IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 392

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In developing countries, rural children have less access to education.some people say that this problem is solved bquestoiy providing teachers and schools. Other think that computer and internet should be provided. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is unfortunate that in the midst of vast progress in every field of city lives, there are also some impoverished areas where education is not accessible for every child. To tackle this issue, some people suggest to send teachers and build schools, others advocate for distant learning by providing Internet and digital devices. I believe both measures can solve the problem, however, the former idea is more cost-effective and beneficial to local children.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is positive or negative development?

In this new era with high prevalence of entrepreneurs, the creation of innovative products has become more popular, mainly because of the competitiveness and the necessity to improve their marketing. I consider that their positive impacts outweigh negative ones, and in this essay, I will explain my reasons in detail.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is no matter what period people live in, learning as well as education is something we must do, to contribute to a better life. Nowadays, some university students want to learn about other subjects beside their main courses. On the other hand, a part of other believes that spending all their time and attention to studying for a qualification is more significant. In my opinion, I prefer the former statement to the second idea.

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Museum and Art Galleries should concentrate on work that show history and culture of their own country rather than work of the other part in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Social places such as museum and art galleries have an integral part in understanding history. It is, therefore, not surprising to see how it has caused a controversy among people about whether countries should focus their own history and culture or not. Some people firmly support their argument, others adamantly object to it. I have solid reasons to agree with both two of which are presenting their cultural heritage and giving chance to different cultures.

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Most countries spend large amount of money on weapons to defend themselves though they are not at war. Some believe those countries should spend the money to help poor countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Lots of people suppose that the authorities should spend money on assisting underdeveloped countries instead of spending on improving their military strength as they must not face any risks of war. In my view, I agree with this statement.

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More and more people today are moving away from where their friends and family live. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, we live in an epoch of globalization. As a consequence, more and more people are moving away from their motherlands and hometowns. Some believe the trend has more negative sides, whereas the others conversely consider the pluses do overweigh minuses. In this essay, both advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon will be represented.

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Some feel that cities shold be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, big cities are developing and growing extremely fast. Unfortunately, not all of them are convinient and comfortable to live in. Therefore, developers make new plans for improvement all the time. Some believe that the desing is the thing number one that should be focused on, whereas the others conversely deem functional is much more critical. In this essay, both advantages and disadvantages of those points will be represented.

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Juvenile deliquency is on rise today. in our modern times , more and more adolescents are commiting crime. what are the possible reasons? is there any solution to this problem?

In recent years, the number of juvenile delinquents is increasing, and this issue has gained popularity among people. There are certain some reasons and solutions which will be discussed in this essay.

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Some young people are sent to prison for minor crimes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such imprisonment?

Some minor offenes are punishable by prison terms. In modern times, the protection of human rights has become an important concept in the world, which is the reason for the stricter laws. In my opinion, strict law enforcement is good but sentencing young people to prison for minor offenses may be very harsh. The advantages and disadvantages of this argument will be thoroughly analysed and discussed in this essay before drawing a conclusion.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the world has become more competitive than it was. Consequently, people strive to gain more money, get a better job, and have a better life quality. It is undeniable that taking risks can be an accelerator for achieving goals since it reduces time and effort. This essay will elaborate on reasons why I think the benefits of taking risks is more important than the drawbacks.

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ou should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task. Some people argue that keeping pets is beneficial for longevity while others believe that household animals are not healthy for people to have as companions. Discuss both sides of the argument, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many parts of the world, domestic animals especially cats and dogs are loved by many individuals. Pets are very close to people and infact many people believe that pets around you increase the lifespan of humans. Although, some people debate that pets are not healthy enough for humans as they can can contain germs that can be harmful for humans.However, I am a strong advocate of this approach and believe that pets are very essential in a humans life as they bring happiness in our lives.

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A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil. As the world's oil resources will eventually run out, it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power, such as wind and solar. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays developing countries are going through a problem of oil extinction. It is believed by some people that rather than spending lots of money on searching for oil. It is recommended that this money could be spent on finding out new sources of energy such as wind and solar. In my opinion, i strongly agree with this idea as this will save a huge amount of money and time as well as, it will promotes the introduction of a new environmentally friendly power source.

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Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than a high salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the given statement?

It is claimed by some individuals that job satisfaction is a more notable factor than a high income. I disagree with this statement, there are several main reasons, such as getting something which is wanted and new opportunities for improvement, they will be discussed in this essay.

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Today more and more people want things instantly (e.g.: goods, service, news). Why is this? Is it positive or negative development?

It has been pointed out that the majority of people wish to have everything immediately such as goods, services, and news. This author believes that satisfying human’s impatience for their desires is the reason for this situation and this is a negative development.

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Today more and more people want things instantly (e.g.: goods, service, news) Why is this? Is it positive or negative development?

In this modern era, nations expect their life to be like an installed packaged noodle cup. Technology growth means humans also need to accelerate their flow in ordinary life which leads to the instant things desire trend in modern citizens. This could offer both advantages and disadvantages but I believe that the positive side is the major part of this statement due to the amount of money that needs to be paid to solve the problems and the development of making things become faster and more convenient.

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In some places, teenagers are encouraged to get part-time jobs while they are still in school. Do the advantages of teenagers working outweigh the disadvantages

In today's era, every particular household has its own electronic item like a computer. Having a computer carries lots of advantages , children can easily access knowledge about the world through Artificial Intelligence (AI). Besides that numerous teenagers also misuse computers by playing games and chatting. In this essay, I will examine the benefits and drawbacks of using computers and provide an eligible conclusion.

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In most of the countries of the word youngsters are involved in some kind of paid work. People have different view about it: some think it is completely wrong, while other believe it is a valuable work experience. Discuss both views.

In most of the countries of the word youngsters are involved in some kind of paid work. People have different view about it: some think it is completely wrong, while other believe it is a valuable work experience. In my opinion, it would be enough if children had a limit in paid work.

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In some contries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

People from some nations prefer to buy homes and live there instead of paying rent. In this essay, I will outline various potential reasons for this, as well as explain why it is advantageous.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Companies nowadays have a tendency to focus on the innovativeness of their products in advertisements. Personally, I contend that pressure from the market is among the major drivers for this trend. Despite being a shrewd marketing approach,it is not a particularly positive one from my perspective.

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n many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?

Nowadays, the governments in many nations have a trend that investing money in new technology to cope with the public. In a civilized society, the range of invididual demands is increasing, so the government must enhance technology's convenience. In my point of view, I believe that the money which the government spend on new technology is suitable.

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