IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 41

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals think that the most effective way to enhance the health of the public is to increase sports facilities while others believe that this will have a small effect on public health. I personally believe that while advanced sports facilities helps to improve public health because sports involves physical movements, to improve public health other steps should be taken because those steps are mandatory and related to the improvement of public health.

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Some people think that rest and sleep are the best methods to relax while others think that it can be done by involving in some activities like sports. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

There is no denying the fact that people have opinion think about relaxtion. While it is commonly held belief that resting and sleeping are the best way to relax, there is also an argument that involv in some physical activitiea such as sports, is the good path lead to relax. This essay will analyse this topic from both point and express my opinion.

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Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiende.

Working in large industries is always better than being employed in small size firms, believed by number of individuals. I agree with this scenario that employees of large companies has more benefits than others. under following paragraph, I will embarking on reasons behind my prospective.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is well known that "Science is a collection of facts". Some people believe that the most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. This opinion is one of the most important aims, but science doesn't necessarily have to be all about improving lives directly. The writer will explain the reasons below.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything orgainsed and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A great number of people believe that it is crucial to keep your house or your workplace well organised and clean .From my point of view , i agree with this statement because the environment around you affects the way you behave and in this essay i will explain why i agree with this statment.

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Some modern artist receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while other struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Today some of great art individuals aquired a huge fees for the arts they doing, on the other hand other people having difficulties to survive. For that governments must approach clear steps to tackle this unfair condition. I totally agree with this statement and I will mention the reasons in this essay.

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Traditional medicines, such as herbal remedies and acupuncture, are very popular in some countries. Those who practice traditional medicines claim that it is better than modern medicine in maintaining and improving health. Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

In recent decades, the use of alternative medicines has exponentially increase to the point that its practitioners proclaim that it is even more effective than conventional medicines. Personally, I am vehemently opposed to this statement. This essay will elaborate the reasons and give some examples to demonstrate point and prove argument.

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Many people join distance-learning programs (studys material, post, TV, İnternet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending collages or universities does. Do you agree or disagree.

In this modern era, learning has become rigid and complicated because there are numerous ways to obtain knowledge. Many believe that off-campus training is the best method of learning but other argues that nothing beats in-person education. It is agreed that attending school serves more benefit to students than studying through Internet. Being said, students able to enjoy social life, as well as motivated to learn at school.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In the modern era, people of many countries moving towards the cities, and it has been decreasing the population of countryside. I believe that, although it has more negatives but there are few positives of this trend.

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People are living in a ‘throwaway society,’ using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?

Nowadays, things are just thrown all over hence human being are staying in a ‘throwaway environment’ with items used for a little period then they get rid of them. This essay will show the causes of this and what they lead to.

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

Engaging in stimulating challenges can significantly enhance children's concentration skills. Participating in enjoyable activities can foster the development of children's skills and creativity more effectively than reading alone. I strongly agree with this viewpoint. This essay will explore the reasons for this in the following paragraphs.

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answers

Performing exciting challenges with kids can foster their sense of concentration. Playing fun activities can lead to developing children's skills and creativity rather than reading. I firmly agree with this notion. This essay will delve into the reasons in upcoming paragraphs.

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As the political and social conditions around the world are transforming the trend of the immigration is increasing day by day. What do you think what can be positive and negative impact of immigration. Discuss both views.

Fostering innovation techniques to perform different tasks has made work more efficient and has revolutionised industries, globally, in terms of economic growth and cultural integrety. It is said that immigration has become a significant trend which is driven by changing political and social values. This essay will not only explore the importance of immigration but also explain downsides.

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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?

It is true that both women and men have the right to get everything equally. While I acknowledge that women should able to do most of the jobs they want, I believe that there are certain jobs which is not align with women, not because they are women, rather than their physical and mental ability.

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'Prevention is better than cure''. Researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invets in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree

Nowadays, people around the world are suffering from the widespread prevelance of diseases, which has negatively affected people`s wellbeing. Therefore, some people argue that more money should be spent on preventive measure instead of researching and curing diseases. In my view, precautious measurements could decrease infestation of diseases, however, investing money on inventing treatment for severe diseases is also crucial.

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Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not having strict laws a better policy. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In several societies, laws are imposed that ages of citizens can drink alcohol Meanwhile, other communities think about drinking alcohol must not be baned. This essay will discuss both approaches, however, I firmly believe that it is the most important which imposing laws about the legal ages of alcoholic drinks, because it protects and useful for young generations.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In many nations, owning a home is considered more important than renting.It is widely believed that owning a home is particularly beneficial for families with children. Futhermore, households can live withouth any financial strain imposed by a landlord.

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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kinds of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

It is natural that people avoid changes in their lives. This could lead to problems like being lack of resilience and missing opportunities. The most viable solutions is to use self-help resources and put it into practice in order to overcome fear of uncertainty.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different age and culture together . to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Music is a source of entertainment that can gather people from different nations and ages closely. In fact, I strongly agree with those who feel that music can unite people from various ages and cultures for two main reasons.

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Employment should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The idea that employees should receive a long holiday to enhance job performance it is a debatable topic. While some may argue that extended vacation reduce productivity, I to some extend agree with the view of providing time off to employees are beneficial to both individual and organisations.

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