IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 58

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is suggested that curfew hours must be implemented among children. And they are only allowed to go out at night with the supervision of adult. Do you agree or disagree?

Someone suggested that the children should be supervision by adult when the go outside at night. In my opinint, I agree with this suggetion in order to ensure the safty of children.

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The gap between rich and poor countries is expanding. How can it be resolved?

it is argued that the disparity between rich and poor countries is expanding. Many poor countries in Asian and African region have to overcome with this issue. I believe that there are three main problems associated with these issues, and also three remedies we can adopt.

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Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents are better caregivers for their young children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that it will be the best for working parents to put their preschool children in childcare centres rather than give them to family mambers. While grandparents can take care their grandchildren with love, I believe that leaving the children with reliable caregivers are better idea as the it will be beneficial for their school lives.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others, however, say that this would have little affect on public health and other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

1) physical activity and better in longevity and muscles being active

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Plagiarism in academia has become a major issue in many countries today .what are the causes of this problem ? What are some possible solutions?

Recent years, plagiarism has become common problem between undergraduates in major countries .There are several reasons for such a situation and relevant solutions are also available for dealing with it which will be elucidated in the following paragraphs.

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The monthly price of exported rice from ThaiLand and VietNam from 2012 to 2015 (Million dollars per tons)

The line chart illustrates the monthly export price of rice from Vietnam and Thailand between 2012 and 2015.

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36. Some people say that in our modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, some people argue that it is useless to educate pupils about the skills of good writing. I disagree with the statement as there are many sectors which require written letters or signatures and it helps students to stay away from devices.

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Some parents believe that extra private lessons outside school hours, where students work alone with a teacher, can help them do better at school. Others disagree. What are the advantages and disadvantages of private tuition?

Extra private lessons exclude school hours it a contentious issue debate for some parents, where some parents think, if their children discuss with a teacher can assist them do better at school, However, other parents are disagree. This essay will examine both advantages and disadvantages of private course.

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Some people think that workers like nurses, doctors and teachers do not get enough payment while film actors and athletes get more money than the importance of their job. How far do you agree or disagree?

payment job for a certain professional is a contentious issue debate, where some people think that people do important job such as nurses, doctors, and teachers get a lower income comparing to film actors and athletes, I firmly agree with this statement. This essay will examine some points for reason of this.

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The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in school programs?

Expressive thoughts can be quite difficult as it can actually make people jittery and scpetical. However, strengning thinking through the art can actually empower anyone with enough confidence to reach at greater heights. Such that music and theatre, the art forms are not just significant in an artist's life but also to the audience, in past and at present too. I will discuss this in upcoming paragraphs alongside the significance of inclusion of art as a subject in schools.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foregin language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, there are many people who live in a country where you have to speak a foreign language while others think that it can lead to a negative effect on their life and this country. Although it has some disadvantages to live in a different country, I belive the benefits of a living in a country where you don't have your nationality have more merits.

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the working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate about the potential advantages and disadvantages of reducing the number of workdays in a week and extending the weekend for employees. I believe that reducing the working week is a positive and effective way to boost employee productivity and engagement.

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Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearence. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some individuals think that to succeed in life people need to do hard work and determination, while other mankind think of it as a prime factor such as in financial and physical appearance. In this essay, I will talk about why I think hard work and decision making is important to achieve.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that children should be taught to have competition sense, while others think that it is not more important than cooperative skill which will be used more in their adult lives. Although learning how to compete can make a child solve a problem faster, adopting the skill how to cooperate is better.

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Students are overloaded with homework now a days from school, rather than home work some bilieves that school should focus and give more time to other activities which will help their growth as the burden they loose their skill and abilities.Do you agree or disagree.

Everyone knows that education plays an important role in student's life but along with study their physical growth is also important. Some people believe that homework from the schools is becoming a big burden for them and they got distracted from physical activities. I am totally agree with this statement and going to explain my viewpoints in upcoming paragraphs.

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With the improvements in today's health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, society is responsible to take care of old individuals due to the developments in health system. In my opinion, the problem of rise in number of old people could be solved by several ways such as establishing specific health care organization for them and considering nurses and doctors to visit them at home.

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Some people believe that advancements in technology are making people less social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that technological developments impact social activities among people negatively. I disagree with this idea. I believe people are becoming more social according to technological advancements.

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Some people feel that punishment should focus more on rehabilitation instead of long prison terms. Others feel prison terms are important for social stability. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is true that there are different opinions about long term prison penalties. While some people support long- term prison punishment is crucial for society, others believe punishments should consist more rehabilitation rather then imprisonment. Both argue may be true in such cases, however I do believe long term prison punishment is better application for social stability.

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Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care. This was not so in the past. What may be the root cause of this behaviour? Discuss the reasons and possible results.

It is clear that both men and women pay attention to how they look and spend much money on variety of beauty products than before. I think the internet and well-developed technology are the main reasons which lead this problem. However, I believe this issue can be adressed by taking some steps.

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Nowadays many people wear western clothes rather than their traditional clothes. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?

In recent years, an increasing number of individuals have chosen western wearings instead of traditional ones. The viable reasons for this phenomenon is that many people are disconected with the past traditions and they are under the influence of media. This essay will argue that it is an positive development because allows peopl to experience new dresses and helps brand to develop.

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