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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some nations, some people believe that there is many advantages to use a huge money on building new railway lines for very fast trains between cities, while others think we should spent money on developing the current public transportation system. While imporving existing public transport can reduce the congestion in the city, I believe that building fast trains between cities can encourage the population of rural areas.

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Although it is generally illegal, physical punishment continues in many countries. Some argue that parents should have the right to punish their children in this way. Do you agree or disagree?

In order to study children well and help them to avoid severe life mistakes some parents use physical punishments. I firmly agree that physical treatments without body damage contribute to more effective parenting and make children better in the future life.

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In recent years, there has been a significant increase in the number of oil drilling operations in remote locations around the world. this has brought economic benefits to some countries, though it has also raised concerns about the environmental impact of these operations. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answes and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

The oil mining company nowadays has a rapidly escalating number in remote areas in many countries. This has raised financial advantages around the world, thus it has consequently brought massive awareness about drilling effects to the surroundings.

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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government，while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Whilst a group of individuals contend the contion that promoting the members of the rising generation to an executive role in government organization would not be a prudent decision to make, others take an adverse approach which supports the delegation of high level positions to the young people. To the best of my knowledge and experience, having young minds pondering on the challanges of today's society can accelerate the advancement of technology, human welfare and education, therefore, I also resonate with the idea of hiring younger people for the senior governmental positions.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

With the technological advancement, scientists and researchers are investigating on various kinds of advance experiment by using live specimens like monkeys and mouse. Some individuals argue that experiment on animals is not acceptable while others believe that important scientific discoveries can be achieved from by engaging animals on experiments. this essay will discuss reason to justify of using the animal on experiments and other alternatives which can be used to mitigate using animals.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things avoiding change.Others,howevre ,think that change is always a good thing. Discussed both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary era with the economic downfall most of the individuals believe that everything happens for a reason, hence they tend to live their whole life doing the same thing without any alterations even without having any kind of life goals while others in the community believe that changing the life pattern would always results better life style full of happiness. This essay will discuss both view points while highlighting my own opinion.

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?

It is often said that the increase of social platform has an impact on individual relationships and society as a whole. Despite having a positive impact on the way people interact, the writer contends that the disadvantages overshadow the advantages due to the lack of face-to-face conversation and an increase in Internet negativity.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that in the new generation or era, people will be more comfortable to read some books ir newspapers through their handphone than buy a real book. I completely disagree about this statement, from this essay I will give the reason I choose to buy printed books than read through internet.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

We live in an era where countries are becoming more homogenous due to the globalization effect and technological benefits. In my point of view, it is good to see that people are mixed with cross-culture and can buy the same products from anywhere.

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Organising a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. What can be the problems associated with organising a large family event and what solutions can you suggest?

A big family is having a ceremony or small brunch nearby, planning a family gathering can be stressful. This essay would provide problems from this topic and also will illustrate practical solutions to tackle them.

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Nowadays, more and more foreign students are going to English-Speaking countries to learn the “international language – English". It is undoubtedly true that studying English in an English-speaking country is the best way, but it is not the only way to learn it. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement.

There is a widespread global perception about learning international english has become popular among students. People believes that the best way practice english in an English-speaking country. This essay aims to delve into provide two dimession of agree and disagree perspective of learning english in specific countries.

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Some people prefer to be in the same kind of job their entire life, but others like to change their jobs frequently. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people like to stick with the one job in their whole life, while some individuals try to do various works. This essay delves into reasons why people choose to do different careers while others prefer to do one job for a long time. In my opinion, trying to do different jobs would be more interesting.

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Some People believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should Ье required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should Ье free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

According to some masses, professionals like doctors and engineers should only serve that specific areas from where they receive training. However, others believe that they should be provided with the independence of working in any country they like. I personally believe that the contribution of professionals, such as doctors and engineers should not be restricted and they should work according to their wish.

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Today people are travelling more than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

The number of people is increasing nowadays. this essay will examine the factors that contribute towards the increasing trend and benefits that travelling offers.

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Some people think that older school children should learn a wide range of subjects to acquire more knowledge, while other people believe they should learn a small number of subjects in details. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Recently, the phenomenon of education has become a heated debate,on one hand some people believe that quantety is imoprtant ,while on the other hand we see that guality is the concern of peple toward students.I reckon that kowing less subject ,but in details is a plus for tutors ,also I intend to discus both views throughout this essay .

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Nowadays parents are sending their children to trips abroad for educational purpose. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it?

It is still debateable on picking which education method is the best. These days, many parents believe that their children will get a better learning if they learn in a foreign country. This essay will extend both positive and negative effects regarding this phenomenon.

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Nowadays many young people spend their free time in shopping centers. This has a negative effect on youths and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the era of technology, bricks and mortar stores are opened in every city. Many youngesters spend their leisure time for buying goods and services. It is believed that it leads to some adverse factors both for generation and society. However, I concur with this phenomenon.

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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today esaier. Others disagree Discuss the both views and give your own opinion

Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds. A large number of individuals consider that technology has made shopping to be easy in these days, whereas others believe that technology has made shopping even more confusing. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

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In some countries, parents are choosing to teach children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of homeschooling outweigh the disadvantages?

a faction of people holds the notion that home schooling is suitable for children, others argue that conventional schooling system is important. I strongly support the latter view which I will explain in this essay.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There is no denying the fact that nowadays, environmental problems has a huge concern. While it is a commonly held belief that the high extinction rates of animals and plants are the most environmental issue we need to concern, there is an argument that there are more pressing issues should be solved. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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