IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 58

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that it is not possible to be happy without money, while others think that money does not gaurantee happiness. Discusss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that it is impossible to gain enthusiasm when someone is poor while some people believe wealth cannot ensure happiness. The essay attempts to shed light on both sides before concluding money cannot guarantee happiness .

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Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

In this day and age, public argue that the number of crime is rising significantly. There are many reasons cause that such as very low of security and financial issue due to many citizens has unemployed. To solved it, there are several reasons and prime solutions should be adopt by the authority to resolve this issue.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarictic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

It is true that nowadays the rate of tourists in hard-conditional places such as Sahara is significantly increasing. While this type of sites poses many potential merits such as adventures for tourists it has some drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and challenges of visiting dangerous places for tourists.

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Some people think that the best way to broaden young people’s understanding of the world is to encourage them to travel to other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What other measure do you think might be effective?

Some people believe that for the young generation to be open-minded and have a lot of knowledge, they should travel the world. In this essay, I will tackle my suggestions and other possibilities about traveling.

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In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The population of countryside is decreasing because most of their people are moving to the cities. In my opinion, this is a negative development, because it may lead to agricultural crisis and problems with labour.

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Socity is based on rules and laws . It could not function of individuals were free to do whatever they wanted . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people's believe that every person's cannot do their function if they are not linger in the rules that society made. I agree with this ideas because I learned from my university that humans is bond with society or environments, and environments is made by rules and values. This essay will explain the agreement of the statement using examples to support arguments and demonstrates the points.

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This day more and more people are going to different countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. Do the advantages of living in a foreign country outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays a lot of people are going abroad for find a job or to study.There are both merits and demerits, and I think that the benefits are greater than the drawbacks.

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Children today playbvery violent games.This must be the reasin for the increse in violence and crime in the most major cities of the world.What your opinions on this?

Games has been a part of lifes of many people around the world. It is where many relieve their stress from work and daily lives. Nowadays, people of different age groups could play and interact inside the game they are playing that could result to many different aspect.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In this contemporary world, people are tend to be busy due to the hectic lifestyle. It is an indespensable to take a break from the frantic life. It is argued that the superior method of being relaxed is to stay alone. I totally agree with the statement as it reduces the stress level and feel free from the thoughts of other human beings. I will elucidate the reasons behind this phenomenon in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that schools should teach children to be good citizens and workers rather than focusing on academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying that schools should teach kids how to be a superpatriot besides the formal topics equally. It is a commonly held belief that good manners and how to be a better version of them are more important rather than learning academic subjects. In contrast, there is also an argument that academic topics must be taught in the school, while moral values are assumed to be obtained by the surrounding family. This essay will discuss both perspectives and express my opinion.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The tendency to learn other subjects in addition to main subjects are becoming common among college students. However, others state that allocating all time and attention to studying primary subjects are vital to become more qualified.

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Some people think that the increase in the number of obese people should be the responsibility of the governments, while other think it should be the responsibility of individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

It is argued that the government should take charge of a surge of the obese population, while others think that it is up to individuals. In my opinion, I totally contend that it is a personal responsibility that is mostly controlled by a person himself or herself.

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More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Wild animals were forced to suffer since recent times, many species are currently jeopardized and about to completely vanish from the earth. The reasons behind this issue are extremely complecated, and this essay analyzes the main of them and provides sollutions.

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Some people believe the government should spend money on building trains and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion

To minimise the traffic congestion,government should work on building trains and subway lines along with wider roads as well.A government should work on both facilities as discussed above.Wider and proper roads have great signifance and is great measure for the regulation of city traffic.

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Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some nations of the world. Today, however, growing global demand has turned this problem into a global one. What are the causes behind the increased demand and what steps can goverments and individuals take to address this problem?

In recent years, the scarcity of freshwater has become a major issue worldwide. With growing demands and diminishing supplies, this challenge has significant implications for both humanity and the environment. Understanding the causes and addressing this crisis is vital to ensuring a sustainable future.

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People living in large cites today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

Today, citizens experience numerous problems every day, living in the large city. High prices, traffic jams, overpopulation issues can dist erupt peaceful and convenient life in developing town, therefore some individuals recommend to move to smaller regional towns and countrysides, and that government should encourage them in this decision.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

Some people believe in that the main purpose of education is to prepare good cittizens and workers, but not to develop pupils as individuals. I totally disagree with this statement, as, the main function of schools must be to prepare and inspire students with intelectual potentials to life-long studying, prioritizing creativity, critical thinking and overall development of the student, which may actually accelerate the development of technologies.

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some people believe that online learning is more effective and convenient, while others argue that traditional classroom learning is still the best approach. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denyin the fact that learnig is crucial part in our lives. While it is a commonly held believe[c] that online learn is acttecive. There is also an argument that, tradition classroom learn is a good approach. This essey will analyse topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world with serious results for the environment, what do you think can be done to solve this problem, support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There is no denying the fact that cutting down of trees will affect on ecosystem. While it is a commonly held belief that deforestation occurs by people activity in all the world, which shoulde be reduce from logging, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that should be on the government to improve the countryside, that means to reduce from transfers the people to the city and leave the countryside.

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When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sport facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Public corncern regarding a plan to develop new cities which was announced to the public becomes topical since many individuals argue that constructing more public areas and facilitating them with sport amenities are more critical than building the shopping districts. To response this aforementioned issue, I significantly agree that the government should construct more open parks along with exercise fasilities due to a positive development for human and environment.

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