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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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some people feel that entertainers are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of job should be highly paid?

The entertainment has been the top priority of majority of people in this stressful world. So, entertainers like comedians and singers are getting earning more money than other professionals like doctors, nurses. I completely agree with the notion that these people who are from the field of entertainment are earning much more than previous decade.

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Methods of transportation for people traveling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK.

The pie charts illustrate how people of a university in the UK traveled to school in 2004 and 2009.

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some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones . why is this case / is this positive or negative development

in the contemporary era the use of technology is increasing not only in the adults but also in young generation too , which has so many reasons which i will discuss in the following paragraphs . I believe that it has a negative impact on them .

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The best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that make cost of fuel higher is the more suitable approach to adress natural issues. I am afraid that I will be disagree with this statement.

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It is observed that, currently, more and more people are working longer hours. What are the causes of this phenomenon? What effects does this have on society?

In later years, there is a trend that employees have been working for a longer period of hours during their shift. This can have many advantages and disadvantages depending on the situation each person might be facing, I believe that this can have a good impact on today's working society and can help the long term effect on any workers lives.

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It is observed that, currently, more and more people are working longer hours. What are the causes of this phenomenon? What effects does this have on society?

In this essay it is going to talk about how more and more people are working longer hours. It is a problem that is happening world wide and is taking a toll on people's lives. Firstly we are going to talk about some causes of this phenomenon and secondly we are going to talk about some of the effects that this has on society.

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Some people want the government to spend more money for looking life on other planets; however, others think that it is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth that the government should be solving. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Human are always searching better life in out of the planet. Some people believe that the policy makers allocate the funds to explorers. However, on the same scale other argues that public funds should be spend on motherland issues which our earth already facing that need to be adressed by government. I believe that spending money on exploring other planets would not be the best solution for humanity instead environmental, education and health problem.

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Even tough governments have worked hard to bring about improvements in the healthcare system, the overall standard of physical health in developed countries is decreasing. What are the potential reasons for this, and what are some of the long-term effects?

Nowadays the majority of ministries suffer from improving the healthcare system. In general activity, physical fitness can not develop in some communities. In this essay, we will discuss the effects and causes of this problem.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with high payment even if it doesn't call to you at all. I completely dis agree with this opinon and think that job situationis much more importent than salary.

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

The problem of obesity among morden people is alarming and reqires our imminent attention. The modern lifestyle is the culprit of the increasing number of overweight people and both the governmetn and schools can take active stepsto alleviate the problem.

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One of the major problems that faces today is goverments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the enviroment.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is housebuilding and protecting environment.It is undeniable that houses have become an essential part of our life from ancient time.However,these days it is not the only concern,because it is also necessary to take care of surrounding nature,which is harmed by the construction of houses.

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Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jails, while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent to hospital. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people belief that drug addicts must be treated like criminals. Another belief that they should be treated like cancer patients and sent to hospital for rehabilitation their addicts. i completly belief that they must sent to jails. this essay will discuss both views.

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Because of modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skill, but others believe that handwriting is still an important skill. Discuss both and give your opinion.

People have different views whether handwriting skills are still necessary in modern life or its will replace to technology writing. In my opinion, despite handwriting ability is needy skill in these days, people will use more techological writing forms. In this essay will discuss from both perspectives and suggest my idea.

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Eating too much sugar is harmful to health. Some people think it is the government’s responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think it is an individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Obesity is the main reason for various health problems such as heart disease and bloating/ Indigestion which are mainly start from having extreme sugar. The few pople think that the governance take action on sugar consumption and other believe that humankind should have control on it because this is their responsibility. I will discuss both sides with my own views in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals are of the opinion that parents should organise activities for their children's spare time, while some arguers think that youngsters have freedom to choose what they want to do in their free time. This essay will discuss both these viewpoints and explain why I agree that free time activities should be managed by parents.

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In many modern societies grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandparents. What do you think are consequences of this?

Nowadays in this modern world parents prefer to move out of their home after getting married. Because of that grandchildren have less time to spend with their grandparents. There are a myriad of results of it, especially negative effects.

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Although it is generally illegal, physical punishment continues in many countries. Some argue that parents should have the right to punish their children in this way. Do you agree or disagree?

Despite being generally illegal, punishing physical still exist in some countries of the world. Due to the fact, some people argue that physical punishment is one of thier way to guide children to the right way. From my point of view, I totally disagree with this statement and this essay will provide the reasons for this opinion.

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Nowadays, as a part of the educational process, students work at a company for a short period of time without pay. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

nowadays, many of students do on job training at the company for short term without salary. in this essay will elaborte the drawbacks and benefit. Despite, I believe the advantages will dominate the disadvantages.

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many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. do you agree or disagree? agree= smoking worked, disagree= children ask parents, search for substitute

There is a drammatic increase in sugar consumption as it is provided in a variety of products, so some argue that the rich-sugar products should be expensive while others say that is not an ideal sollution. In this report, I will go through both sides of this trend, and then allow me to share my point of view.

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Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to anaudience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

A majority of individuals have stage fears so they are not able to talk in front of huge crowd as well as even can't give presentation on some topic.Regarding this case, numerous folks believe that Communication skill must be tought by the academic institution to develop such a skill at an early age. I think this is an very essential skill and I fully agree with the given view and further, my stance is discussed in the following paragraphs.

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