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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Overall, the widespead use of the internet has mostly positive effect on life in today's world

Nowdays the use of internet have became essential to everyone, even students. Most of the people have access to internet and they can search all information that they want with one click. Personally, I belive internet has made our lives eassier, especeally when some people are not in their countries. I feel this way for two main reasons, wich I will explore in the following essay.

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Students in some countries leave school without good understanding of how to manage their money, What do you think are the reasons ?What are the solutions to this problem?

Nowadays, many students don’t have good money management skills when they leave school in some countries. However, whether young people need to learn how to manage their money is a controversial problem. In my opinion, colleges should provide a subject to teach people how to manage their money, and the students need to learn this knowledge.

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With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

Recently, there have been arguments that the demanding rates of oil and gas resources have increased then, extend areas of the world will be able to get more resources. I partially agree with this statement because of two reasons.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that earning a good life has more meaning to people than job satisfaction. I take an opposing view and I believe that other aspects of life should take priority over earning money.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates.

World warming is one of the hugest danger that people collide nowadays and sea level are dropping faster and faster at a high speed. This essay will observe urgent questions and relevant answers to this following issues.

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nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties having enough sleep what are problems caused by lack of sleep? what can be done about this lack of sleep?

In recent decades, life has become fast and people do not have time for themselves due to their hectic lifestyles. This is the reason why a large section of society is having difficulties getting enough sleep. In this essay, I will discuss the problems that lack of sleep can cause and also discuss the steps.

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The world's natural resources are consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the causes of this situation? What are the solutions?

The overconsumption of natural resources is emerging as a major topic of concern today. This alarming trend is caused by a few factors, such as the substantial demands for energy and the overdependence on developing nations’ natural resources. It should be addressed by a number of definite actions, such as manufacturing more environmentally friendly products and utilizing alternative energy sources.

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Some people think young people should be free to choose the job that they want, while others believe that they should be realistic and think about their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have more different views about how young adults choose a job for their future career path. While some argue that young people should pursue their dream jobs, I believe that being pragmatic and considering the prospect of career growth is better for them.

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In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs

The Covid-19 pandemic has badly hurt the youth labour market. In recent years, many young peoples were unemployed immediately when they graduated from school. Some sent dozens of resumes but didn't get any response. If the situation can't be mitigated, that would be harmful to the individual and society. In this essay, we'll discuss these issues and try to find possible solutions.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that students should be encouraged to learn what they want in university. Meanwhile, other people think that it is essential to force them to study subjects that will be helpful for them in the early future like science and technology. In my opinion, I do not think we should force students to learn anything.

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Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will provide better care for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a very challenging decision for working parents to decide if their children have to be sent to childcare centres or to be taken care of by grandparents. There are many parents who are opting for childcare centres whereas many others argue that it is always better if the children are taken care of by family members or grandparents. This essay discusses both views and also like portrays my opinion on this.

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Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is true that badly-behaved students in schools have detrimental effects on good-quality students. Poor behaviour students who are rude and impolite are taught in combination with separate. Personally, I agree completely with this statement. In the essay, I will give some reasons for that.

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Write about the following topic: Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, juvenile crime is becoming increasingly common in many areas of the world. While several factors contribute to such a sad reality, there are options that governments can consider in order to tackle the problem.

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There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important reason/factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that salary is the essential key to retaining workers in a company. In my view, though in the past it would be true, I am truly convinced that in our modern era, it is not the main factor. In this essay, I will first discuss the place of money in our society and second, I will discuss today's key factor.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with statement?

Nowadays, children have many more opportunities to lead a healthy life than in the past because generally they live in hygienic surroundings and have plenty to eat. However, modern lifestyles mean that many children spend long hours in front of the television or computers, do not take a great deal of exercise and eat an unbalanced diet.

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nowadays, we can watch entertainment performance from the screen (laptop, etc) and no need to watch it live. To what extent do you agree?

Amusement is becoming an essential part of people's life. People entertain them in various ways such as by watching movies, serials, cartoons etc. Some say that they should prefer to watch these on their personal computer instead of going outside. I completely agree with this statement and I will discuss my points further as well.

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Some people think international events such as the Olympic games are important and can bring nations together. Others however think that they are a waste of money as money could be spent on more issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some individuals that activities uniting countries of the world such as sporting events are essential and should be held, while others believe these occasions are means of wasting resources. In my opinion, I think the countries should continue to hold these events because they promote economic growth and acculturation.

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It is a commonly held belief that the death penalty is a good deterrent to prevent heinous crimes. However, others believe that life long sentence is a better deterrent. Discuss both views.

The death penalty is considered an Inhuman act by human rights groups. While some law professionals advocate that law must act strictly in dealing with heinous crimes. Crime is increasing in every country and to prevent it we need some tough measure. Punishment like being hanged to death is supported by many people .Whereas some people think that life imprisonment is an alternative solution to it. Let's discuss both views in detail.

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Some people believe that teaching ethics to children is responsibility of teachers. Others say that this responsibility lies with parents. Discuss both these views and give you own view.

Ethics plays an important role in children's lives. It is believed that it should be taught by teachers while others say that parents should take the responsibility for teaching it to their offspring. In this essay, i will discuss both views and give my opinion in the conclusion

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements,and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is true that nowadays celebrities and influencers are mostly known for their luxurious lifestyle and money rather than their accomplishments. Since many people , and more importantly the younger generation, take celebrities as their role models,I strongly believe that this trend will have negative impacts on their attitude.

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