IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 390

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people get into debt by buying things they do not need and are unable to afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Many people are trapped into debt by being consumptive for buying things that are not really important which they cannot afford. In my view, this behavior occurred because often people want to impress their peers. Moreover, impulsive buying can happen because people do not have enough knowledge about finance. This can be changed by being mindful to themselves, not actually paying attention to what other people are thinking.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

Numerous people claim, that money rules the world and the majority of individuals prefer to opt for an unloved job with a high income instead of exploring themselves and passing through this limited lifetime alongside a beloved occupation. Some people believe, this has become to be more common due to deep social involvement and unfairly raised living wages in recent years, however, the consequences resulting from such accidents are deplorable for both - the employer and the employee.

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The world of work is forever changing at a fast pace. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions for how people should prepare themselves for work in the future.

Nowadays, the work life has altered so fast and the people can not depend on the today’s job. Sometimes, the employee can be suddenly changed by other individuals or even by artificial intellegent. The reasons of this phenomena are because the development of technologies as well as low level of human quality so that some of suggestions should be made to tackle this situations. Both causes and advices will be elaborated below.

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space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the recent advancements in technolog, the idea of finding a new planet where humankind can reside is becoming more and more poupular. Since exploring space is a costly program, some people argue that this fund should be allocated to more essential areas. I agree with this point of view, and in the following essay, my idea will be supported with some rationale and examples.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both school and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

An optimal lifestyle is crucial in regards to the growth of child. Particularly, the child's muscles transformation needs healthy ingredients to be well-built. However, lots of children do not prefer to eat a nutritious food. Because of this, I wholeheartedly agree that it is a mutual responsibility of both parents and school to prioritize providing a nourishing food for the children. I believe that an unhealthy cuisine may have detrimental effects on the child's constitution.

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate regarding many schools are enhancing the education's environments by allowing students to comment or criticize their lecturers. Otherwise, the opponents argue that it will reduce the respectation between learners and teachers. From my perspective, although this proposal theoretically has positive effect in educational quality, it also should be used as a stringent method in teaching.

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In their advertisements, business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It has been a trend that a lot of business show new and creative part of their products these days. As technologies are improving rapidly, firms need new ways to advertise their goods which is a positive phenomenon.

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Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Novel development of the online platform has been a considerable impact for the business and educational meetings according to the recent studies. Despite of its drawbacks, it has many more benefits, in the view of the writer.

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Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is true that online classes are the different mutation of campus, some college would like to hold this type of classes in their curriculum. Although this trend appears detrimental drawbacks because of the students' health as well as the distraction, I believe they are eclipsed by the advantages due to the conveniece and operational costs.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars

Over the past decade, traffic jams caused by cars have become a major concern in people's lives. This worrying trend needs to be analysed thoroughly to tackle this issue. It is argued that one of the significant reasons is increasing car ownership among the population. I strongly agree with the latter opinion. Therefore, this forthcoming essay will discuss other alternatives to cars, and other regularities that can be introduced by the government.

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Environmental problems are becoming a global issue and are challenging the quality of life.do you think that environmental problems will produce better results if it is addressed globally or should be addressed by individual countries?

In recent years, the environmental issues become global and impacted people's live quality around the world. In my opinion, this situation should be carried out globally instead of by individual countries, as we know that the output of environmental issues could be affected worldwide and if it is addressed by the synergy of many region it could be done faster and better.

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the plans show how a coastal land has developed into coastal park

The maps describe the transformation of coastal land into a park.

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“The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers.” What do you think about this opinion? State your point and give reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is argued that to study English efficiently one should seek tutors who speak English as the first tongue. While others believe that it is equally beneficial to be taught under teachers whom English is not their first language. Moreover, foreign teachers will have a better understanding of the challenges one need to overcome to be fluent in English. However, I strongly disagree with the latter opinion. This forthcoming essay will discuss why I believe that being taught English by people who are originally from countries that have English as their first language.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

n today’s world, many developed countries are experiencing a substantial increase in life’s duration and that caused a big obstacle for the government. This essay will illustrate major problems and possible solutions to reduce detrimental impact for this issue.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is imp for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and give opinion.

A number of individuals believe that adults need to involve their children to participate in group iniciatives, while other consider that young must be able to entertain themselves. This essay completely agrees with the first point of view, due to the fact that one of the parental duties is to help minors to learn right values and socially approved behaviour through collective interactions and cooperation.

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Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that working for global companies is better than a small one's. I agree with this statement because big company provide high chance of promotions and professional advancement for it members.

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Most people believe that social media such as facebook and instagram negatively impact on society and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

, Social media just like any other thing in this life has its downsides and upsides, In that case, the downsides of social media are it separates the population from reality, folk get used to texting their friends instead of meeting them, it seems to me that it made social anxiety affects more individuals than the past.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

In today’s world, many developed countries are experiencing a substantial increase in life’s duration and that caused a big obstacle for the government. This essay will illustrate major problems and possible solutions to reduce detrimental impact for this issue.

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in recent years, there has been a rise in the use of performance-enhancing drugs in sports. What are the consequences of doping for athletes? What measures should be taken to combat this issue?

From the past few years, the use of banned drugs in the competitive games has become surged drastically in order to boost athlete's' performance, resulting into a number of alarming consequences what should be highlighted and be addressed at the earliest by finding out some appropriate solution of the same. Both are the outcomes and solutions will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think competitive sport is important for a child's education. Others think it has negative effects on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is argued that competitive sports in important for children’s education. while other believe it could be detrimental for the child. This essay believes that, although it could be distracting for students, it has greater good because it could teach them to be more sportive in nature.

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