IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 57

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Obesity is an ever-growing pandemic that is affecting more and more of the world’s population. The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth of overweight people in society? How can this issue be resolved?

In this contemporary era, a plethora of folks on the earth, are suffering with alarming overweight issue. Because of overweight many individuals are facing serious health-related problems. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons of overweight and will provide the feasible soultions to control this concern in the society.

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More and more citizens relying on private cars as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problem overreliances on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

Year by year, the number of people who owning private cars is increasing, instead of using public transport. The major problems from using cars as a major transport helps damage the nature and causes traffic jams, and a viable solution is government offering alternatives for the community.

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that young people apply for work after finishing high school. It is my belief that the positive effects of this phenomenon certainly outweigh its disadvantages.

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Some people believe that the care of elderly people should be a priority of government spending. Others believe that government spending should focus more on young people, especially on their education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

To manage the resources and how to spend them on the people of different age group is the contentious issue that needs remarkable attention.Plethora of people believe that government should consider young people while other think that old people should be given more attention.This esseay will elucidate both sides in the impending paragraphs.

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Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. what problems does this shortage case? what measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

For the healthy and happy life drinking water is very good option. But nowadays, it is very tough to get fresh water and it is becoming the world issue. In this essay I will discuss the problem of this issue and some possible solutions to overcome from this problem.

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Many countries have the same shops and products. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many areas in the world have similar goods and markets. And it is obviously that this statement has as many huge benefits as negatives. In my opinion, it has a balanced idea and I will agree with both ponts of view.

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

It is true that some species of animals are endagered nowadays. Human activities is considered the main reason why this is the case, and governments and residents should be responsible for solving this problem.

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Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so.Which option works better for you and why do you think the other option is not viable to ensure a successful

Some people listen to music while they study because the melody calms the mind. Meanwhile, others prefer to study in silence because it helps to focus and concentrate. Although everyone has their own preferences, studying in silence is more preferrable since our mind is not disturbed with sounds.

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Some people claim that museums and art galleries will not be need because people can see historical objects and works of arts by computers. Do you agree or disagree

The world is evolving at a rapid pace, as Technology has played a major role in the modernization of our society. Every aspect of our life is now reliant on technology. This has led to some people in believing that the need of visiting art galleries and museums is not necessary as we could observe historical ornaments and potraits in our homes on computers. I completely diagree with the statement and in this essay will support my opinion with examples.

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Obesity is an ever-growing pandemic that is affecting more and more of the world’s population. The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth of overweight people in society? How can this issue be resolved?

It is true that The proportion of people who is overweight which caused by the mordern dietery habits increase these days. While this is a serious problem It can be solved by arranging the food uptake tendency.

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Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Globalisation has become the top priority for most countries in order to become wealthy.

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Obesity is an ever-growing pandemic that is affecting more and more of the world’s population. The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth of overweight people in society? How can this issue be resolved?

Obesity has become the contentious health issue in the recent years. Number of people who are getting overweight now a days has increased substantially. This essay will concur what are the causes for obesity and how these can be avoided.

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Some peope say that advertising encourages people to buy things they do not need. Others say that advertisements are important sources of information about new products. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, every time you turn on the TV or flick through the pages of a newspaper, you see the news about the posting and promotions of different brands and products. The question arises in our mind, what is their role in the life of public? Many individuals thinks that these posting are source of motivating people to purchase their products, while other assumes that these promotions contains the details of the items. I completely agree with the ideas and will support my opinion in the essay with examples.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent decades, a rising number of people with health problems refuse to seek help from a doctor and instead, prefer to use substitude treatments, such as herbal teas, for curing their health condition. This trend arises an important question: is this a negative or positive development? From my viewpoint, it is completely negative, having some potential dire consequences.

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Task 2. The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, public has considered about shortening the working week and extending the weekend. In my opinion, I strongly believe that this is a worthwhile endeavor as it benefits not only workers but also several economic fields.

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Task 2. Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones. Do you agree or disagree?

In our modern world, there are still many old buldings protected by legal regulations due to their historical and traditional values. Opinions are divided on whether old buildings should be preserved or demolished to make room for new accommodations and commercial developments. I believe that these facilities should be preserved.

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Task 2. These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.

Nowadays, there is an ubiquitious tendency that people are more likely to study abroad or pursue their career overseas. While people who have chosen to live or work abroad will have a lot of prosperous opportunities, they are also faced with tremendous difficulties. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give my opinion.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A student is enrolled in the university in order to get the specific degree to earn there livelihood in future that demand the certain level of input during the term time. Some students think that they should learn other courses while on contrary to that other want to stay focused on their main courses. This essay will discuss both sides how much other subjects are important to achieve the desired goal.

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Torism has become easy with the science what are advantages and disadvantes.

Travelling across different countries have become very common in the past few years because of advancement of the technology and aerospace industry.In this modern era, moving from one place to other has become very easy .This essay will look into the pros and cons of this.

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Young people who commit serious crimes such as robbery or violent attacks should be punished in the same way as aduls who commit the same crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent days, serious crimes rate committed by young people has increased exponentially. This includes robbery, violent attacks and many more. It has become an alarming concern and raise more public scare which disturbs the harmony in society. Some people think that these youngsters should be given the same punishments as adults do and some think that they should be given a lighter punishments.

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