IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 392

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that the government should ensure that people lead to a healthy life, while others believe that individuals should have their own choices. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that the government must make sure that people lead to a healthy lifestyle. However, some people argue that individuals should have their own options. In my perspective, implementing healthy lifestyle gives many benefits for people itself. Meanwhile, sometimes healthy lifestyle is something that not every person could provide. This essay will discuss both perspective and provide reasons why healthy lifestyle is essential for the people.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important to a child’ development as other objects, so it should be compulsory in high school. To what extent you agree or disagree

In today’s society, the issue of whether many art subjects should be compulsory to learn in the curriculum of the high school or not has sparked a degree of controversy among people. Although this tendency appears some problems, I do totally concur with this.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important to a child’s development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

In recent times, art courses, regard as painting and drawing are as crucial to a develop of children as other core subjects, therefore, it should be obligatory for students in university. This writer will agree with this statement and show the viewpoint in this essay.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is claimed that the curriculum should allow the art classes to contribute to the fluency of gaining knowledge. This writer believes that art classes could improve the level of creativity. It has been suggested that these courses can develop the other subjects due to improving the various of skills.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Taking risks has become significant for individuals’ lives, for their proffessional lives as well as their personal lives. Despite some possitive effects, I certainly believe that disadvantages are outweighed the advantages.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Many produced foods consist of high levels of sugar, hence, it contributes to many health problems. Therefore, some consider the increase in cost can lower the frequency in purchasing This essay agrees with this statement because it raises awarenes among people and also make it impossible for people with low income to buy it.

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that the Government should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people may think it is their responsibility to take care of their diet and health because they are the one who control their own lives nevertheless other may argue that the Government should be responsible for them. This is a bit controversial to disscuss in the public but in my opinion, individual should take their own responsibility no matter it is for their health or diet because I believe as an individual we should be able to make our own decision and we should be the one to lead our way.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

In this essay, I will share my view about how an advertising nowadays could influence the buyer. Some people think a product’s commercial display could highly affect the number of its buyers. However, others may say vice versa. People are no longer care about it. I strictly agree that advertisements are repeated and I do not believe it anymore as the factor of purchasing something.

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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, it is common to see people smoking in public places. But according to scientific research reveals, smoking would be harmful for nearby people more than the person smoking. There is an opinion that smoking should be prohibited in public places in order to dilute the situation. Personally, I strongly agree with this statement.

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more houses are needed in many countries to cope with increasing populations.Some people believe it would be better to build house in existing town and cities while others thnk that the government should develop new towns in rural areas.Discuss both view and give your opinion.

A significant number of countries are facing the necessity build more houses to accommodate the booming

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While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believe that the majority of people prefer to learn work duties from experienced people, while others want to learn by the university education in academic way. This is an unpredictable debate as some people firmly support their arguments, while others adamantly object to it. I have solid reasons to agree with both of sides which are waste of time and importance of education.

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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today's modernized era, the vast majority of world suffer from several environmental complications and they are doing their best to solve it. While Certain individuals hold the view that states around the global need to get over these problems individuallly, I totally disagree and I firmly believe that countries ought to deal with them as a one nation.

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Some people say that violence in the media promotes violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Certain individuals believe that violence occurs due to the negativity spread by media. I have a neutral viewpoint about the affect of media on the behaviour of masses. From my perspective, there are a multitude of reasons behind such kind of offensive behaviour and media could be one of them. This essay will explore how means of information affects society .

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different views on whether science studises should to studied for people's lives or for other purposes. I would agree that the significant aim of scientific advanced is to develop public lives.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

People have different views on whether science studises should to studied for people's lives or for other purposes. I would agree with that the significant aim of scientific advanced is to develop the public lives.

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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment, such as coursework and projects, is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, formal examinations are a standard method of fairness in the evaluation process to evaluate the student’s performance. Formal examinations can evaluate skills such as learning and critical thinking in stressful situations but I totally disagree that formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance because formal examinations cannot evaluate the creative skill and survival skill. I think continual assessment is the other effective way to assess a student's performance.

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In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviours. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

At present, educational institutions in some countries are facing excessive difficulties to adapt with student attitudes. In the following paragraphs, I intend to discuss the reasons behind this situation and provide solutions to overcome the problem.

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Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organisation. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this day and age, young generations tend to start up because they enjoy facing the difficulties of being entrepreneurs instead of working from night to five with a salary paid. From my point of view, the benefits of starting up outweigh the drawbacks.

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Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

An argument has arisen between two groups. Some nations believe that their citizens are obliged to do army service right after they graduate from school, especially for the boys. Others are attracted to adopt this system. I agree with the notion that other countries are suggested to apply this policy since it will enforce the defence system. I will elaborate more about my point of view in this essay.

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Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

An argument has arisen between the two groups. Some nations believe that their citizens are obliged to do army service right after they graduate from school, especially for the boys. Others are attracted to adopt this system. I agree with the notion that other countries are suggested to apply this policy since it will enforce the defence system. I will elaborate more about my point of view in this essay.

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