IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 39

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is true that teachers have a great influence the intellectual and social development of children more than parents. While some people tend to agree with this statement .I would have to support this idea .

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The most important aim of science shold be to improve people's lives To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no denying the fact that science and scientists play crucial role in our life. While it is a commonly held belief that improving people's lives must be the main focus part of science. There is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that every little movements we take in science sectors are specifically to enhance our lives.

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt the fact that the population growht has required another sources of food to satisfy people’s requirements. While it is a commonly held belief that insects can be a food option, others argue that this option not only has a detrimental impact on health but also on nature. This essay will analysis the pros and cons of eating insects

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

These days, the majority of men and women prefer to have a personal fitness trainer rather than playing sports or registering exercise classes. I think it has two main reasons and also the positive weight of hiring a personal fitness is more than negative. I will discuss this in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries, university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries, students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

In certain countries university students are still staying with their family throughought their study, while, at the same time, in other countries students are moving to another city to study at university. In my point of view, it is better to study in another city or even countrie. I believe, that this decision has much more benefits, than disadvantages.

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The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree?

These days everythings rely on science and technology and these plays a very crucial role in induviduals lives. For improving and developing a country, government should increase the funding of teachers in sciences rather than others. I strongly agree with this statement.

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Some people say that the main purpose of television should be eduction, while other says it should be for entertainment only. Discuss both side and give your opinions.

In mondern society television has integrated itself as an essential part in every day life. People watch it for a wide range of reasons, such as, e.g., relaxation or entertainment as well as education and the news. Subsequently, the view of its main purpose has diverged with some people arguing that television's main objective should be educational purposes only. On the other hand, arguments are being made that it should be for entertainment purposes only. This essay will explore both stances on the topic before providing my own opinion on the subject.

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In the past photographs were real on people and places. Nowadays with modern technologies, you can not trust the pictures. Do you think is it a positive or negative development?

It is obviously true that pictures in the past would indicate the real face of humans and areas. In recent times, likely applying of some contemporary softwares on pictures might cause the whole details of image would not be trusted. Although these kinds of modifications are changing some realities, but I firmly believe accessing these new graphic softwares are beneficial and should be supposed as positive effects.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Today there are a lot of different shops where we can buy all kind of stuff produced all over the world. Is it right to buy food produced in other countries? Is this idea useful for people nowadays?

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Due to the development and rapid expansion os supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People believe that because of advanced development of markets, many small branches can not compete with that, as a result local communities may die out.I agree with this opinion.

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In the past, most people spent their entire career working for one company, whereas people nowadays move from one job to another. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each? Which do you think is better? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some years ago, it was quite normal for all employees to work for the same business during their enterily work-life. Nowadays, things have been changed and the new workforce generation consider to change jobs frequently as the normal trent. This essay will discuss, the pros and cons of this two points of view, as well as share my opinion about why I support the idea of do not change jobs as the best option.

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People in all modern societies use drugs, but today’s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society.

Since their early years, young people saw their parents consume drugs almost everyday. This situations creates a mindset to them, which then cause them to follow those habits. While it is also not healthy for adult to depend their mental health on drugs, it has bigger effects to the young people. In my opinion, adult people should decrease using drugs in their daily life. In this essay, I would like to discuss the causes and some effects of massive use of drugs by young people.

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Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, think that there are better ways to reduce crime.

Many people believe that giving longer prison sentence is the greatest way to decrease crime rate. However, other people think that there are other ways to reduce crime. I believe that the best way is to improve social education lessons at schools.

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Some think the best way to reduce the time people spend in travelling to work is to replace the parks and gardens close to the city centers with apartment buildings where commuters can live, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is thought by some the best choice to decrease in spending date in go to the industry is relocation public environments in an urban area with apartment buildings where individuals can live there. This essay will discuss both opposite views.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences.Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.Discuss both views and give your opinion. Huy Tran

In the modern era, criminals rate is increasing and many dangerous criminal appear. While some argue that to decrease the prisoner, the best way is rise prison term. Others believe that alternative solutions will be more successful. Two points of view will be discussed in the following paragraphs before presenting my personal perspective in the conclusion.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, we hear many news and information about environmental changes. Some people believe the most important environmental problem is the loss of special species of plants and animals while others are not on the same page and they think there are more important matters. In this essay, I will discuss both views and present my own notion.

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Some people think governments should care more about elderly while others think they should focus on investing in education for younger students. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A group of people believe that governments should prioritize more money on education. While, others think that they should care a whole about older citizens. In this essay, I will argue about both perspectives, why people care about older citizens as well as why many people consider that a sum amount of money should be invested on the education system.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue advertisement is very important to let the customer know and purchase while others say that it is very popular and unnecessary to be concentrated. While advertisement is usually very common nowadays, I believe that advisement is a crucial marketing method to attract consumers.

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Some people think governments should care more about elderly while others think they should focus on investing in education for younger people. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In some countries, Students are required to learn a foreign language. But, in other countries, people believe that they do not have to do so. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are two types of countries regarding of learning foreign language in school. The first type required students to learn foreign language. Nonetheless, other type believes that students do not have to study other language in school. Based on my personal experience, I am more incline to the first type.

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