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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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government should spend more money on railways than roads. what do you think about this?

In this contemporary era, the transportation system needs to be well organized in big cities around the globe. Many individuals opine that government should expand more budget on trains rather than highways b. I agree with that notion because railways environment friendly as well as it helps to reduce traffic congestion.

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The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Music has been the favourite entertainment medium for people from ancient times. It is widely believed that its most important use is mitigating stress. I partly agree with this notion and this essay will discuss why bringing happiness is the prime use of music.

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government should spend more money on railways than roads. what do you think about this?

In this contemporary era, transportation system needs to be well organized in big cities around the globe. Many individuals opine that government should expand more budget on trains rather than highway. I agree with that notion because railways environment friendly as well as it helps to reduce traffic congestion.

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Were you to given the opportunity to work in the bank, please demonstrate your ability to prioritize multi-tasks under busy workload and heavy pressure with limited instructions and to meet deadlines with attention to details.

In order to address the situation where multi-tasks have to be done and work pressure is enormous, I would adopt the following 4-steps methodology based on my previous work experience.

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Most people believe that stricter punishments should be given for traffic offenses. To what extent do you agree?

Some members of society believe that traffic regulation ought to be regulated strictly in order to reduce the number of its violations. I strongly agree with this statement since its potential benefits for human life are due to its importance in safety reasons and national income. This essay would then provide a couple of natures that support this obligation.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that being a part of one company is a proper way of career development. However, there are people that suppose that this fact restricts them because working in different places may have benefits. I personally think that a large number of jobs or positions in life can help us to understand our profession better.

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Some people say that universities should be concerned with educating people so that they will have wide general knowledge and be able to consider important matters from an informed viewpoint. Other people say that universities should simply train students to do the jobs required by society, and not concern themselves with broader issues.

In Today's World, the university training curriculum has been receiving a great deal of public attention, whether educational institutions should give sufficient theory which is necessary or they just should teach foundation learning that is enough to service their job. I would discuss both sides, but I am leaning toward the latter opinion.

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Some people think there should be free health care for all people, but others disagree. Discuss both sides.

Health care is the most important thing that all people either he is rich or poor get panicked about if it hits anyone in their family or even themselves. For this reason this issue it's one of the most popular essentials that people all agree about. But, when money engages in the situation especially, if there is a charity or free support, not all people agree on this. Here I will discuss why people support having free good health treatments but others disagree.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Education benefits not only our individual lives, but it also contributes to society's development. This gives rise to the discussion about whether some subjects, like technology and science, are more important than history. I totally agree with the idea that technology and science are more important to be taught at school than history.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some cultures, it is essential to own a house compared to renting a home. This situation might be due to feeling safe and becoming an adult. This essay will explore why people buy a house and explain why I think having your own is beneficial.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-emplyed, rather than to work for a company or organization. why might this be the case? what could be disadvntages of being self-employed?

With growing technology people are eager to be self-employed instead of working for other companies. Various factors affect this decision. But as always when you get something, you lose some other thing. It’s true for freelancing too. There is a vast range of reasons that cause people to want to be a freelancer.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case?

These days, it is believed, that in a number of countries it is better to own a home, rather than lease one, as it might be beneficial for the resident. Owning a house in certain locations can be considered a lifetime investment with a guaranteed return, rather than spending a huge sum of money on paying rent.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, speaking in languages other than the native one is a necessity. There are different views about why people become bilingual or multilingual. While some believe that the motivation to this trend is travelling or working in another countries, others consider that those are not sufficient reasons. In my opinion, it happens as languages privilege us with the ability to communicate with different communities and cultures.

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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

Scientists have found that colour has a great impact on our feelings. Due to that fact, people have to pay more attention while creating a design of working places. In my opinion, choosing the right colours is a very essential thing which might affect different spheres of a person's life.

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Due to many human activities animal's and plants' life is in danger. Some think that this cannot be changed. Some think that government should do something. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Wildlife and plant life are under threat because of human activities. Few people believe that it would not be changed. While others think that government should take steps to protect them. I tend to incline towards the latter notion.

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The internet has a bigger impact on people’s lives because it is more popular than television.

Nowadays, people use the Internet a lot more than television and the Internet has an effect on them. I agree with the opinion that Social networks and news on the Internet

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

These days, it's obvious that many people want to work for themselves, not for a company. There are several reasons why, and also some downsides of being self-employed as well.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffreing from health problems as a result eating too much fast food .It is necessary for governments for goevernments to impose a higher tax on this kind of fast food.

Fast food is one of the most adored food all over the world, irrespective of the country. However, an ample of people are suffering from health issues because of consuming higher amounts of fast food. While some argue that government should increase taxes on these types of food. In this essay, I will further elucidate this topic and present my ideas and opinion.

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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. what do you think the causes are? what solutions can you suggest?

Megacities all over the world have their specific problems but traffic is a common matter among them. A lot of details could face the city with traffic but they are clear and obvious and with some simple and complicated solutions, cities will overcome the traffic.

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Some of the most beautiful natural parks in the world are also home to endangered animals. What are some possible problems and solutions ?

Currently, governments are interested in wildlife to secure animals' lives and give people access to visit them in the safest way. This essay will discuss the threatened animal actions by human beings and how to avoid this dangerous situation by sharing some awareness before entering the parks.

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