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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that in modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the modern era, it is so easy for youngster to become dependent on other peoples . But others believe that there are large amount of youngers still earn money by themselves. I think that, despite there are some people dependent on their parents, today's youth still independent and I will clarify it in the below paragraphs.

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Some people think that books should be stopped in school and that videos, films and computers should be used instead. To what extent do you agree?

There has been quite an obvious discussion around the topic of digital education material in school. While some people believe that we shold use e-books in the classes instead of hard copy one. I would argue that there is some points that we should take in account. I will explain my reason in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends.Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Finding work is a hotly debated topic that divides opinion. Some people think that the best way to seek a job is moving away from their hometown and friends.I think that, despite some drawbacks it brings, it stills does more good than harm.

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Some school children buy healthy food from the school cafeteria. However, some buy unhealthy food. What are the reasons for both these situations? Should schools be allowed to sell unhealthy food?

Food is the most essential thing to make a healthy body. Many School children prefer to buy healthy food from the school cafeteria but others prefer unhealthy food. In this essay, I will discuss both views and why school cafeterias need to stop being allowed to sell unhealthy food.

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Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?

In many countries around the world, drugs such as cocaine and heroin are prohibited while alcohol and cigarettes sale is allowed. Many consider tobacco and alcoholic drinks drugs as well, defending that laws should be banning these items too, being applied to all drugs. In my view, despite I believe alcohol and tobacco cause damages to its consumers, it should not be banned, but still limited, because its still part of many societies' culture.

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Some people say that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Indeed, It is irrefutable that due to advancements in all spheres of life and overpopulation, the major issues faced by the folks are excessive pollution and housing problems which leads to spread of various diseases. So, many individuals argue that the authorities should focus on reducing these troubles. I also think that the government should focus on the measures to tackle with these problems.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

The way we all communicate has changed dramatically since the introduction of the informational technologies. Now it is possible to do things that were unimaginable before or only spoken about in the context of science fiction. It goes without saying that such extreme advancements in this realm have lead to significant shifts in the way people talk to each other. Objectively, it is still way to early to draw final conclusions on how this all impacted humanity, but it is crystal clear that some consequences of this new informational era are obvious.

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The way children spend their free time has been changed by technology. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The way children spend their free time has been changed by technology.

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Would you rather visit the moon or the sun? What would you do there?

Nowadays, It is apparent that traveling to the moon would be easier than the sun, since the distance is shorter and the temperature could be colder. Moreover, many of spaceships had been sending to observed the moon, also there were people that stepped out on the moon.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace Why is this happening Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact to society?

The ever-growing demand of robots and artificial intelligence which humans will be replaced in the workplace. The primary cause of this issue stems from the modernized feature can provide exact outcome without being exhausted. However, I believe in some way this statement can create a substantial effect on the society.

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The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishment for driving offences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Accidents on the road has claimed a large number of lives nowadays. Introduction of severe sentence to all the drivers will help safeguard the road users. I completely agree to a greater extent. The essay below will elaborate further on the above notion.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to takle the issue?

Nowadays we are dealing with global warming. The effects can be serious for our lives in the earth. It came from several factors and mostly come from human. We can take a preventive movement from ourself like use public transportation and starting to use electric vehicles. Meanwhile, government should support the green technologies with providing rule and alternative powers.

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The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishment for driving offences.To what extent do you agree/ disagree?

In recent years ,it has been reported that many deaths and injuries have been caused by negligence by road users. and some believe the only way to improvise such situations is setting harsh rules and regulations for road offenders. In my own opinion, l completely agree that the laying down of these measures is the best way to curb such incidences and will be explained below.

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Studies show that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can know when they leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?

Many criminal have a low stage of education which is showed by a study. Some people believe that education is the only way to decreases the crime and educate the prisoners so that they know about it. This essay completely agree with this statement because by gain knowledge people can able to make comparison between bad and good thing besides, prisoner knows about the punishment and how a criminal treated by society .

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Topic: robots and artificial are being developed to replace humans in the work place. Why this is happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

In era of information technology, all human have been reached the high level in development and taking measure into human's life from industrial technology until nowadays. Robots and artificial intelligence are examples for results as achievements but besides, there is still some issues that scientists can unexpected.

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Many people think that public libraries should only provide books and should not waste their money on expensive hi-tech media, such as softwares, DVDs or videos. Do you agree or disagree?

The technology development is a big challenge globally. It touches all aspects of human life, including the development of library. This comes ubiquitious where everything is going to be well developed with technology. Majority of people think that is unnecessary for public libraries provide books only rather than expensive hi-tech media. Based on this occassion, this essay exhibits strongly disagree with those majority of people.

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All nations on the planet have a responsibility to lessen the greenhouse gases that they emit. Although this can be very difficult for developing countries, they also need to make significant reductions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It responsibilities for all nations to emit greenhouse gas. It is often argued that development countries do it very hardly. This essay agrees with the statement that development countries sure to make significant reductions. Less concern about luxuries lifestyles and produce eco friendly vehicle may help them to reduce green house gas.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than results.

Innthis contemporary era some segment of society assert that higher authrity ought to arrange budget railway instead of elections. In my opinion I agree with this notion. The reasons behind my agreement are anyalised in the subsequent paragraphs.

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The world has many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries that were more suitable and livable for people in those time than they are now.

A vast number of cities and towns were constructed in ancient time. These were best places to live for people. However, these are not longer suitable nowadays. This is due to the fact that these towns and cities lack public transportation and essential modern facilities such as hospitals and schools. Hence, local governments should establish public transportation system and start to establish necessary facilities.

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Robots and artificial intelligent are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on social?

Currently, thanks to development of technology that many robots and artificial intelligent devices appear and replace the number of workers in the company. This is occurring because robots and many AI can do more work than human like risk jobs. It can be easily done by robots and can avoid dangerous for human. This writer believes that the development of artificial intelligent and robots have drawbacks on our life because increasing of unemployed people.

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