IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 61

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity and how could it be tackled?

Obesity has been a world concern in recent times. More and more people in the world is struggling with the problem of obesity. This essay will discuss some causes and solutions to mitigate the obesity.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

According to some people vital goal of science should be to develop humanity. Nowadays we are living in the world that science established . Our life is surrounding with science. That is why I firmly agree that science should be improve peoples lives. In this essay I will discuss this statement, how science was developed and affects on peoples social aspects .

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Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjets that will be useful for their future careers. Other people say that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Many individuals think that schools ought to concentrate on educating students erudite subjects that will be valuable for their future careers. Other humans say that studies like music and sports are also fundamental.Both perspectives have their merits,and this essay will discuss firstly the significance of scholastic issues,then the importance of melody and doing exercises,eventually, it will be finished by involving my own opinion.

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Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email - recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn - explain how your friend could learn this sport - suggest that you both learn this sport together

I started writing this letter as soon as I received yours in which you expressed your desire about learning a new sport.

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a line chart showing a social center in Melbourne.

This bar chart illustrates the number of people who participated in 5 ranges of activities in Melbourne from 2000 to 2020.

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Some people think that main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as televisions, friends and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion

There are various factors influencing children lives which get change with time. Nowadays many people think that television, friends and music play significant role in a child development while some thik that parents are still above than these factors. I will elaborate on it and give my opinions in upcoming paragraphs.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives

In our contemporary era with the evolving scientific landscapes, people's perspectives towards the benefits of the scientific discoveries are with significant divergence. While, some advocate that the primary goal beyond scientific achievements must be far more than improving living standards, I would strongly argue that the main aim must be to rise the community's quality of life.This could be through tackling the world wide difficulties, in addition to empowering the economy by the exploited technological development.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvatages?

Nowadays, people use social media to keep up with the news. Many individuals globally use social media platforms to stay in touch with their relatives and to see news related to world affairs. This essay will discuss the potential benefits and drawbacks of this trend and will explain why the demerits outweigh the merits.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

Many individuals think that it's great to provide maximum number of data in scientific study, business and the education world. While, others believe that a handful of knowledge is crucial or precious to be distributed without any price. In this essay, I will examine both perspectives and will give my opinion.

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, it is commonly seen that youngsters have a tendency to appear in some professional training to acquire an easy position rather university study. Although this process may enable them to get a quick solution, in the long run, they will not achieve remarkable success in their professional and personal life, because of narrowing professional opportunities and low-salary jobs. In light of the aforementioned reasons, I would argue that receiving higher studies has more advantages than only focusing on practical training.

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Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is concerned by some people that young people spend too much of their leisure time going shopping which might have a negative impact on other teenagers and the society also. In my opinion, this idea is totally wrong and the reason why shall be explained in this essay.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some people that professionals should serve their country, while others think that paramedics should not be bound and should set free. people with the former opinion says, individuals should deliver their services to their public, because they had learnt everything from from their native country and had developed specialised skills by working on these people. On the other hand, the latter one's comment that, professionals should not be restricted, as they had spent their own money on their education and if the native region is unable to provide them with excellent employment opportunities, so they should be allowed to move anywhere in the world. I will explain both points with relevant examples.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

One of the challengeable tasks in current societies for parents is breeding their children in way that they would be successful and satisfied of their life in future. It is widely accepted fact that delivering this message to kids that they can make their aims factual through diligent work has significant positive as well as negative consequences. in my opinion, effects of conveying this message to teenager have more benefits than drawbacks.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both hese views and give your own opinion.

University is the place for learning academic skills and develop specific knowledge. Some people claim that university students need to focus for specializing area, while others believe students should learn variety of subjects. I firmly believe that students should learn wide range of academic themes at University. In this essay, I illustrate the both views and reason for my opinion.

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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Certain people claimed that domestic animals could have dangers and be harmfull for children's health level. However, I firmly agree with those who think that those animals would have some advantages for adolescents.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? Write atleast 250 words

Renting a home is becoming popular choice than owning a home in the current generation. Even some people solely choosing rent out a place for longer term rather owning it. I firmly believe that, this increased trend have been adopted by many people due to current housing market trends. In my opinion, it is a positive situation and totally depends on individual's financial circumstances and lifestyle choices.

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Many agricultural lands are being converted into commercial centres. How does this affect the environment and the people’s lifestyle? Discuss this situation and provide suggestions to address these issues. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

There is no denying the fact that there is a global trend towards urbanisation which means that farmlands have been replaced by commercial centres. This essay will discuss the impact of this transformation on both the environment and people's lifestyles. As well as provide feasible measures to handle these problems.

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In the past, photography was used to real people and places; however, because of technology, today you cannot trust what you see. Is it a negative or positive aspect of development?

In the previous epoch, photography was for showing touchable people or places. But in the present epochs, it is clear that modern technology does not allow us to have real photos from somewhere or someone. In my opinion, this phenomenon is dreadful improvement. This essay will delve into some negative points of this issue and give a conclusion at the end of the essay.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

There are some contentious people who think allocating data as much as possible is fine or some of them is too valuable for sharing without any cost. I absolutely agree with the latter mindset.

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Robots and artificial intelligent are being developed tp replace humans in the workplace. why is this happening? Do you think this will have positive or negative impact on society?

Technology has revolutionised the world in astacending ways. The demand of robots and AI are increasing day by day. Human beings at the workplace are replaced by Robert and artifical intelligence. The reason behind is that more knowledge and production are done through the Robert and AI as well as negative impact is that the rate of joblessness are raising in human beings.

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