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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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In some countries,young people are encouraged to work or travel between finishing high school and high school school.Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages for young people who decides to do so

According to the general saying and belief,"all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy", working or travelling is a form of recreation and orientation.Young generations tend to enjoy exploring and embarking on an adventure including tourism therefore I will be discussing the merits and demerits of permitting them to explore their energy in working ànd traveling.The interval between graduating from college and securing admission into a tertiary institution is often a transitional period,most often adolescents are found in this category as it is known,àdolesence is a period of change from childhood to early adulthood which is often characterised by a change in behaviours, attitudes and beliefs,therefore they should never be left idle as an idle hand is the devil's workshop.

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Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have same opinions as them, other people believe it’s good to have friend who disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Individuals at all times are encouraged to have friends. However, there is always a debate regarding the friends that are best for you. Some people believe that having friends, that support your opinion is beneficial while some oppose, and are in the view that having friends with different opinions is beneficial. This essay will outline the two views followed by my opinion.

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Some people believe that countries should invite foreign companies to open their brunches, offices and factories in order to develop their economies. Others think countries should invest in their own companies instead. Discuss both view and give your opinions.

The economy is an essential sector in any country thus, the government should take care of. Although, some people claim that countries should attract foreign companies to run their businesses to flourish their economies, others believe that countries should invest in their local companies instead. I believe the countries should develop and increase their local companies rather than depending on foreign business.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

Nowadays many parents purchase a multitude of toys for their children to play with. This essay will demonstrate some benefits that toys can bring to kids' lives but will also show some drawbacks associated with this.

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“In many societies in the world, the population is aging rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

Nowadays people are getting older briskly which results in to incline in public healthcare expenditure.Some people opine that these expenses should be paid by the country's citizens in future. I believe citizens are an asset to any nation and it is important for government to take some responsibility for its natives. I will articulate this phenomenon with a plausible explanation in the following paragraphs.

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Thesedays, problems with pollution are becoming worse, particularly in large cities. What are the reasons for this and how can this be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, community in big metropolis face more problems related to infection and they argue that it is not to be better from time to time because of two main reasons. Therefore, to tackle the problem, personally, I believe that government should create viable regulations of environment and give relaxation to industrial tax.

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The most important function of music is that it help people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Although, the song has been recognized as the most powerful tool that has ever existed. Some individuals have regarded its most beneficial effect as stress reduction. I disagree with this argument because there is a much greater usefulness of melody which I will be discussing in this essay.

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Many parents are unhappy with their children playing violent games and watching violent movies. How it can effect children and what can be done to solve this problem

It is common knowledge that the majority of adults find violent media and movies objectionable to children. Even though it is just a game or a movie, it contains bad behaviour that can affect how kids behave towards their surroundings.

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Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people who last their Jobs because of it.

There is an ongoing debate regarding the impact of online shopping on people's lives. While online shopping has made many things easier for individuals, it has also caused some jobs to disappear. In this essay, I will discuss this debate in more detail.

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The best way for the country to prepare for future is to invest on the young people. How true do you think is this ? What are the ways to spend resources on these young people ?

The majority of countries usually try to find out ways for achieving a better future. As long as the young population represents the future workers and scientists , Many countries choose to develop their young population . I believe that youth are the future workers and scientists . Consequently , the best way to invest in youngsters is to promote better education systems and facilities .

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Importance of social media on mental health, discuss the pros and cons.

The usefulness of social networking on mental health. In this context, I will be discussing the advantages and disadvantages of the consequence of social networking on the wellness of man. And at the end of this, I would reach a reasonable conclusion analysing why social publishing creates awareness, serves as a medium of entertainment as well as a negative impact based on the abuse of social publishing.

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Nowadays, sports is a big business with high earnings for professional sports people and companies involved both financially and other ways. Is this a positive or negative development for sports? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, sport is an aspect that offers a large turnover for competent sports players and companies engaged in both financial and other ways. From my point of view, this phenomenon has both merits and demerits; however, its benefits overwhelm its drawbacks, which can be illustrated as follows.

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stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. what do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Recently, there is an increasing number of people suffering from diseases associated with stress. This essay will discuss the main causes of illnesses associated with stress including longer time and increased job pressures. Additionally, this essay will suggest two major solutions to these problems including improving one's work-life balance and healthy diet.

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In today's world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the fact that top-notch technology and scientific knowledge are not able to convey messages about real life but art can. This essay is devoted to some meaningful fields that artists bring about through considerable works.

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Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would be benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.Do you agree or disagree?

People hold different views on whether advertising is successful to encourage customers to buy their products or not. As far as I am concerned, I think that the marketing is successful in persuading more buyers to buy their items. In my essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific samples to support your answer

People nowadays use different attires in the situation on differing which they tend to have to. Clothes usage in any situation brings advantages while also drawbacks.

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Nowadays people get married and have children after the age of 30. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples based on your experiences.

In this contemporary era, individuals are going to be wedded to another person after getting above than 30 years as well as planning their baby exactly after the marriage. while, it assists them to undertake their responsibilities and complete their family, I believe it has several drawbacks that it leads to the shortage of financial resources due to prompt decision.

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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations.While others think it is a waste of money .Discuss both views

The majority of individuals argue that over usage of finances during household events is unsubstantial , however, different exponents think that it is a crucial matter. This dissertation will explain the reasons or the necessity of having get together , and happy moments as well as lavishing needed funds and living extravagant life in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and five your opinion.

Today, teaching art in schools is the subject of dispute between people who regard art as really necessary for children and individuals who find art a waste of time. In my view, art does not play an important role in a child's development.

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Smoking should be banned in all public places even though it would restrict some of other people’s freedoms. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that smoking in public places should be prohibited as it can constrain the freedom of other individuals. In my opinion, smoking should be banned in civic places as it can lead to irreversible diseases and significantly increase the number of smoking individuals.

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