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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Due to the increase in population in city area, many people are living in homes with small or no outdoors. Do you think this is a negative or positive development ?

Overpopulation in the urban areas has compelled numbers of people to reside in a tiny range leaving no outdoors at all. Although this can help them to fulfil their dream in their destained city, I believe that there are more drawbacks because it will negatively impact their health.

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Some people consider that just governmental leaders and big companies can alleviate environmental problems and take action on global warming, while the contribution of citizens has no impact on improving the environment. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with the viewpoint.

Most people in modern society believe that overheating is one of the government's responsibilities as well as companies. Furthermore, there is no contribution needed from civilians. Some argue that it's the responsibility of both parties. In this essay, I will explore the validity of this statement and figure out my opinion regarding this. Firstly, I will show why I believe that both parties needed to be responsible for this and secondly I demonstrate how both parties can involve in making this correction.

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Traffic congestion in major cities is an increasing problem, yet there is an environmental impact to be considered when building new roads. What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, It is often argued that traffic issue, especially in metropolitan city areas increasing day by day and for that reason, the Government need to build new roads, and as a result, it affects negatively our environment. In my opinion, the usage of more public vehicles and building factories in village areas helps to eliminate this problem very efficiently.

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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that individuals, nowadays, cannot benefit from the former time. Nevertheless, In my point of view vice versa is correct. Where the present people should make the best use of their great grandparents' time. This brief essay highlights the causes of why we should review and educate ourselves from the past time.

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Scientist say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

The language barrier is a major problem faced by people around the world when they try to get out of the box. Researches advocate that in the coming years humanity will have a common language to communicate. I consider this an advantageous development, and my reasoning is analysed in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than local people. Why is this? What can be done to encourage local people to visit museums and historical sites?

Most of the tourist places have many museums as well as sites of historical relevance. However, such places are majorly visited by foreign visitors rather than the natives. This essay intends to discuss the reasons behind this phenomenon, and

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Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no doubt that technology has changed the way of communication. However, the technology serves both the developed and developing world to communicate in spite of many struggles faced due to political issues. I totally believe that social channels such as Facebook pages, youtube channels and other social sites play an essential role in building the bridge across the world.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is believed by some that people as doctors or engineers should work in the place where they received their training, whereas others assert that they should be freed from the limitation and opt to work at any place they wish. In the following essay, both views will be explored, and I will explain the reason why I reckon that people should work without any geographical restrictions.

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The Internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet? What are the best ways to solve them?

The Internet is one of the most outstanding innovations in the digital age. Although the Internet has the potential to make human lives simple and convenient, it also creates issues. This essay discusses the Internet’s two primary problems and proposes solutions.

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The best way to crime committed by young adults is to teach parents parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?

It is true that in today's scenario, the crime rate is increasing day by day which is bone by youngsters to overcome this illegal act the finest method is for parents should teach their adults better skills . Personally, I totally agree with this statement which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs with relevant examples and conclusions.

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Most Countries allow 18 year olds to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In most countries, eighteen-year-old children are allowed to start driving a car. In my opinion, for some reasons, it is better to people begin driving at least on their 25th. Namely, it should let them get wiser, and at eighteen years old they are extremely energetic and full of excitement. On the other hand, some people believe that 18 years old is good to allow them to ride a car.

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Children are facing more pressure nowadys from academic, social and commrcial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Nowadays, there is more pressure on children from academic, social and commercial aspects. In my opinion, many reasons can cause these pressures. Namely, living in the moment is more sophisticated than in the past, and parents force their sons and girls to compete with other adolescents. In fact, families and governments can do some measures that reduce this stress. It will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Nowadays a lot of buildings, such as offices and schools, are now being built with an open plan design. Why is that? Do you see this as a positive or negative development?

In the modern world, interior design terms are well-discussed, and citizens' perspectives have changed. Moreover, most buildings have been built with an open plan design. In my eyes, it would be positive for social communication. This essay will explain two causes for open plan trends and my vision.

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Now a days some parents give money to their children if they perform well at school. Do you think this is good or bad friend ?

While some students are receiving good results, their parents give them money for motivational aspects. There are some advantages and disadvantages associated with this topic. In my opinion, drawbacks can take precedence over the positive aspects.

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In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second hand clothing amongst younger generations. Why is this happening? Do you think it's a positive or negative development?

Recently there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothes among younger people. There are many reasons behind that and I think that it is a good thing as it reduces waste . So it has a positive effect on development. In this , essay I will discuss these reasons.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

I think it is beneficial that goods such as food, clothing, cars and furniture which are produced in certain parts of the world are available in other parts of the globe too which is leading to an increasing similarity in countries.

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Some people say government should give health care the first priorities , some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers' money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people started to discuss governments’ priority on tax spending. Some believe that health care is the most pivotal, while others contend that the government should emphasise other targets which are more critical. In the following paragraphs, both views will be discussed. Additionally, I will express my perspective on the issue as well.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In general, developing countries tend to have more young people than the old, which is usually regarded as a preferable situation for the economy. In fact, India where its population is dramatically increasing with a high rate of young nations is experiencing an enormous economical rise. However, some experts in non-governmental organisations often argue that the too high birth rate in a country causes many serious issues. In the following paragraphs, I would like to discuss the positive and negative sides of being a young country.

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Films and computers games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effect on society and should be banned. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a popular trend that with the fast progress of the society, some violence plots are added into films and computer games. This situation heated a discussion, some people held conventional opinions that it has many bad influences, but an escalating category of people prefer to think it is harmless which I totally agree with. In the following essay, my contention will be further scrutinized.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile app is becoming increasingly common. Does this development are having more advantages or disadvantages?

As technology progresses, it has been increasingly more common to purchase items through mobile apps as opposed to using physical money in some nations. From my perspective, although there are certain issues regarding this innovation, the merits rather outweigh the demerits.

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