IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 38

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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it is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. do you think the advantages of taking risks outweight the disadvantages?

In everyday life, we are facing various situations where we have to choose and act in a certain way. Many people come across opportunities and have to risk something in order to reach their goal. Although there are drawbacks in taking risk but I believe that the advantages is far greater than the disadvantages.

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Task 1 The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the plan of a public park and what it was like in 1920 and today.

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With the increasing demand for energy sources such as oil and gas, should people be looking for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places? Do the advantages of locating new source of energy outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such areas ?

It is undeniable that the upsurging demand for energy resources has led to the consideration of extracting oild and gas from remote areas. So, the number of companies looking for alternatives are increasing day-by-day. In my opinion, it has equal number of disadvantages and advantages due to the reasons explained in the following paragraphs.

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It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. 🔸Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples.

It is undeniable that the advancement in medicine, life expectancy has considerably increased due to which older population surpass the number of younger population in many parts of the world. In my opinion it is a positive as well as negative development and the reasons behind will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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Some countries encourage foreign companies to open a branch office in their country. Many people think that the government should focus on encouraging local businesses to expand rather than inviting foreign businesses to open branches. To what extent do you agree?

Over the last decades, number of prominent companies have luanched their branch throughout the world, while some countries appreciate these offices and eagers to develop these chain office in their nations, a large number of people believe, the government should allocate to the small local business to expand instead of bring that company into their societies. I partialy agree with this an idea, in this essay I will examine both views.

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Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

being a renowned such as a popular film star or athlete can brings obstacles as well as perks. From my point of view, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages due to the high income and high position in communities.

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In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not be allowed to be out fo doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In every country on the planet, there is disagreement around the topic of curfew. With regard to this topic, in many areas in United states, Juveniles are not permitted to go outside home in night time after a specific time; moreover they want to go out, they should go with adult person. According to my perspective, this opinion has some pros and cons.

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it is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people argue that it is crucial for people should take risks both in their occupations and private lives. In my opinion, There are some benefits of taking risks will outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some claim that it is compulsory for professionals to work in their original country while others believe that they should have a right to work abroad.This essay will discuss both views and provide my own perspective on the matter.

Some people think that individuals who are professionals in their field they should serve their country, while others say that they should have the option of pursuing their talents abroad. In this essay, I want to explain both ideas and state my opinion.

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A recent newspaper article reported that a 14 year old boy who seriously destroyed his got the punishment to clean the street instead of being sent to prison. Do you think this is right or do you think that such criminals should be sent to prison.

If a 14 year boy seriously destroys his, it's very difficult to say if he should have to be sent to prison or get a different treatment.

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The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extend do you agree and disagree.

Nowadays, the crisis of energy has arised a huge concern among the public. Therefore, some people claim that exploring safe althernatives to fossil fuels is the most crucial priority for society today. In my opinion, I agree with this notion to a large extend.

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Differences between countries are barely evident these days. Everyone in the world is wearing the same brand and watching the same TV channels and movies. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

It is true that differences amid nations are hardly even noticeable in these days and everyone in the world should have to wear similar brands and watch the same Tv channels and movies. I think this kind of development can be seen positive to some extent as it helps to reduce the discrimination and language barrier amidst nations but it largely affect the language and the identity of the particular nations.

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The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate locally produced food. To what extent does the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

People consumption habits can influence to environment and economy life. The example is about food, especially local food. The food we consume every day is generally food that comes from farmers who produce crops in rural areas. The food travels thousands of miles form farm to consumer with prior management between farmers and distributors before the food is consumed by people.

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Most pe think that teenagers should choose their jobs more realistically, however some of them think that they should choose job that they like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Choosing a job is difficult for teenagers.While if teenagers choose their job realistically it can make more profit,however working at the job that they want will bring more job satisfaction.

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Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. Why is this happening? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

In these days, the families' bonds have been eroded as in the past, and many individuals get accustomed to this. There are plenty of causes of it, including spending less time, and advances in technology . Hence, its disadvantages prevail over the benefits associated with this problem.

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Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and attitudes by others in the same age group. This is called “peer pressure”.Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages

These days, the young generations have a range of the relationships with populations whose age are the same as them , and their friends skills and manners affect them, so this happening is famoused 'peer group pressure'. While peer pressure have some merits, I still believe that cannot overshadow the demerits.

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These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantage of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

One of the widely discussed issues these days is mobile phones and internet. Of course, there is no absolute agreement that someone find phones benefical, while others consider everything associated with the internet negatively. I agree that there are both pros and cons to it but I believe advantages outweigh disadvantages.

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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

One of the main duty of parents is caring to their children. Most of the people think that mothers and fathers should take a parenting courses to be a good parent. I partially agree with that idea and in this essay I will discuss both side of that statement.

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WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In recent years, some individuals argue that convenience foods are likely to become more predominant and could eventually take place of traditional foods and cooking methods. While I agree with some aspects of the argument, I disagree with its overall conclusion. In this essay, I will demonstrate my reasons along with relevant examples and a balanced view.

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Choosing a career path is one of the most significant decisions, for its impact in shaping an individual's long-run job satisfaction. Some argue that deciding on a career early early career and sticking to it can ensure a stable and peaceful life, while others believe that shifting between diferent jobs can also be a exciting and challenging issue to enjoy. This essay will compare and discuss both perspectives and to see the correctness of pursuading persuading individuals themselves to make a fast and strong opinion about what to do in careers early. Careers early on/early career.

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