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Currently children have less responsibilities than they had in the past some say this is a good change some argue that it had negative effect on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion based on your personal experience

With the passage of time, it is believed that nowadays children have fewer responsibilities than children

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Currently children have less responsibilities than they had in the past some say this is a good change some argue that it had negative effect on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion based on your personal experience.

With the passage of time it is believed that nowadays children have far less responsibilities than children in the past. It is a debatable issue that whether it's a positive change or negative. This essay will shed light on both views before supporting my own opinion.

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Some people believe that technology has led to many positive developments in their lives, while others think technology is gradually taking over control of the way people live. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasoas for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or xperience.

Some argue that technology has brought to many advantages in their lives, whilst some people think that technology has already taken control the people's live way. The writer agrees that there are many advantages from technology, for instance convenience lifestyle, but there are many disadvantages caused by techology, such as replacing human jobs. This essay will elaborate on how technology machine makes our lives more convenient than before, while technology machine can enhance the unemployment rate in a country.

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Space travel has been possible for some time and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, more ink has been spilled on the issue of space travel. Some people believe that space tourism could be a negative development. However, from my perspective, this statement fails to explore the complexity of the issue and is only a lopsided analysis. Hence, in my opinion, the development in space travel will lead to better outcome.

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In the past it was only possible to contact people at home by letter or telephone. Nowadays, mobile devices mean that we can communicate with people anywhere and at any time. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays it is normal to receive or send a text message at any time. However it was not possible many years ago. While, this phenomenon has some drawbacks. I think that it's benefits are more remarkable.

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Many students are taught to push themselves to try and be better than other students, rather than working together for everyone’s benefits. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some students have been taught to be the best and push themselves beyond their limits, instead of collaborating with eachother for the general public. This essay will discuss the advantages of this situation including improving solo skills and learning how to be independent. This essay will also discuss the disadvantages including adopting bad morals and alleviating togetherness amongst students. I believe that the drawbacks of this educational strategy outweigh the benefits.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important to child's developmet as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in highschool. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, art classes for instance painting and drawing are as crucial to kid's development as other subjects, so it should be obligatory in the high school. The writer believes that art can enhance individual's ability in many aspects, for instance a creativity skill and a cognitive behaviour. This essay will elaborate on how creativity helps people's future works and cognitive behaviour is needed in the society.

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Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development?

To date, social activities on the internet have become increasingly popular, leading to less connections in person. This trend has several impacts on society. While socializing online may pertain downside including loss of inter-person intimate bonding, and pose security issues, the internet can significantly remove traditional social barriers, and can greatly enhance intimacy and safeness through advances technologies.

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In the 20th century, contact between different parts of the world has developed rapidly thanks to air travel and telecommunication. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The world is becoming smaller. This is because of the easy communication and the speed movement between countries. The last century has witnessed a technological revolution that contributed to connecting the globe in different ways. This easy contact has positive and negative impacts on peoples' lives. However, I believe that the benefits are much more than the drawbacks. In this essay, I will discuss why I strongly support the idea that emphasizes the importance of technology in connecting the world.

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In the past it was only possible to contact people at home by letter or telephone. Nowadays, mobile devices mean that we can communicate with people anywhere and at any time. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Most of the people used written form or communication like letters in olden days, and later telephone was used by many. Currently, electronic devices are used by all for communications at every stage. In this essay, I will list pros and cons of using mobile phones and share how its benefits are more significant than demerits.

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