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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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As global trade increases, many goods including those we use on a daily basis are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

Due to the rise in worldwide sales, many products that are utilized on a day to day basis are manufactured in different nations and have to be shipped to faraway distances. I believe that this has more positive implications than negative.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about current events. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often thought by some people that in order to stay updated for knowing about the current events in the country, newspapers are the optimal medium. On the contrary, other side of society believe that news from mediums like social media, radio or television is better. While traditional media has its own benefits, I would argue that information from other media is more significant.

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the process of making bread on an industrial scale for sales in shop.

The given diagram illustrates the process of making bread on an industrial scale for sales in shops. It is clear that six stages are involved in the process.

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countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world Do you think this is a positive or negarive development

As an individualist are being to purchase the same type of property which to need for life anywhere in the world its seems in region origin independents and resemblance.In the forthcoming paragraph, I put my own viewpoint about I being negative or positive at this notion.

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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents' home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this positive or negative development?

It is generally said that innumerable youngsters around the world prefer to live in their own abode or with friends rather than in their parent's home after the end of school days. I believe it is a positive development owing to the causes that it aids in their personality development and also imparts the value of money in them.

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countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world Do you think this is a positive or negarive development

As a invidualist are being to purchase the same type of property which to need for life anywhere in the world its seems in countries orign independents and resemblance.In the forthcoming pragraph I put my own viewpoint about I negative or positive at this notion.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Studying English at school is most important than local languages. If people can not learn local languages, that might be a risk of crisis to dying out. In my opinion, learning English is very important but local languages are both important too we should not stop teaching.

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Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life.

Some people believe that fashionable clothes cost too much money , others disagree with this opinion and say that fashion is an important part of life.

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Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life.

Fashion is a very important part of someone's character. Your fashion style can say many things about you. The way you dress can define you in modern society. Fashion has been an interest to people throughout history, it has just changed as we see it progress and have better form of quality and use.

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Que: Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the view of the modern world, the environmental issue is notorious for humankind. This problem not only affects individuals, but also a large number of all countries around the world; thus, comprehensive actions are needed in order to reduce the undesirable effects. In this essay, I strongly agree an international collaboration is important to preserve mother nature.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children that are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. discuss both views and give your own opinion

Different people have different views about a sense of competition in children. There is a heated dabate that has sparked all over the world. Some believe that the elder should encourage children concerned with the thinking style of tournament while the others think co-operation should be taught compared to competition to be more mature and effective adults. In this essay, the discsussion of both ideas and my prespective will be mentioned.

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Some people think that the pandemic has impacted our lives, especially the education sector. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The Covid-19 pandemic has altered our lives. Governments are taking cautious measures to prevent the spread of this unusual coronavirus outbreak. In my opinion, one thing that is growing in this emerging culture is our educational system.

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More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In the 21st century, the importance of technology is becoming bigger and bigger. Most parents let their kids to use electric devices such as computers and tablets because they believe that their children should study the skills concerned with modern technique.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantags.

Technology has brought our world to our fingertips. It is undeniable that education must adapt to the current technology ecosystem. Therefore, the use of computers has been increasing over the past decade. The following essay shall elaborate on both benefits and drawbacks of using the computer in education.

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More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern scenario,technology is increasing by leaps and bounds,so many youngsters tend to play games on electronic gadgets such as laptops and phones,therefore many parents are encouraging their offspring to spend time on the internet because they will be provided acknowledgment through the video games.According to me,the positive implications are outweigh the negative impacts.This essay will discuss both merits and demerits.

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Some people say that most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It’s true that some people believe that cross-national support is the most effective way to tackle with emergent issues in certain countries. From my perspective, i totally agree with this statement and i will discuss the reasons in the following essay.

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In some countries, private cars are now banned from certain city centres. What are the advantages of such a system and do you feel that this is something that most cities should adopt?

Banning cars from city centers is a recent trends and it can be seen in various cities around the world. Certain advantages and disadvantages immediately spring to mind when considering this step that city councils are taking.

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People should look after their health because this is a duty to the society not just a personal benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some believe that people should take care of their health not beacause of personal benefits just because it is a duty to the community. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with this idea. In this essays, I will point out some of my reasons about my agreement.

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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There is an argument that there should be a one-world order instead of many break up areas controled under different goverments. This essay will demonstrate how a centralization of the government on a global scale would allow for movement around the world to be easier, but will show that it could lead to unrest civil wars.

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In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.

Some people think that teenagers need to work while they are students. However, other people believe that young people should not combine their education with a job. These two options are controversial ones. In my opinion, they both have disadvantages and advantages. I base my opinion on the following points.

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