IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 60

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, many kids spend a huge amount of time on their mobiles, however, it is caused by irresponsibility and modern upbringing. Furthermore, this essay thinks the given event is not a good trend because it makes children addicted and cruel.

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Adults do very less exercise these days. Some people think that showing sporting events on the television such as Olympics and international tournaments can be the best way to encourage adults to do exercise. Others believe there are other effective ways to do so. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Support with relevant examples.

In contemporary society, grown-up individuals perform few physical activities in current days. Some individuals consider that presenting physical occasions on a variety of media such as the Olympics and international tournaments can be the ideal approach to influence adults to perform the exercise. This essay will explore both perspectives and provide my opinion on this matter.

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People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

These days, many people do not prefer to pay taxes at all. They claim that, it is their right to use it on their own without split it with the government. It is disagreed that people should keep all of their money and not share it with the state. This essay, will discuss why this claim is selfish and mention the benefits from cut a small percentage of people earns.

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Many organization and companies ask their staff to wear a uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? What kind of jobs should have a work uniform?

Nowadays, many employers ask their workers to wear a uniform and many jobs require it. It may have as many benefits as backwards. In this essay, we will talk about the pluses and minuses and also, about professions that are necessary to wear a special clothes.

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Many students like to get involved in extra- curricular activities at university such as social clubs and sports. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?v

There is an ongoing trend where a majority of university students tend to join social and sports club as an activity besides classes. This essay explains the advantages and the disadvantages of getting involved in extra-curricular activities. Although clubs might offer more advantages, I believe that academic should be the main focus in university.

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【C17T3】 Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

With the rise of globalization, it has a passionate discussion whether professional people should remain where they received training. While some people agree with this opinion, in other eye's, if they wish they have freedom to decide where they want to work. I agree with the latter view.

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many people try to achieve succes through their career or education. what can success mean to different people? what is your view of success.

for many people success is reachable only with career or education. Success is different for everyone, however in my point of view success is exclusive house with lovely family and job you enjoy.

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many people try to achieve success through their career or education. what can be success mean to different people? what is your view of success?

Many people put effort to achieve success from their education or from career, definition of success is different for everyone, however in my perspective define of success is being better than your thoughts.

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Today our communications,medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree wiht this statement?

In modern years,technologies play crucial role in our daily routine. As a result of this phenomenon, communication, Pharmacy and travelling can not work without ICT. Some people argue that it leads to dangerous consequences and I partially agree with them. In this essay I will prove my side.

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In some countries unemployment is high, so some people think that children should only go to primary school and not to secondary school because, they will not be able to find jobs in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, every time you turn on the TV or flick through the pages of a newspaper, you see the news about the unemployment rates in countries. The question arises in our mind, what is the reason behind it ? In many states it is assumed by the residents that they should not send their children to the schools because they will not have jobs in the future. I completely disagree with the idea and will support my opinion in this essay.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

From my point, it is really important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong from the early age and sometimes punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction why does child so early need to learn the difference between right and wrong? In the early age, they're brain, emotional, and character are developing really fast, they need to be planted the knowledge of the difference between right and wrong so the child can develop their brain, emotional, and character base what they feel right and avoid that is wrong. If child plant that from such an early age, it will develop good personality, better way of making choice,. Does it really necessary to give punishment to help them learning? Yes, because if we teach them only by Theory and without application or example, they will feel easy on this and not serious about this matter. We need to see if the child really can make the difference between right and wrong. If they can, we need to give them like punis...

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Some people say that the best way to improve health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others,However,say that this woud have little effect on public health and that other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days when you turn on the TV or fleck through the pages of news papers, you will see the news about health problems and different measure presented by health department for improvement in this regard, whether its from sports facilities or other activities. The question arises in our mind, How can sports help in improving health and what are the other steps in this regard? I completely agree with the ideas and will support my opinion in this essay with examples.

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In the modern world, many employees lack soft skills such as communication and working in teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there are an increasing number of employees that are lacking non-congnitive skills such as communication skill, team-working skill, creactivity, to name but a few. This essay is aim to examine the rationales behind this issue and illustrate the influence of the lack of such skills.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about how to go down accidents on roads. While some argue that punishing strictly drivers who drive carelessly is the most important factor to improve travellers’ safety, I still believe that there are other efficient methods to make our roads become safer.

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In todays modern world, the pressure of modern life is negative. What is your opinion .

Homo- sapiens are living a contempory lifestyles. In 21st century, the burden of contemporary life is impacting the personal and family relationships in deletrious manner. According to me, that kinds of pressures are built up due to lack of understanding and also due to satisfying their desires.

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Both government and individual are spending vast amount of money protecting animals and their habitats. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and healthcare. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, government and citizens are investing more money on protecting animals , while others would argue that it is a better investment to addressing social problems. For instance ,healthcare systems and poverty. This essay completely discusses with this view because people are the main responsible of wildlife destruction and caused severe environmental problems.

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Nowadays, there are many TV shows that allow ordinary people to go on television and become celebrities, even though really, they have no talent. People should not be allowed to go on TV shows unless they can demonstrate some skill or talent that is entertaining. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Today, there are many TV shows that ordinary people can apply to freely. Ocassionary, these programms make a common people a celebrity, such as Susan Boil in a pupular audition TV program, God Talent, in the UK. However, it is a true that some people with no talent or an excell performance are showed in the TV.

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Recently we are facing increasing number of cars, which poses great threat to the pedestrians and cyclists. What's more, a lot of parks need to be sacrificed as a result of the construction of railways and superhighways. Do you agree or disagree? What do you think is the best solution to satisfy residents to their heart's content?

Due to increasing population, more cars are be needed to deal with the needs of transportation. In my view, I agrees that the number of cars rise not only make a negative impact on pedestrians and cyclists, but also diminish the area of leisure parks because of construcion of railways and superhighways.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Parenting is hard to ask because as a parent we all want our children's to grow to be an amazing individual. In order to raise them well, we must teach them what is right and wrong at an early age. If children can learn to differentiate this, they will surely be a fine adult in the future and we as a parent will feel insured.

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Some people believe that elderly employees are more useful to a company. While others believe that young employees are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that older employees can give more to the company because of their experiences. While on the other side,others believe that young employees have a greater ability to work because of their flexibility and endurance. In this article,I will be discussing both views and give my opinion in the end.

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