IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 60

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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school should focus on traditional subject. like math rather than practical skill like cooking. agee or disgree and give own opinion

The debate over whether schools should focus solely on academic subjects rather than include extracurricular lessons in their curriculum. While some say that academic subjects are essential for future careers, others believe practical skills are equally important for personal development. In my view, focusing on traditional subjects will benefit more in the long-term position.

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The Contribution of Various Economic Sectors to Xcountry Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017 and 2018

The table illustrates the percentage of contribution of three various economic sectors ( Agriculture, Industry, and Service

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In some counties, when someone gets old, they often go to live in a home with other older people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

It is a practice in some nations that, when any member of the family get old, they move to old-age homes where there are taken care of by the nurses. Moreover, it is the governing bodies who provide funds for such care. I, strongly belive that it is the family members who should spend pn their own for this care, because it is their moral responsibility to do so. Moreover, the government has numerous other national responsibilities where this money must be channelized. This essay will further elaborate on the above viewpoints.

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Advertisements of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So, the advertisements to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that children and their parents are significantly impacted by advertising of snacks and toys. Therefore, the advertisements to children should be banned. I completely agree about this view for several reasons One the one hand, advertisements of snacks have a crucial effect on children for several ways. when children and parents see many advertisements on TV,or on social media platform like facebook, Intasgram,..they will have a tendancy to try it one time for experience. Take a pop corn for example, advertisements on TV with interesting images and vivial contents make young people want to buy and try it even though they know it is not good for the health. If they consumed a considerable amount of harmful ingredients will cause many diseases such as diabetes, obesities and other health-related problems

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Some people believe that the government should spend money to create more art such as paintings and statues in cities to make them a better place to live to what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that governments allocate significant care to the art’s sector. While it is also held belief that they should spend money to create more art such as paintings and statues in cities to enhance the quality of living in them, there is also an argument that opposes it.

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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both the views and state your own opinion.

These days, having a lot of money and less leisure time is better than earning less money and having more free time. So, in this essay, I am going to discuss both sides and give my won opinion.

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Many peolpe say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others clain that it is bette to start work after school and gain experience in the worl of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

Most of the individual think that with the completion of higher education levels one, it is possible to grab a higher quality job while, few believes that working before going to college will help the students to grab work experience. However, I agree with the latter opinion because one can collect the experience of work and can also develop intellectual skills.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Staying in a different country where I have to communicate with foreign individuals using their language can occur some major social issues and might face practical issues at the same time. I strongly agree with this announcement. In this essay, I will talk about what kinds of situations we might face if we are outside of our country and working in different places.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

in many countries, people now have longer life expectancy compared to the past days. While some individuals think an elderly people creates more problems for the authorities, many believe there are advatages having an ageing population. However, I believe that the drawbacks outweigh the potential benefits.

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Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely, and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to lining in an independent house. Discuss both views and ggive your opinions.

It is widely believe by some population that residing in flats can be lonely and depressing, while others advocate the importance of living alone. While habiting alone can be scary at time and often feel dull, it also enable individual to have a quiet and quality time alone. In my opinion, it is more advantageos to live alone.

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Many young people now know more about international pop and movie stars than famous people in the history of their countries. What are the causes? Give solutions to increase the number of people to know about famous people in history. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no disputing the fact that most young people are more knowledgeble about international artist and film stars than widely known poeple of history in their nations. This is due large access to internet and social media platforms, and solutions should be channel into addressing these key variables.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There have been ongoing debates whether employers asking private details such as about martial status is helpful or not. Therefore, before arriving on a decision, both views will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.

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These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this outwiegh the disadvantages.

In these times, most people are starting to rely on the internet for communication and social interaction. More people are starting to share their experiences and feelings without the need to travel far when there is easy access in the comforts of their homes, but these mediums creat a physical distance and a real emotional disconnection.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweight the disadvantages?

There is no denying the fact that the population of people has increased recently. While it is held belief that some nations include a relatively huge figure of youngsters, compared to the elderly individuals.

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city environments become more and more unhealthy. Offer causes and solutions

Nowadays the urban environment has become much worse and it is becoming the main cause of the disease, especially in big cities. There are several factors (that) contribute to this problem.

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Advertisements of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So, the advertisements to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

With this huge improvement in technology, many access that can show everybody about everything happening in the world, and also people use this strategy, particularly for bussiness area to sell product let's say snacks and toys that give large effect for family both for parents as provider and kids as consumer. This essay will elucidate both viewpoints along with my viewpoint.

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In the past photographs were real on people and places. Nowadays with modern technologies, you cannot trust the pictures. Do you think is it a positive or negative development?

In pervious photography were authentic on individual as well towns.todays with modern technology development, you cannot believe the photos.Although some might consider it positive; however, I believe it to be extremely adverse. Not only because of blackmailing but also because of misunderstanding This essay will explore how these mega disadvantages have the potential to overshadow any merit.

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some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Others think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Advertising has been one of the most significant tools to promote products distribution among people by their attention's captivation. Someone believes, that this way of brands' marketing has become obsolete, while others believe that it still meets its purpose. I firmly believe that the latest opinion are more likely to be true than the former one.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the development of technology makes people's access to music easier than it was in the past. Therefore, many people believe music can be a good way to gather communities of different ages and cultures together. However, there are also some opponents to this view. In this essay, I will discuss both views and express my own opinion.

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Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Whether a gap year is worth for youngsters before seeking into higher education bears some consideration. The essay contends that the merits of having time to pursue passion and travelling outweigh the demerit of not having enough finance.

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