IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 38

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, smartphones are used in every people’s life especially young individuals such as teenager and children. A few children waste hours in their daily activities on their smartphones. This essay will write about a negative development from my perspective.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some say that thus is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Following technological advancement, computers usage is surging unexpectedly in educational field. Such that it is becoming debateable, whether it brings more advantageous or disadvantageous results. There can be many positive and negative outcomes like more advance education from all over world and lose of actual mental abilites respectively. In the following paragraphs, these will be discuessed with my opinion at the end.

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Although modern life has brought with it improvements in people’s standard of living, people are not generally happy with their lives. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a huge difference between life now and what life was few years ago. While the modern ways of living has its benefis, some think people were more happy in the past. Although there have been many gifts of advanced technology which has made a person's life much easier, at the same time it has brought the troll of modern day depression too. However, despite the disadvantages of newer living standards, I believe that the advantages overweighs cons.

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The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young peopl living in cities are facing with? Give solutions to these problems

Nowadays, the youths have to overcoming a lot difficulties. there is no doubt that the past generations did not face to these type of challenges. The most of them comeing out regarding the pace of development in metropolice. Unfortunitely, these problems are becoming worse and worse.

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You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: - Today more people are travelling than ever before. - Why is this case? - What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Traveller is so popular in technology ages. Almost all people influenced other people because all people use social media and they love sharing photos.

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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

Research in different types of technologies are a crucial essence of a country's growth. While some people think that the government should have the power on this aspect whereas others lean towards the opinion of handling this task to the private companies. However, I think the government should have the upper authority in this mater.

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With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources.

It is admitted that humanity’s lack of new energetic resources, however a lot of people believe that we ought to keep discovering new areas with fossil fuels, but it will make even more difficulties for us.

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Some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species while others think it is a waste of valuable money.

It is widely agreed that throughout the years a wide range of creatures have become extinct. However, some people don't want to invest their money in protecting animals, they tend to use funds to strengthen the army or economy of the country. Nevertheless, I believe that losing a few million dollars is a small price to pay compared to disappearance of large groups of living beings.

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In many countries parents worry about the amount of time their children spend watching TV and using the internet. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In numerous countries parents are afraid of how often their children use TV or the Internet.

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On one hand, nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. On the other hand, nuclear weapons are a potent threat to world peace. Do the benefits of nuclear technology outweigh the risks? Give your opinion and support it with reasons.

Nuclear provides the lowest capital and clean waste, however, it has potential to be used as a weapon that threatens world peace. Based on those facts, I believe the benefits still outweigh the drawbacks because the world needs sustainable energy and the government can make policies to prevent the misuse of nuclear.

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Artisits need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artisits should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent di you agree or disagree

It is mentioned that liberty is a fundamental aspects for artisits so they could express their ideas. While society think that this is may be true, it is essential for us to have a better understanding about this point of view. To a certain degree, i agree as total freedom enables the artisits to have better imagination and explore the art world. On the other hand, it might not be beneficial if the artisits were not realistic and do not comprehend what are being asked from them.

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Question- Buying tickets on the internet such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this outweigh the disadvantage

Online shopping provides convenient ways to buy many things such as books, groceries and tickets. It became popular among people due to the accessibility and comparable, however, the drawback such as an increase the consumptive is something to be considered. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages.

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People are now living in a “throwaway society” where things are used for a short period of time and then thrown away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it cause?

It is true that using products for a short time is caused by modern people living in a throwaway society. There are two causes behind this phenomenon , and I believe this has caused spending money and environmental pollution.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

As the technology is growing up, the companies are trying to advertise their products in a sensational way, and it is crucial that they emphasize that their products are new and better compared to other companies. In my opinion, this sort of competition in the advertising industries is positive development and a healthy way to grow up their company.

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Question Prompt: In many countries people have to go away from their family and friends to find work. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

It has been observed due to the increasing population, job opportunities are decreasing day-by-day. To grab these job opportunities, most of the individuals must migrate to metropolitan cities, leaving their hometowns and closed ones. Although moving away can have negative impact on people’s mental health and lead to increase the stress levels, the benefits, including having wider job opportunities and better career prospects, ultimately outweigh these drawbacks.

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Some people suggest that social networking and online communication have increased social isolation. In what ways do you think this has happened? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Some argue that social media and digital communication have caused the enhancing of social isolation. While these technologies allow us to connect with family and friends abroad through various apps, I think they also raise concerns about how virtual interactions affect our relationships and well-being. This shift has led to feelings of loneliness and superficial connections.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people assume that it is wise to distribute plentiful knowledge as possible in scientific research, business , and the academic world. Others think that some insight is too crucial to be shared liberally. In this essay, I will discuss about both of their perspectives why knowledge and informations are essential for scientific research, bussiness, and the academic field as well as why it is vital to spread important valuable data openly.

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In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The age gap between parents and children, these days, is almost bigger than ever all over the world. Generally, I suppose that these huge gaps between parents and their children will cause too many traumas among them, but I will try to explain pros and cons in the following sentences.

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In today's digital age, anyone with a smart phone can capture and share photographs. This assessability and photograph of demolishes. The value of professional photograph to extend to agreeor risagree

Photographs are one of the best ways to save memories. In this digital age, pervasiveness of smart phones passionate human beings to capture pictures and due to the importance of professional domain remain less popular. I partially agree with this statement and viewpoint will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

There are plenty of people who are becoming interested in searching for the history of the house they live in. They have their own reasons for that. However, in my opinion, it is all about the curiousity of human beings.

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