IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 41

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Giving International aid to the poorer countries becomes more and more popular in international society. Some people tend to claim the aid from developed countries was harmful to the developing countries. However I tend to completely disagree this viewpoint.

Giving International aid to the poorer countries becomes more and more popular in international society. Some people tend to claim the aid from developed countries is harmful to the developing countries. However I tend to completely disagree this viewpoint.

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines . Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages.

There were a lot of things that used to be done by humans themselves in their domestic routine in the past. There is a debate about whether it is more beneficial or detrimental . From my point of view, it has more positive effects rather than negative.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today’s fast-paced world, everything is developing such as technology, transportation and science. Some argue that the most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives, while opponents argue that does not need to be the main concern. In my opinion, I disagree with this argument because there are also several aspects to look after like environment protection.

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Many students around the world face difficulties in getting a quality education. What are the problems associated with this? What are the solutions?

In the international case, many students have challenges in accessing a good quality of education. This is probably because they have to face education inequality in their places and unqualified teachers in schools. Therefore, it is a responsibility for government to adress these issues.

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“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.

Its better to avoid the problem rather than finding a solution for it as medical procedures are highly expensive so the great option is to spend money on things which will keep you far from the illness. This is a great statement and i am on its side to a high extend.

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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The provided chart illustrates the process of ketchup production.

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It is pointless making children who lack artistic talent learn painting and drawing in Art classes at school. Instead, they should concentrate on other creative or practical subjects for which they may have more aptitude. To what extent to do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that Art classes should not be held for school children who do not possess any skill in drawing, allowing them to spend more time on lessons that require another kind of creativity. This essay agrees with the statement at some points, though the opinions differentiate at other ones. I believe that there are certain situations when it would be better to redirect the creativity of a certain child into other fields, while sometimes it is better to let a kid continue to work at their Art lessons.

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Many people think the internet is a great invention. However there is also a group that believe it creates problems. This essay will outline both advantages and disadvantages of the internet.

The world today is very different from the past and that includes the internet. People use the internet everywhere in work, school, and home. The internet plays an important role in the world today. Using the internet in a proper way will help people in their daily life. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.

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With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

In some countries, the population growth causes decreasing amount of natural places. Protecting these areas is very essential for the population's health and also economic development. To solve that problem, there are some practical solutions such as establishing protected reserves and implementing restricted rules.

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Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residental areas for ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To want extend do you agree or disagree with this?

While a plethora of people love their public parks, other constructions like residential areas for an increasing number of individuals or enhancing business would be the better way of using the territories. This essay states that building extra facilities in favor of green places can cause overpopulation in urban parts and reduce places for resting as well as lead to biodiversity issues.

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Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residental areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extnet do you agree or disagree with this?

Some people belive that public parks are not essential and that these areas could be used for more practical purposes, such as building residental housing or supporting business development. However, public parks play crucial role in both human health and social life. While boosting ecenomy and providing accommodation for growing population is important, this process should not result in eliminating parks.

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Some people believe that a person’s criminal record should be removed when they reach the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that ones criminal record should be removed when they reach the age of 18. I partially disagree with this, however, in this essay i want to highlight both sides of view.

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To much money is being spent on reestablishing old buildings,it would be better to spent this money on building new buildings. do you agree or disagree

Some people often claim that rather than renovating or redeveloping aged structures, money should be spent on establishing new ones. I do not agree with this notion, and I will elaborate on my points on the disagreement.

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals think that at all levels of education, from basic school to university level are spending too much time on acquiring facts and there is no efficient time to learn practically any skills. From my perspective, I agree with this statement, because it is true and the educational journey is very long to finish.

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The amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in schools in order to tackle the problem of outweight children. Do you think this is the best way to deal with the problem? What other solutions can you suggest?

Many think that the problem of child obesity can be addressed by increasing time for physical activity in schools. Despite being an effective way to deal with the problem, I do not think it is the best solution as complex approach can be more beneficial for tackling the issue. Other solutions such as promoting healthy nutrition and healthy habits would be a better choice.

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ome people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others see that having a friendly relation is better. Discuss both points and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that society constantly seeks better ways to improve educational systems. While some believe that students should fear their teachers to achieve higher grades, others argue that a friendly relationship fosters better academic performance. This essay will discuss both perspectives and present my opinion.

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Some people think it is better to have many short holidays during the years. Others believe it would be beneficial to have fewer longer vacation. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

The modern world has a large variety of anniversary which can be seen in all facets of life, providing some lie down time or even relief. It is the opinion of this writer that numerous short vacations play a crucial part in people's relaxation due to avoiding laziness for a long-term idle hours and ensuring memories about academic knowledge sustainably rather than those who suppose just needing less long vacations in a year being more advantageous for community.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Computers became an increasingly important role in the last century. The question remains if they are the biggest invention in the last hundred years. In this essay I want to argue about their benefits and why i believe a world without them is almost impossible to imagine.

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Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree? (Huseyn)

It is widely acknowledged that many animal species are becoming endangered due to various human activities. While some people argue that investing in efforts to protect these species is a waste of valuable resources, I firmly disagree. In my opinion, conserving endangered animals is crucial for maintaining a sustainable global ecosystem.

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Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others see that having a friendly relations is better. what do you think? Discus both points and give us opinion.

To be afraid of the teacher is said to have a better impact on the students, while others think that having an intimate relationship will benefit them. Both points of view can be seen as beneficial to a certain extent. Analysing the differences will make it clear which is better than the other.

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