IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 41

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that the best way to teach children to behave well is to punish them. Others argue that rewarding and praising children is a better way to teach them the difference betweeen right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There exists little dispute over the ways to improving youngsters actions. While some people hold the view that punishment makes them to adopt more appropriate manners, many, myself imcluded, tend to adopt a more robust in favour of praising is more beneficial for them to distinguish good from evil.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

The small proportion of children surfing on their mobile phones for a long period of time. Presumably, this happen because of the digitalization. Furthermore, I believe that this kind of practice is more negative as is cause mental health issues despite the fact that children can learn new languages which is positive development.

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Some people believe that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside, while others argue that living in cities is more beneficial. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Upbringing of a child is very sensitive issue now a days. Parents should take into account a lot of factors while choosing the place for upbringing of a child. Although ,many people argue that village is suitable place for that but I absolutely disagree with this. .In the following paragraphs I will discuss the point of view of both types of people and will try to describe how it is eventually important to prefer cities over countryside.

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Write about the following topic: More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

For last decades, obesity in kids have been increased Particularly in affluent countries. There are widely concern about this challenging. I believe we must first address it is root causes. in this essay will explore the causes of obesity among of the childeren and examine its effects on them.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In the contemporary world of globalization, where technology is taking over repetitive work, some people argue that the technology makes their lives more difficult, while others are against this notion. This essay will discuss why technology makes lives much easier than it used to be without them.

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Deforestation is considered one of the major environmental problems. What are the causes and effects of deforestation? What solutions can be put in place to address this issue ?

Nowdays deforestation is considered as a one of the main ecologically issues.This essay will discuss how infrastructure and agriculture are the main cause of this problem,and the most viable solutions are regenaration and substitution the material with

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: ‘It is important for foreigners to know something about the history and culture of the country they live in.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In the contemporary world of globalization, people are migrating to new destinations for better lifestyle but do they need to learn about the heritage of a country? This essay will discuss why it is important for such people to know about the country where they live.

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Write about the following topic: In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and includes relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is irrefutable, that usage of Technology has changed the lifes of human beings. It is quite often in these days that people, in different countries are using their mobile phones for paying bills or other things instead of using money or cards. It has several benefits and will be discussed further in this essay.

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Some people think that online education is better than traditional classroom-based learning. Do you agree or disagree?

It is considered by some that online education effects students more than traditional classroom-based learning .In my opinion, online education can bring benefits to students ,but sometimes they still need to have face-to-face education.

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Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

One of the most controversial issues today relates to children's education. While some people trend towards the viewpoint that children make some mistakes is acceptable, others support the opinion that parent should take good care of children from making mistakes. In this essay, I am going to examine both points of view and provide my own opinion.

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to what extend do you agree with business and society

Business ethics and corporate social responsibility are the essential structure of business, which navigate companies throughout the time of multiplex challenges, especially at times when choices can have an inferior impact on both local and global society. Challenges such as: economic crises, environmental issues, etc. Both Candela (2024) and Smith (2023) views converge on the idea that business should not underestimate consequences of non-profit business. It should center on its effect on society, not only about profit.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays to purchase food, people tend to go to supermarket as their preferred spot. Although I believe disadvantages are there,but development is more and can lead to an efficient mode of shopping.

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It’s generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance, music and sport and others are not. However, it’s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sportsperson or musician. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, There are lots of individuals who believe that each person has a few talents when they born, while others are disagree with this statement that think people can learn whatever they keen to know. I personally am in the second group however, I have faith on talented people, since I see lots of them in real life.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for a charity, improving the neighbour or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your answer and Include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Community services has become the debatable topic of discussion in recent years.It is essential for the welfare of society.A lot of people argue that community services( such as working for charity,improving the neighbour or teaching sports to younger children).I absolutely concur with this statement.In the following paragraphs, I will discuss why this is important.

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People nowadays sleep less than they used to be in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effect on individuals and people around them?

As the expanse of modernisation is overhauling each sphere of life, the dynamics of sleep have altered too. These days number of sleeping hours decreased drastically compared to bygone days. A myriad of ostensible factors are accountable for this scenario, and this trend is leading towards multitude of besmirch consequenses.

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Some people think that children should obey and do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Others think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion

Some people think that children should obey their parents and teachers, and do what they instruct children to do. Others believe that children who are controlled too much cannot deal with problems when they become adults. I personally believe that while controlling makes children disciplined for a certain time, it hinders their capabilities of making decisions in their adulthood.

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Most countries aim to improve their standard of living through economic development, but many important social values can be lost as a result. Do the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is widely debated that it is vital for many nations to improve better quality of living for its people through economics, others argue that such emphasis could contribute to the lost of several essential social values. Hence, I personally agree with the former statment as this can alleviate the highly intensive competition which in turns of will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Transporting goods and people pollutes the environment. Some people believe that governments should be responsible for this issue, while others believe it is individuals' responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this day and age shipping things and transferring individuals prom one place to another results in environment pollution. A section of society vehemently deem that authoriesties should in chage of controlling environment contamination, whereas othes assert that society should be answerable for this. Althought this essay will scrutinize both perspectives in forthcoming paragraphs. I concur that both parties are equally accontable for this scenario.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Othe people think that in today's world subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both points and give your opinion

Education is a significant part of life, which also helps to determine the future in distinct ways. Hence, people often debate on the importance of different subjects in school life. Like there are some people who consider history being the more crucial but other people opposses this by saying that science and technology is much more important. In the upcoming paragraphs, both views will be discussed followed by my own opinion.

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Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days, in many families both parents are working. Some working parents think that grandparents should look after their children, while others believe that childcare centres are the best in this regard. I personally believe that while grandparents instill tradiational values in their grandchildren, childcare facilities are the most suitable option for taking care of children because they are professionals.

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