IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 837

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Songs with violent lyrics make people more violent and should be banned. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this ban.

It is a fact that music can influence human society easily because of its popularity through modern technology. Consequently ,violent music promotes negative and positive outcomes.So banning

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, many kids waste times on their smartphones in their daily regime. This phenomenon not only because of addicted to games but also social media. I do believe that this problem might lead to negative impact to children future.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In contemporary era of technology and development, the use of smartphones has seen an increasing trend. The limited entertainment opportunities and lack of physical activities are the major factors that caused this tremendous growth. While it has some advantages on the contrary, I am of the opinion that it is a not a positive development.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Globalisation has reduced the barriers to move around the world and share the skills and knowledge. It is argued that professionals should limit their practice in the country where they completed their training; however, working anywhere according to the own will is also advocated. The essay will articulate that man is born free and should work according to the personal benefit, as I believe that there should not be any restriction of location for a skilful labor.

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Success is often measured by wealth and material possessions. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

In a materialistic world, nowadays it is becoming increasingly common that people can see the success only with property and treasures, such as cars, yachts, bank accounts or expensive jewelleries. Although I accept the inconsiderable role of these things on success I believe that a person can be successful without these things as well.

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2.Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is debatable topic that whether History is one of the subjects that is the most crucial in school outweighing the subjects as Science and Technology. The topic will be clearly addressed in this essay below.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?

In the modern society, crime racing up day by day. Studies shows many prisoners retake crimes even after they out of Jail. I’m going to discuss the cause and effects relating to this matter.

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People born in rural areas move to big cities when they become adult. What are the reasons for this? Is this positive trend or negative trend?

Nowadays, numerous countries face massive urbanization trends, in view of people from countryside move to metropolis when they become adult. Then, in the following paragraphs, this essay shall elucidate a reason behind this issue like looking for better jobs. Additionally, the author believes that the earlier phenomenon has detrimental effects.

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The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organization. To what extent to you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any examples.

Studying different cultures will connect us to the world by providing a chance to get along well with people. Thus working in a global company will enhance this opportunity as they are located in different countries. This essay will discuss both views.

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Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. how far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

There is no doubt that these days to guarantee a good job you need experience. The question is, what is better to start work some people say is better complete college and others believe that working after school is better. In this essay, I am going to discuss these views and draw my own opinions.

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In terms of sustainability, what kind of challenges has globalization created?

In the period of sustainability, globalization create both of benefits, opportunities, and also more challenges. Globalization means that the process by which businesses or other organizations develop international influence or start operating on an international scale. The most challenges which globalization are created related to environmental issues, especially global warming and climate change.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays children tend to use their phone for relatively a long duration in a day. This trend has occured because of many factors. While acknowledging the educational reason that may be one of the factors to overuseing phones, I believe that it is a negative development especially for their health. The following paragraphs will give further argumentations on this.

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Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so. Which option works better for you and why do you think the other option is not viable to ensure a successful study time?

Laws, at its most basic form, is only a mere instruction on what a person should and should not be doing. Some people abide by it, some people does not, and in order to keep the society well-behaved, we shall try to make as many people to abide by said laws as we can. In that case, I think we should teach students that are studying in elementary school about basic laws to abide to.

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Should standardized testing be eliminated from the education system? Examine the pros and cons of standardized testing and argue for or against its use in schools.

The testing of learned knowledge is an essential part of the learning process. In recent years, a trend towards standardization of this process can be observed. Naturally, every change has its good and bad sides. In this essay, I try to present the most important pros and cons.

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A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives. Do you agree that living in computer age has more advantages than disadvantages? Describe the positive and negative impacts of technology on our lives and give your opinion in 250 words.

The development of technologies have improved and changed our lives. It helps us in many ways, but some people completely depend on the technologies. I think it is natural when people are facing big innovative things, but there are not only advantages, but also disadvantages.

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Although there has been a large increase in the numbers of women who go out to work, women continue to do a disproportionate amount of housework and childcare. What can be done to promote greater equality between men and women between the home?

Recently the issue has been brought into focus is the unequal amount of household and childcare that women have to do. In my opinion, there is now greater equality between men and women in the family these days. However, women still tend to assume all the household chores while men just only go to work causing gender inequality in the family. Now i will discuss some solutions to address this situation and encourage better fairness between men and women in the family.

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Some people say that the government should make college free for people. Do you agree or disagree?

Few people believe that the authorities should remove the tuition fees of Institute .I personally believe that government should free fees only for the people who had a financial problem whereas other people should pay their full tuition.

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Some people say that distance learning is a quick and effective way to study. Others, however, disagree and say that distance learning programs can never be as good as courses taken in person. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

The pandemic has thought us to adapt to difficult situations and changed the way we live and study. Distance-learning program is one of the products of the pandemic situation, it’s a common thing for us nowadays. The study material is posted through the internet, and we can join the learning process from afar, with no need to go to the classroom in person. I strongly agree that distance learning program is a brilliant finding to the education system.

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Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.

There are those who claim that all pupils have the right to learn in universities , while ,others think that colleges should be delivered for pupils who deserve it . In my opinion , providing universities for all students may be impossible and may have some drawbacks for the community .

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Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school, while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school? What do you think the role of a parent should be in their child’s education?

There is a noticable fact that a group of children never get any praise from their parents for their excellent result in school, whereas other children are always in extensive pressure from their parents which brings some adverse impacts on them. Having unaware of the negative consequences, some parents give excessive pressure on their children. However, parents should always paly the supervisor role in a friendly way towards their child’s education.

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