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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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some people say that in all levels of education from primary schools to universities, too much time is spend on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.

These days every country use the methods which investigate about it to use in its education system. These methods depends on cultors and countries aim to build its structures. Some people belive that this way which focus on learning facts and not spend enough on learning practical skills is not correct method. I completly agree with this idea and in this essay I will support my opinion with examples.

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Children are having some problems at school and home. What are the causes and how can the parents do to help them?

Children are the backbone of every nation. They are facing some troubles at an educational institution and at home due to learning plenty of subjects, hectic timetables and chores. However, the parents should support and guide their little buds to manage all these. This essay discusses briefly for the following reasons.

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Online shopping has become more popular than before.Discuss causes and effects of this trend.

In the last few decades more people started to use online shopping such as Amazon than in the past. There are some advantage and disadvantage for buying goods in internet. For example it is easy that they do not have to go to buy products. However, we might get bad quality products than buying the products in the store; therefore, these arguments will be important to understand for using these apps.

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The issue of whether zoos should be closed down or not has caused a lot of controversy. Some people believe that zoos are cruel to animals because they disrespect the right of animals and are very dangerous to humans, however, on the other hand others argue that they can be important in safeguarding wild animals. I personally side with those that are against the closing down of zoos.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount that people can earn. Discuss both views and give your option.

Salaries play a crucial role in people's lives. In a few nations, some mankind gets a high salary. Whether some think that it is fruitful for nations, others say that the authorities should control and limit the wages. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinion is divided whether students should have their own to pursue tertiary education or be compelled to study subjects that are more relevant to the future such as those associated with science and technology. From my perspective, I advocate to the first view albeit some benefits exhibited in the remaining point.

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Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A share of individuals state that museum and art galleries are not required due to people have chance watch these historical objects or art masterpieces online by computer. Partly, I agree with the statement.

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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Diagrams illustrating the current planning of a university's sports center and its proposed future plans.

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Some people think that modern technology has more negative effects on our lives than positive ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

In modern epoch, A boost of technology has a direct impact on our lives. modern technology have a lot of pros however, some folk suppose that modern technology has a host of catasrophic effects on our lives. So, I dissagree about this arguee and now in this essay, I will explain why.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent doyou agree or disagree with this statement?

In life individuals have the right to have preferences. Various people claims that currently they have admit a lots of options. In my personally opinion, I agree with this statement about at present society faces very much choice and it has positive and negative sides. I am going to talk about the positive side before moving on to look at opposite side.

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are individuals who argue for prohibiting children from using their phones while at school, while others advocate for permitting children to use their phones during school hours. I believe that there are no justifications for this.

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Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work that with their children To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answers.

An increasing number of parents spending their time at work leads to some issues regarding communication with their kids. Having taken other solutions into consideration, I agree with this perspective and i will elucidate with several reasons and explanations.

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"Old people are an essential part of society, so they should be respected.” How much do you agree with this opinion and why? Give reasons and examples to support your answer

In this life, people from different ages group has important role, especially the older. People that life longer than younger give positive impacts on others life, such as parents or teacher. With this role, we should polite to them. In this essay, I will delve into my reasons why I am totally agree with this given statement.

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Many people feel school children should not be given homework whilst others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Homework is part of our childhood memories, not matter it is good or bed. Therefore, when we grow up, we discuss the nessesory in school life. Some people agree with that, but others do not.

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In the last century the first man to walk on the moon said it was a great step for mankind. But in fact space travel has made little difference to most people lives today. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the last century, as a result of developing technologies, some can travel to space for discovery tendency. Based on what has been the first man that stepped on the moon's surface said, this is merit for mankind. However, due to the fact that can be seen space travel has changed most individual's life. I partially agree with this statement.

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Universities and colleges are now offering courses through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Educational institutions are now integrating internet-based courses alongside traditional classroom teaching to facilitate the learning process. Despite the attachment of some individuals to conventional educational methods, I believe that the development of diverse delivery modes is crucial, especially for international students who are unable to travel.

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20.More and more plastic is polluting cities, countrysides and oceans. What are the problems caused by plastic waste? What measures should be taken to solve it?

In the recent years, we have seen an enormous increase in the amount of oil products that has been released in the environment. This issue has brought us a lot of crises that destroying the habitat of living things is the major problem and there are some ways to reduce that as well.

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Nowadays, many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think this is beneficial for the children of these families, while other think children will find it difficult. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Abroad countries are attracting more people theseadays than ever before as places like such provide various opportunities for the immigrants families to start new businesses. Therefore, it is said by some that this migration will benefit the youngones, however, other suggests that children have to face problems. In this essay, both sides will be discussed along with my opinion.

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An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people who choose cosmetic surgery to change their appearance, says a lot about popularity of such operation. Back in the days, only celebrities could afford to do cosmetic surgeries to improve their beauty. Now, almost everyone are able to do whatever they want with their face.

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Some people thinks that watching news is good for individuals and some thinks not . discuss both views and also give your opinion

Within our modern epoch, watching the news is substantially influencial, however it may be argued not always for the best reason. Watching the news provides updates regarding surroundings and even updates around the world, however some may suggested that media is controlled and contains a lot of propaganda. This essay agrees with the aforementioned notion that the news isn't beneficial and we can obtain news from more reliable methods.

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