IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 43

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages s

Some individuals choose to stay most of their lives living near the place where they were born because it is difficult to adapt and communicate with people living in different parts of the world. The advantages of this are people stay connected with their culture and the family.

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The internet has changed the world. Many people think it is a great invention while others believe it creates problems. Give the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.

The world changed after the internet was invented. People think that the internet has a positive side. however, others think that it has a negative side in society. This essay will examine the advantages and the disadvantages of the Internet.

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As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays ,the rural areas become the next destionation for any future businesses due to problems with transportation and accommodation issue in many regions . Although government moving businesses to the countryside will peovide significant benefit to the cities ,the disadvantages cross it .

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Some argue that schools should prioritise life skills such as working in teams and solving problems instead of traditional academics. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At the current time, it is mentioned that schools should prioritise real life skills like collaborating and problem solving skills rather than traditional academics. I partially agree with this idea because both offer benefits such as preparation for real-world challenges and foundation for advanced knowledge.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Some individuals believe that high schools should permit to children learn the subjects which necessary for them .I completely agree with this viewpoint for a range of justifiable reasons .

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With the advancement in healthcare and technology, people now have a longer lifespan. Some argue that the retirement age which is normally 60 to 65 years of age should be adjusted to 70 years or even higher. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? Give reason and example to state your stance

Nowadays, people are experiencing longer life period due to the improvement of health and technology quality. In the past, only few made it until 70, but nowadays majority can live healthily until the age of 80. Due to this phenomenon, people are arguing whether the retirement age for working could be added up 5-10 years to 70 years old or later. I opine that the changing age policy is not necessary and should only be done with several conditions. In this essay, I am going to talk about the two sides considering this issue: physical health and mental readiness.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people believe that it is crusial for individuals, weither they are elder or young, to saving money for their upcoming occation. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement because it enhance flexible choice in people's life, as a back up plan or a great oppotunity to explore the world.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people reasearch this?

Recently, it has become common among some people to make research about the background of their possessions. Building's history is the most popular. Where does this come from and in How they do so? In this essay, I will give some reasons for it and introduce some ways for it.

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In some countries old people are highly valued and in other countries the young are considered to be more valuable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Or Some cultures value old age while others value young age. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Recently, the issue of who is more valuable between senior and youth has become the subject of heated debate. Some people assert that young age has many advantages, while others argue otherwise. I wholeheartedly agree with the former stand. In the following essay, both views will be discussed before a conclusion is reached with my opinion.

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Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animals life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?

Cutting rain forests can cause many critical issues. It may effects the extinction of endanger species and human populations. This essay totally agrees with this statement because the trees are the most significant producer in the ecosystem not only in rain forest but also around the world.

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In most countries, prison is the most common solution when people commit a crime. However, if they were to receive better education, it could prevent them from becoming criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When commiting a criminal offence the criminals are sentanced to serving time in correctional fasilities. This is due to poor education and some people are of the opinion that if these citisens recieve proper schooling they would know better then to resort to crime. I agree with this statement, our educational background do not install ethical upbringing as it should and will discuss it indeph further.

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Some people think that globalization is a force for good, promoting cultural exchange and economic development, while others believe it erodes national identity and widens economic inequality.

Several people believe globaization has many of aspects involving economic growth and culture that help enhance both sectors. While other argues that it threatens national identity and triggers economic disparities. In my perspective, I will explain both of them from my own viewpoint.

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It is good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on it .discuss the advantages and disadvantages .explan your choice.

Using computers from an early age and spending long hours on it have more disadvantages than advantages for children. I know, many parents worry about thier children cannot accept a lot of information without the computer, however, I can tell about several dangers of the computer for younger generation.

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23. Some people think that public transit should be accessible to all, even if this means higher taxes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals think that public transportation should be provided to a citizen, although this increases taxes. I partially agree with this statement. The reasons and examples will be discussed below.

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It is important to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

At the point of facing new circumstances, people have to decide the appropriate action. However, this might be sometimes risky. Taking risks can promote one’s life or may ruin everything and put them in a trouble. I think taking risks is not a necessary action in our lives and although it may have some good results, its negative points outweigh any positives in a larger scale. In this essay, I will propose some of these disadvantages and try to draw a conclusion.

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It is important for everyone, inclunding young people, to save money for their future. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, lots of people put their money on banks due to save it for future porpuses. They think having a certain amount of cash is vital for every one. But is it really important this much or not? I believe that saving up is pretty important that every body should try to it. In this essay, I will discuss it and support my opinion with examples.

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Some experts suggested that cyclists should have to pass a exam before riding on cycle for road safety. To what extended do you agree or disagree?

Regarding the issue of road safety, people hold diverse opinions. A number of people advocate that people should pass a cycling test before riding on a bike, while others disagree, believeing that it is not a practicle and effecient way to enhance road safety. I believe the latter statement is valid and I will explain with the following reasons in this essay.

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It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a widely held view that each and every person should be more flexible in order to take the risk in both personal and professional life. Although I wholeheartedly believe that deciding to take the risk may controverted to the serious threat for individuals' lives, risk-taking may make the life far more exciting and enthralling.

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Most people feel that private lives of celebrities shouldn't be openly shared by the media To what extent do you agree or disagree

Recent years with development of technology, social media has become more popular among people. Most people have a opinion that every aspect of personal lives of famous persons shouldn't be posted on the media. This essay will explore this idea and explain why I completely agree with these statement.

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Some people think that children should go to school as early as possible where as others believe they should wait until they are 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Although many people believe that kids should join schools in early age, I agree with the others point of view of the need to waits until the proper age .With this essay i will discuss both views and mine in them .

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