IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 39

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree ?

Music and art seem to be less valued than researchers as well as technology experts/ or those who have experience/are experienced in technology. In this essay, I am going to provide the reasons, why I agree that the scientific field is more prioritized by the modern generation than the entertainment industry.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People often believe that the primary goal of science is to improve human lives.I completely agree with this statement because it plays a crucial role in improving their lives through discovers in technology and medical discoveries.

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Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia as many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extend do you agree to this statement?

Due to modern life amenities and comfort, it's observed that obesity levels are increasing significantly among children. There is an emerging view that schools should start monitoring the dietry and excercising habits of their students. I firmly agree with this view of educational institutes playing a positive and responsible role in this.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, some individuals believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should pursue their professional career in their countries. Others argue that they should have the right to choose where they prefer to work whether it is in their own country or abroad. Although I firmly agree with the former perspective, this essay will discuss both views and address my opinion.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance sports or music and others are not. however, it is sometimes claimed that any children can be thaught to become a good sports person or musician. discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some people believe only persons who have a born talent can have success in their job. But at the same time, others are sure that anybody can achieve their aim at a chosen business. In my opinion, I would rather agree that any person can be successful if he or she puts in enough effort, but only a few people having special capacities may become extraordinary figures in their jobs. This essay will discuss both sides giving examples.

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The picture below shows the use of renewable energy accounting the total energy from 1971 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph compares six regions in terms of the use of renewable energy between four decades 1971 to 2006.

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raffic on roads has become a problem in nearly every country in the world. What can be done to reduce the amount of traffic at a society level and at an individual level

Adolescents in many countries are thought to lack the required skills and traits to be employed. Meanwhile, there is a shortage in the military services, implying that compulsory military services may be beneficial for society. I strongly disagree with this statement. Compulsory military service takes away the right to choose a career, depriving opportunities for higher education. Moreover, Youngsters in Third World Countries may be exposed to danger, since the militaries aren't strictly regulated.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The prevalence of advertisement gives a chance to demonstrate goods like a new among organizations.It has some advantages such as improving brand awareness and facilitating customers' consumer time while it also has some drawbacks like overpurchasening and financial waste.This essay will ensure various perspectives for both views.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people say that they only live once and will spend all the money right away after earning it. In my opinion, I believe that saving money for your own future is a beneficial idea, especially if you are a young person.

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Some argue that teachers should focus on academics more than much motivating students To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that teachers should prioritize academics over motivating admission, while others disagree. I strongly support the view that department should take precedence over motivation.

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Using a cell phone while driving is dangerous because it causes the driver to become distracted. Therefore, cell phone use by drivers should be made illegal. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advancement and the growing need to multitask has led to a spike in the usage of cellphones. People cannot let go of it, even while driving. It is thus believed that in order to avoid risk of distraction, phones must be banned while driving. This statement can be completely agreed upon. Henceforth are the reasons for my stand.

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People should never eat meat because raising animals for human consumption is cruel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In contemporary society, many people believe that raising animals for meat is amoral and should be prohibited. This essay will explore why I personally disagree with this statement and support my stance with several examples.

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams provided illustrate the layout of Porth Harbour from 2000 to the present. The harbour in general, experienced significant changes in structure, however some parts remained unchanged.

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some argue that teachers should focus on academics more than motivating students. to what extent do you agree or disagree

There is a view that, educating students with academic ways is more crucial than motivating them. In my opinion, while some argue that, motivation can help them to achieve the success faster, I’m totally agree that, educating them with high-qualified experiences is more impactful and desirable way to make more real results with them.

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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

These pictures illustrate how tomato ketchup have been produced.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Human life are full of struggles, and sometimes people had to go through multiple challenging situations which will turn into learnable lessons for the future.I strongly agree with the statement that most experiences that occurs in our life will eventually teach us and help humans to develop the capabilty to differentiate between right and wrong. This essay is going to elucidate the reason to support this viewpoint.

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Directors large organisations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees. Some people think it is necessary, but others believe that it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people believe that directors of large corporations should have higher salaries than those who are working under them. According to me, the salaries of these individuals solely depend on the responsibilities that they are held accountable for.

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In future, people may longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by cards or by phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

Advancement in technology has changed every aspect of human life, finance and business are no exception. In this contemporary epoch, it has been reckoned by experts that in future, people will only be able to make payments using cards or by smartphones, and cash will not be used to pay for the commodities bought from the shops. This essay will elucidate that prediction cannot be turned into reality, and will also discuss the testaments that why many would be unhappy to give up cash in the subsequent paragraph.

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Nowadays, artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, the use of artificial intelligence in driving cars has increased significantly. This is due to advancement in the technology and it should be seen as a positive development because it saves time.

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Some argue that schools should prioritize life skills such as working in teams and solving problems instead of traditional academics. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

On the ground that education is crucial for children, there has been a controversy amongst individuals regarding whether schools should raise the importance of soft skills more than hard skills. While these juveniles need to be taught about academic materials, life skills are considered to be necessary for today’s workplace as well. This essay will elaborate on both opposing ideas and my own opinion in which every institution should value both knowledge equally.

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