IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 59

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care. This was not so in the past. What may be the root cause of this behaviour? Discuss the reasons and possible results.

It is clear that both men and women pay attention to how they look and spend much money on variety of beauty products than before. I think the internet and well-developed technology are the main reasons which lead this problem. However, I believe this issue can be adressed by taking some steps.

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Nowadays many people wear western clothes rather than their traditional clothes. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?

In recent years, an increasing number of individuals have chosen western wearings instead of traditional ones. The viable reasons for this phenomenon is that many people are disconected with the past traditions and they are under the influence of media. This essay will argue that it is an positive development because allows peopl to experience new dresses and helps brand to develop.

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Task 2 To what extent has the internet made life more convenient? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. write at lease 250 word.

The Internet network was invented about 30 years ago, from that time up to now, we have seen so many changes in its shape, speed, quality and properties. If you had asked anyone 30 years ago about the internet invention and its purpose you wouldn't receive any clear answer at that time. I guess none of us were aware about how this creature would change our life in future, but it did. Nowadays it’s really hard to even think about the single day in our life without connecting to websites. Undoubtedly surfing the web makes our life so much easier than before and I absolutely agree about this phenomenon.

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Children are facing more pressure nowadays from an academic, social and commercial perspective. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Recently young children are facing numerous pressure from an acedemic, social and commercial perspective. These various kinds of stress will lead to serious issues in a child's development and this will have a negative impact on their future life. In this essay, I will describe about the causes and solution to this issue.

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More and more qualified peopleare moving from poor to rich countiries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering. computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countires are tealing from poor countires. Other feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. Discouss both the views and give your opinion.

It is argued that nowadays there is an influx of professionals that migrate from poor to rich countries in order to be hired in specific areas like engineering, computing, and medicine. While there is a benefit from utilizing the talented persons, it is feared that it will make the home country worse off. Nevertheless, I think this migration will be beneficial for society.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at en early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this dictinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is, should the school teach their students, how to survive financially in the world today. In last years this wasn’t even discuss. Students independently learned how to use and dictirbute financed wisely, through mistakes, which took a lot of money and time. Now people are beginning to realize that young people need this lessons. Personally, I tend to think that it is should have happened earlier. I agree that today’s school must teach theirs students to financial literacy in the new world.

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More and more people nowadays visit well-known places to take photographs of themselves,without looking at the place . Why do you think this is happening? Is it a positive or negative trend

In recent years ,it has been noticed that a significant number of individuals who go to popular tourist attractions go there to snap pictures of themselves, instead of looking at the place. I believe this is because most places are no longer focusing on their cultural significance and human values have also changed. However, I think this is a negative trend and this essay will explore my reasons.

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Most countries aim to improve their standard of living through economic development, but many important social values can be lost as a result. Do the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages? You should write at least 250 words.

Economic development is a weapon used by many countries for a better standard of living , improves lifestyle and an enhanced infrastructure in addition to an increase in the employment level, in response many ethical values could be missed or lost in return. In this essay we will explore both the advantages and disadvantages of this proposal and demonstrate why its proponents are correct.

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Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is this the case? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Even though bicycles are an efficient mode of transport, recently the number of bike riders are decreasing and folks are discouraged to use bikes. but rather prefer driving a car or a bus. This essay will overview the causes and suggestions to improve the situation.

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Modern technology,such as personal computers and the internet, have made it possible for many people to do their work from home atleast part of the time instead of going to an office everyday. What are some advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

Nowadays, people can work from home due to the advancement of technology. Especially, computers and the Internet made ease on work from home, because of these modern technology highly qualified people can provide their services using computers and the Internet, rather than attend physically in the office . Although, it has many advantages, including disadvantages as well. So, in this essay, I will discuss about both perspectives that will illustrate benefits and drawbacks.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans faced in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions

These days, Global warming is considering one of the enormous life-threatening environmental problems which has adverse side effects on all creatures on the world. There are some reasons behind this issue, and specific ways by which these could be solved.

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In some cities, public parks and open spaces are changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables.

It is being observed that in some towns, public parks and open spaces are used as gardens in which local people could foster their own fruit and vegetables. This essay will outline why in my opinion as to why I believe the drawbacks of this change outweigh the benefits.

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Too much emphasis is given for the education of students. More government money should be spent on free time activities for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Owning to the growing emphasis on student education, some individuals believe that more government funding should spend on leisure activities for youth. In my point of view, I completely disagree with this statement due to many reasons.

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As compared to the past, children these days spend more of their leisure time indoors with computers and TV and less time outdoors. Describe some of the problems this lack of outdoor leisure time can cause and suggest at least one possible solution.

These days, children spend more of their leisure time with electronic devices and less time playing outdoors. The problems of lack of outdoor activities are that it hinders their physical health and reduces their concentration on studies. The solutions of these problems are that children should be encouraged to increase their outdoor activities and learn about the detrimental effects of lack of outdoor activities.

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Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that businesses mainly benefit.

It is often held that major advantage of global cooperation is about the ecosystem protection. However, some individuals argue that business is the main gain. In this essay, both of these views will be discussed and supported by convincing opinions.

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Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at school. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There are some who suggest that schools must have the compulsary class of foreing news so as focus students on international events. I completely disagree with this statment because this subject has minimum value and this time could be spent more eficiently.

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In the past peope used to travel abroad to look for many differences from their home country. Nowadays, cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the past, people used to travel other countries to explore differences from their native countries. These days, cities around the world are becoming more and more similar. The reasons behind this are all cities have the same planning and development. I personally believe that the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks because the diversities of the cities are lost.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's world, taking risk is essential for growth in both professional and personal development. While risks can lead to setbacks, they also provide unique opportunities for advancement. This essay argues that the benefits of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages, as they are crucial for success and innovation.

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Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

It is widely observed that many parents nowadays put their children under an extreme pressure for the sake of their children's success, others argue that this might be the consequences of pat experiences of the parents that contribute to this controversy. Hence, whether this intensifying pressure from the parents will benefit for the society or not will be discussed further in this essay.

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Some people believe that young people should spend their free time with family rather than go to entertainment activities outside the house. Some disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is no doubt that having leisure time is important to rejuvenate an individual's state of mind. Some people believe that it is more preferable to spend their spare time with their family, while others argue that it is more refreshing to enjoy a variety of entertainment activites rather than staying at home. I partly agree with both views because it depends on different circumstances.

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